your first bar..."raps leave the best shook a couple left hooks"...compared to: scroggins beat Deth? How youngster? My opening bars gotcha plowed under put fists tuh ya beef like cow punchers! Go HAM ASS like SOW BUMPERS Is a overkill victory for me. "raps leave the best shook..." indicates that YOU ARE NOT THE BEST AND YOU KNOW IT. You go against the best and then you shake them...which doesn't mean you're the best. You just shook them. They can shake you back. Harder. Better. However. My bars hit with multis, rhyme scheme, sound manipulations visuals creativity metaphors simile and a single double rhyme scheme with punches every 1/4 bar. I threw 4 punches in the space you threw one. On beat for most mid tempo beats, btw. Furthermore, my punches were fresher and used sharper, more unusual visuals with superior vocabulary and superior humor PLUS superior viciousness sports punches, three pointer bars and schemes are very common. Find one person who spit a bar about fists to beef/cow punchers. Find one person who spit HAM ASS/SOW BUMPERS Find one person who throws punches on the 1/4 bar except for me and a select few others And I didn't even address the other bars, which completely wreck your opener with overkill elevated material. The punches, the knowledge, the visuals, the creativity, the freshness, the word selection, the sound manipulation, the rhyme scheme, all AMPLIFY from that point. Without ego, you're like a White Belt sparring a Grandmaster. You literally lack the knowledge to see know and rdly you'd been killed and how much I held back on you.