RBL Wk15: 23. Defcon_5 1-0 vs. 24. Original 1-0

[Defcon_5]

RBL Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-30 lines!
u must agree on an amount in ya check in
& match whatever amount u agree on

-Voting-
5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler.
1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
No Crew Voting!

-General Rules-
--No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
--No editing after BOTH verses are posted
--if u post a no show verse, & ya opponent posts after
u do, then u can't edit another verse in
so get ya editing done before BOTH verses are posted!
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
--No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
--Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend
rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

-Mod AIM Contacts-
Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
Defcon_5 --- T2k1no3
kaLeeF --- k a L e e F n Y

[Defcon_5]

Chiddeck..going 20

[Original]

20 it is

[Original]

An immaculate rover who can dazzle the voters
This is where they feel my flow and decide that the battle is over

Originally Posted by Defcon_5

Chiddeck..going 20

Dog you couldnt beat me on my WORST day
I was LMAO coz thats probably your version of word play
O is a mag hit...pussy, youve never tagged it
If u check his sig you'll see 4 reasons Defcons a faggot
Ur not harmin, no way this kid could rattle me
Only post voters will respect of urs is the rules for the battle league
Ur a fucking faggot, thats why ur style's vastly hammered
Coz when guys pitch a tent Defcon becomes a happy camper
You aint gonna win, ••••• stop wit ur trippin
I'll have you 1-1 so fast u'll think i played Hack-A-Shaq wit ur writtens
Ur avatar had me rollin....tryin not to laugh away
I just thought it was funny ur a 21 yr old black man whose into Anime
Dont contest fam im just the bessssst mannn
You'll think i took out Russel Simmons coz ull never see Def Jam
O has the quick wit, lines to split wit
So much force with my punches ull see 'con-dense' to liquid
Now he wont reply...wont show....dude is speechless
He knows he's goin 'no wear' like a trip to nudist beaches


Holla Back wack text rapper

[Defcon_5]

yawn...this is what i was matched up with this week?


i got a ravenous creed...ur not damagin' me
this is the big boys..go back to ya ameture leagues

-don't speak about flow to me lol-

as stated above don't about flow to me
i'll give u a gap bigger than that bitch's from floetry
gay..bitchy..pussy..just to some words fittin' u
so i'd rather be a flippin biter then to ever be Original
i'm rusty..predicted to lose..but i'm rapin the quota
while you'll leave this duel shocked like playstation controllers
weak wordplay..flipped punches..as much as u try to rhyme
ya verse takes me to the past holding signs sayin welcome to 99
speakin on records..i'm roastin' u brutally
mine will jump a decade while urs go into puberty
u claimed u didn't try..now get ya ass beat
cause this verse is worse than ya no show from last week
he's a ill rhymer..said it twice..we gotcha dude
i'll say it twice ill rhymer..ill rhymer..but so was Dr. Suess
^that's just saying what i'm tryna get u to see
i got a jungle full of rhymes..while ur simply a tree
ur not respected...when i see u i'm laughin bitch
the only O i ever like had rville reddenbaker after it


20 and it's liek that biznitch

[BlackDef]

Yeah man... this shit was pretty one sided

Defcon came fresh as fuck. luv most the verse. Original came pretty good himself but once i got to def's verse everything out did originals best lines which were the leauge rules and def jam lines. But yo def killed it on this one, I'm sorry. Not gone quote all of Def's shit cause allmost every line was close to fire to me.


Vote = Defcon5

[Mr. Skull]

Vote - Def_5


Reason: Fresh verse, the dr. suess line was weak but made me chuckle a bit. Original you got a nice flow, a nice textual flow. But lines had very little substance. Don't sacrifice content for flow, it doesn't help in a battle. Def - you had some cool lines, the ps2 controller line, and the welcome to 99 line. Your problem is that your punches are all set up the same. You might wanna try to seperate em and/or try different ways of throwing punches to show better versatility.

There are my reasons and breakdowns, good battle both..

1ne Hunnid

[Tommy Johnson]

Originally Posted by Original

Dog you couldnt beat me on my WORST day
I was LMAO coz thats probably your version of word play
O is a mag hit...pussy, youve never tagged it
If u check his sig you'll see 4 reasons Defcons a faggot
Ur not harmin, no way this kid could rattle me
Only post voters will respect of urs is the rules for the battle league
Ur a fucking faggot, thats why ur style's vastly hammered
Coz when guys pitch a tent Defcon becomes a happy camper
Ur avatar had me rollin....tryin not to laugh away
I just thought it was funny ur a 21 yr old black man whose into Anime

vs.

Originally Posted by Defcon_5

i'm rusty..predicted to lose..but i'm rapin the quota
while you'll leave this duel shocked like playstation controllers

so yeah, vote - Original


I don't know what battle Black and Skull were reading..

[Tommy Johnson]

Originally Posted by Defcon_5

gay..bitchy..pussy..just to some words fittin' u
so i'd rather be a flippin biter then to ever be Original

ur not respected...when i see u i'm laughin bitch
the only O i ever like had rville reddenbaker after it

those lines were so bad, I don't know what you were thinkin Def..
that name play was so weak.

and O's "feel my flow" line was wack as shit


when are kids gonna stop using the "I can beat you with my text flow" lines?

[Mr. Skull]

Tommy Johnson - since you wanna be a dick and talk shit about MY vote I'ma breakdown every line you thought was good.

Originally Posted by Original
Dog you couldnt beat me on my WORST day
I was LMAO coz thats probably your version of word play
filler^^has no relevance and doesn't diss. Set up doesn't match punch
O is a mag hit...pussy, youve never tagged it
If u check his sig you'll see 4 reasons Defcons a faggot
^^average line. Basically 2 lines to call someone a fag. No creativity
Ur not harmin, no way this kid could rattle me
Only post voters will respect of urs is the rules for the battle league
^^decent personal
Ur a fucking faggot, thats why ur style's vastly hammered
Coz when guys pitch a tent Defcon becomes a happy camper
^^pitching a tent? happy camper? elementary
Ur avatar had me rollin....tryin not to laugh away
I just thought it was funny ur a 21 yr old black man whose into Anime
decent personal

the hack a shaq line was weak, the russell simmons line was ass, "no-wear/ nudist beaches" c'mon man elementary shit.

So don't question my voting if you feel otherwise then that's what your vote is for. But I can guarantee my vote is more credible than your would be here. If your vote isn't the same as mine then vote and leave it at that, but don't bring my name up in your post like I have to see it your way or you have to see it my way. Cause I coulda easily been an asshole to Original and did what I just did. Which was disect his verse completely. Instead I told him what to improve on. I voted the way I voted cause of which had the least amount of failed attempts and which was more direct. That was Defcon_5 both coulda did better but Def made less errors so fuck you, kiss my ass...

[Cre the Amazing]

I was feelin Original's verse... you def had a nice flow up in the joint, it is possibel to flow in text.. had some fresh, no bullshit disses.. the beginning of the verse was real clean.. i thought the 'sig' line and 'rules for the battle league' line were real fresh, the 'happy camper', and 'anime' line were good too... you ended the verse wrong though, the 'condense' and 'nudist' lines were kinda wack... but overall the verse was good, and the concepts were highlighted by the constant smooth flow you held in the verse... Def's shit I only felt a little of, the opening segment wasn't strong at all, the 'gay, bitchy, pussy' shit was mad awkward, and fucked up the flow.. the 'playstation controller' line was good, the 'puberty' line was real fresh... but the 'welcome to 99' and the 'noshow verse' lines weren't anything original, and the 'jungle/tree' and 'orville' lines were wack... another thing, not very important, but you gave the schpeal about flow in the beginning, but you didn't create a better flow in your verse than Original had in his..

Thanks for the good reading, fellas..

Vote - Original

[Halloween Jack]

defcon w/o a doubt took this in my opinion...

gay..bitchy..pussy..just to some words fittin' u
so i'd rather be a flippin biter then to ever be Original
i'm rusty..predicted to lose..but i'm rapin the quota
while you'll leave this duel shocked like playstation controllers
speakin on records..i'm roastin' u brutally
mine will jump a decade while urs go into puberty
u claimed u didn't try..now get ya ass beat
cause this verse is worse than ya no show from last week
he's a ill rhymer..said it twice..we gotcha dude
i'll say it twice ill rhymer..ill rhymer..but so was Dr. Suess
ur not respected...when i see u i'm laughin bitch
the only O i ever like had rville reddenbaker after it

these bars solidified the win for me..
original held it down but def was more powerful in this battle.

[eyedeal]

4-2 Defcon_5

bump

[Original]

acutally its 2-3

[Defcon_5]

yeah O is right 3-2 me..good match O

[Opshins]

Vote-Original

Ya this was a good battle but i got Original edgin it out with a couple punches. Camper and Anime punches were dope from O, Def had the playstation line, good battle both.

[macmilimeterhyms]

original

An immaculate rover who can dazzle the voters
This is where they feel my flow and decide that the battle is over
ok...

Dog you couldnt beat me on my WORST day
I was LMAO coz thats probably your version of word play
not feelin it
O is a mag hit...pussy, youve never tagged it
If u check his sig you'll see 4 reasons Defcons a faggot
ok
Ur not harmin, no way this kid could rattle me
Only post voters will respect of urs is the rules for the battle league
good
Ur a fucking faggot, thats why ur style's vastly hammered
Coz when guys pitch a tent Defcon becomes a happy camper
decent
You aint gonna win, ••••• stop wit ur trippin
I'll have you 1-1 so fast u'll think i played Hack-A-Shaq wit ur writtens
nope
Ur avatar had me rollin....tryin not to laugh away
I just thought it was funny ur a 21 yr old black man whose into Anime
lol good
Dont contest fam im just the bessssst mannn
You'll think i took out Russel Simmons coz ull never see Def Jam
naa b
O has the quick wit, lines to split wit
So much force with my punches ull see 'con-dense' to liquid
lame punch & force with your punches aint good
Now he wont reply...wont show....dude is speechless
He knows he's goin 'no wear' like a trip to nudist beaches
ok closer

defcon5

i got a ravenous creed...ur not damagin' me
this is the big boys..go back to ya ameture leagues
ok

as stated above don't about flow to me
i'll give u a gap bigger than that bitch's from floetry
decent
gay..bitchy..pussy..just to some words fittin' u
so i'd rather be a flippin biter then to ever be Original
good
i'm rusty..predicted to lose..but i'm rapin the quota
while you'll leave this duel shocked like playstation controllers
good
weak wordplay..flipped punches..as much as u try to rhyme
ya verse takes me to the past holding signs sayin welcome to 99
decent
speakin on records..i'm roastin' u brutally
mine will jump a decade while urs go into puberty
ok
u claimed u didn't try..now get ya ass beat
cause this verse is worse than ya no show from last week
nope
he's a ill rhymer..said it twice..we gotcha dude
i'll say it twice ill rhymer..ill rhymer..but so was Dr. Suess
nope
^that's just saying what i'm tryna get u to see
i got a jungle full of rhymes..while ur simply a tree
decent
ur not respected...when i see u i'm laughin bitch
the only O i ever like had rville reddenbaker after it
wack

even though def fell off towards the end he still had better punches than original overall

vote- defcon5

[Imperial]

Original:
Dog you couldnt beat me on my WORST day
I was LMAO coz thats probably your version of word play
O is a mag hit...pussy, youve never tagged it
If u check his sig you'll see 4 reasons Defcons a faggot
Ur not harmin, no way this kid could rattle me
Only post voters will respect of urs is the rules for the battle league
Ur avatar had me rollin....tryin not to laugh away
I just thought it was funny ur a 21 yr old black man whose into Anime
Dont contest fam im just the bessssst mannn
You'll think i took out Russel Simmons coz ull never see Def Jam

These lines were decent.. there were no real good lines, but i thought these were ok..

vs.

Defcon 5:
i got a ravenous creed...ur not damagin' me
this is the big boys..go back to ya ameture leagues
i'm rusty..predicted to lose..but i'm rapin the quota
while you'll leave this duel shocked like playstation controllers

What lost this battle for Def was his wording.. some of the punches were just worded badly.. def just wasnt that original.. the only line i really liked was his opener, it was my fav line of the battle.

Vote: Original

[A-bomb inabowl]

Dont contest fam im just the bessssst mannn
You'll think i took out Russel Simmons coz ull never see Def Jam

Now he wont reply...wont show....dude is speechless
He knows he's goin 'no wear' like a trip to nudist beaches


vs.


ur not respected...when i see u i'm laughin bitch
the only O i ever like had rville reddenbaker after it


Def came hard, but his wording was all kinds of fucked up (misspelling words, and leaving out words) It's a tough call......O's verse was corny, but was more creative, and def just didnt seem like he was trying too hard.....anyway, the nudist beach line won it for original in my opinion

vote-original

[ill nik-A]

I actually thought this was a close match, I felt Def's verse was more direct & Original's had better flow, though Def should be given a dictionary for Christmas, Imma go with Deffy on a squeezer, I liked the dual controller

vote Deffy