65. Auma Wynn Vs 66. M. Bezzle

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Rod Dinero

    Rod Dinero New Member

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    in

    goin near the limit

    g/l nig'a
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  3. Rod Dinero

    Rod Dinero New Member

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    Lets get it poppin

    Look...
    Bezzle's a fuckin homo, cocks constantly found in you
    Catchin more back shots, than J-Rock on south central
    Could drop a verse of quotables, but im the type to be fair
    Cuz even sportscenter, cant match the highlights in your hair
    I'd fight but ur scared, leave son lost, u claimed tough, dog?
    Thought maybe u were born with it, then ya maybelline rubbed off
    Uppercutted into the solar system, its how im sunning kids
    N u'll defy gravity so hard, it'll put your ass on punishment
    You ride on 20 inches, not sayin ya whip is flaming
    Only mentioned in gay chats...bragging how much u take in
    When we said that u suck, it was prolly bad news
    Dont just need better quality, u should cop all Talib's albums
    I listened to your tape, it was so plain wit filler
    Made me wanna cut my deck in half, faster than vegas dealers
    Was always known for losing, this is a turn for another
    It's true history repeats itself, n yours has a permanent stutter
    Is this the bar count or era? somethin was chosen
    we said 20 to 30 ish....like the years ya punches were wroten
    Dont cop pleas now, a few of these jerks were ripped with rhymes
    instead of punished wit bars...he'd take community service anytime
    Im a problem, and even the true thugs all know
    Aum not just a threat to Mankind...but Cactus Jack n Dude Love also
    There's two kinds of people, i asked tons of brothas
    Good n Evil...but since he's wack, Bezzle's a mean mutha fucka
    Why dont u go get a life? this coward is so soft
    If given 24 hrs. to live...he'd just pump Mase till he croaked off
    Bitches attracted to phat chains, even tho ya moms a fast, dame
    Your ass gon have to work a lot harder...to get my last name
    Im known for flossing, u should work on ya raps, sonny
    The crowd's watchin me rock the bezzle, like Baby from Cash Money

    Look At They Faces!!!!
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  5. Jury Duty

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  6. Jury Duty

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    Coo.....




    They say some criticize 4 my knives thata leave u shanked up
    then im known to go 4 broke.......until ya bones bankrupt
    shoulda thought sbout no showin,woulda been ya best fate
    stick a knife in ya pecs...
    til its no leftovers on ya chest plate
    dont undastand why this kid wants this beef
    cuz our skills r as close together as Michael Strahans front teeth
    goin down on mens ya hobby how can u be considered a rapper
    when i always see wynnslow like im obsessed wit family matters
    in this bout i cant be topped,ill jus do what i wanna
    cuz i have no worries ni99a.....................Akunamattatta
    i stay up on the block....jus dishin dem dimes out
    while this bitch is jus starin at corners.....like kids in timeout
    alike but different...i turn the flames down wen its hot in da house
    its funny, cuz u only do when your out wit ya male spouse
    stop thinkin ya tough, what somebody spiked ya huggie dude?
    would say ya Floe's phat.....but everyone notices shes chubby too
    if you heard my name recently,rumor says that the kids buggin
    cuz i got this bitch wynn playin twister on top of lit ovens
    seen you were on TV,but it was weird cuz it seemed.....
    you were the only guy auditioning for the AppleBottom jeans
    not evident by his verse? then let me repeat it for him
    this kidneys help....like the donating organ to Zo Mourning
    play ya position, before i hook up the mack wit ya vest
    ya crew called mybullets sluts wen dey hada 1nite stand witya chest
    step to dis monster,watch u get hurt, i promise
    tough? this kid never was a fear on the block like Kurt Thomas
    your squad hates ya soft ass,cant even go on tour wit ya men
    cuz when da glocks flash you stay in da cut like Cortizone 10
    was bout to have a pic battle with him,he mighta got killed
    but decided to back out wen he emailed me back callin me a MILF
    dont run in ya house when i come, might get ya moms merked
    am i winnin this battle? Shonuff.....now kiss my Converse
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  7. GhettoSmurf

    GhettoSmurf Ganja Smurf

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    Weak battle overall..

    Auma Wynn- man i wasnt feeling your flow throughout man..it was kinda chopped up cuz..lots of used up shiz.. i reckon if you spent time on 10 lines your punches could have been harder

    M.Bezzle - you had a pretty average flow..some okay punches but you kinda lost your flow near the end man.. but overall is enough to get you thru..

    Vote - M.Bezzle
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  8. Sir Bangalot.

    Sir Bangalot. New Member

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    Both need to elevate some to be contenders for the top 30, but it was about an even battle. But i got Bezzle pulling this one out, close call thou.
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  9. Break it

    Break it TEXTACY

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    gonna roll wit bezzle on this one stayed on for flow and the punches not hard but consistant which wyn didn't do average battle but you're here to work on it so stay up both of ya

    vote-bezzle
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  10. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    pretty decent battle, ya'll are on the same level pretty much. I think Bezzle pulled this one out barely with some harder punches.

    fav line:
    not evident by his verse? then let me repeat it for him
    this kidneys help....like the donating organ to Zo Mourning
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  11. Dee-Zy

    Dee-Zy Free Willy!!!

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    I thought this was a nice battle, too many fillers though

    vote - M Bezzle. Close battle, I just thought he came harder I liked the history/stutter line but Auma had alot of shit that don't even rhyme (bad news/albums) or just doesn't make sense wroten? it's written dude...

    anyways, I liked Bezzle's verse more, it was wittier and funnier lol @ akunamatata... wtf???
    I could see that shit in a battle live. That cracked me off.
    twister line was funny, Kidney was fuckin dope, so was the wynnslow/family matters line.
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  12. cyNic

    cyNic Peace -is- Fiction

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    vote-m-bezzle

    his shit was pretty witty, i liked tha little Applebottom line.lol

    -holla...
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  13. U S E R

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    uppin over no shows
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  14. IDoL ThA WiSE

    IDoL ThA WiSE i am hip hop

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    v-bezzle

    he came his verse was more clean with nicer punchers
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  15. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    long weak battle here.
    Didn't really enjoy the read that much...I'd say each verse was scattered with a couple decent lines here and there.

    Auma...concepts need to be updated, punches were ok though, you worded stuff well enough. NOthing too bad, I think you had about 3-4 punchlines that stand out...maybelline line had potential...but lines like cactus jack an' dude love...shit needs to be more consistent.

    M.Bezzle..nothin' spectacular here. Opener was eh...family matters line was aight, Kurt thomas line was ok, milf line was decent.
    Shit was more consistent than his. You needa up ya punchline content too if you want to reach the top 30 or higher.
    Overall though, you did have the stronger verse.

    Vote=M.Bezzle in a match that was rather close.
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  16. Kanyne

    Kanyne 6x RBL Participant...lol

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    Wynn had the that one punch about the stutter=tight
    Bezzle had the bankrupt punch, the chestplate/leftovers punch, and the kidneys punch was killa. Disappointed in the finish though, thought it woulda been up wit these.
    vote=Bez
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  17. U S E R

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    M. Bezzle wins.

    closed.
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