Discussion in 'GRB - '13 Grand Royal Audio Battle' started by J o o k, Jul 29, 2013.
Great writing, Walt, but you sound uh...uncomfortable.
Vote's going to Nudes
Gotta go with noodles just overall all around came better.... walt had lines but needs to work more on flow
No offense, Walt... but it felt 'sluggish' on your end.. OK bars, very lackluster type of delivery the whole way through. Didn't find anything that caught my ear in the way of a good bar, just 'meh' material. Production could use some work, as well as presence. Flow was monotonous. Overall, seemed lazily done.
Noodles, good effort. Interesting scheme, refreshingly executed. Cool delivery. Flow was well structured throughout, and the production was clean. If I could see anything critical about your track it'd be the beat change... sort of lost me there, but for the overall track, it was enjoyable.
Noodles with the better overall approach.
Over all performance & sound will go to - Noodles -
Walt has the write idea for being a problem tho...
Noodles wrecked shop, period. Nice showing, Walt - unfortunately you caught Noodles at his absolute best. Keep at it dude - this was a tough first round matchup.
Walt has a different type of flow, I can dig it. Nice lil wordplay too, but I got this one going to Noodles off pure flow and delivery.
My 6 votes:
Noodles- That beat is so ill, LMFAO at the intro. WD's 40, noone is dancing to waltz, your entire catalog is 1st round loses lmfao, I died at at the mickey line, corner markets, UP line was sick, beat switch is sick. Next round you should holler at J Keeper. I came out a lady?.
Walt Dissme- Beat is more for a song then a battle, but not bad. I just think you didnt approach it well. Bars way too long. Youre trying to jam too much word play in there without it flowing well. You had some decent lines, but they get overshadowed from how you delivered them. Id brush up your writing technique.
Lol, Lady & the Tramp line didn't hit for @Newportz or @DefKnotEmo
But men do in fact come out of female vaginas.
lmao, Nah I listened to the verse like 15 times when it was first posted...I got the real meaning the first 3 or 4 times and then hearing it started to make me crack up...
"I came out a lady." Oh really, are you post op or dyke?
I know emo had the same thought
ratings are 1-5
track presense: 5
ratings are 1-5
I can confirm
My serratus teeth bonesaw, so raw
That shit came off so cold. Flow over the second beat was fucking awesome but I don't think it fits the battle thing.
I appreciate's walt verse because he went in with the word play better than most are even trying. I like having to pay attention.... A few I didn't like but otherwise good writing. The flow and delivery wasn't there and could have accentuated a little differently to get the lines across.
I give this to noodles though he was on point
Appreciate all the listens and comments and feedback.
@Walt Dissme thanks for keeping it real behind the scenes, and I hope the feedback here is valuable to you. Nice battling you.
I can appreciate Walt's approach...I love the focus on wordplay. My advice would be to maybe pick a faster beat, sounds like you are slowing your flow down to fit it. Definitely improved from the last time I heard you though
Noodles more polished than ever...feel like he pulls out his best vs the best. Looking forward to future rounds
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