New artist looking for feedback

Discussion in 'Introduce Yourself' started by A-Major, Sep 7, 2015.

  1. A-Major

    A-Major New Member

    Sep 7, 2015
    Hey I'm fairly new to the rap scene and I'm looking for feedback wherever I can get it.
    Most of what I have aren't really songs. They're just lines that I write down and there are more that I haven't written down. I also don't really use/have any audio to base these off of.

    I don't like guns in my city
    They're heavy and primitive
    I load my arms with knowledge
    So on the mic I'm killing it

    I am entertaining elevating
    No doubt this bar I'm raising
    Setting new highs and lows
    Face it you find my s*** Entertaining
    Can't help but enjoy but listen
    To the bars I'm laying
    So imma go on blazing

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