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wreck -
hmph, an uemployed textcee... this kid can't get the job done
it's a retorical question to ask if im wack...we all kno it's nah son
-nice
u wannabe a star?...nicca, i'll drop you over with em
n i don't mean hollywood...im talkin bout the solar system
-pretty good, kinda confusing
the dopest shit to hit the streets since crack heads with no toilets
yea...i blaze beats while u barely manage to boil it
-nope
this faggot 'crossed over' when he started to 'skip to my lou'
u beating me?...u have a better chance getting tipped by a •••
-your best line, this shit cracked me up
kid...u're lame and u suck so whut's ya next career move?
u're a deer in my headlights.... n ima steer thru
-doesnt hit
i read ur diaries...i found the key to ur heart
now he's in cardiac arrest, trapped underneath my bars
-doesnt work, wordplay is cool
damn this win is easy....it feels like im 'robbin' this kid today
cuz the only 'steal' u've been holdin is a 2 for 1 giveaway
-decent closer
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nah son-
2-0? lmao ya shits disguised dirt
Not even blink 182 could help eyez verse
-nice opener
son your recklessness hurts forums
used a deer punchline
Dear Punchline, please work for em
-hahah that was hilarious
his names wreck, like he hit the block or this kids hard
he's an artist
with a draw of luck that got him this far
-very nice wordplay
I'll leave a piece of nut hangin from this fags chin
nut, and an L
2 for 1 like Odin signing back in
-decent
you can talk shit but my talent holds ya heart
at my show
you wouldn't give up ya seat in the front like rosa parks
-pretty good
RIP of course ms parks, your memory is stuck with me
u just learned something
1. Rosa is a hero 2. You can't fuck with me
-i like the way you play on your last line, just doesnt really make sense or hit that hard.
I guess you ARE hood, and ganksta but no running
got a lot in common with dipset
Cam got shot, and you shot your cam at Howards homecoming
-don't get this, I don't know who Howard is.
wreck- nice verse, a couple lines that were just not hard hitting and hella corny, but a pretty good verse overall, if you came with harder hittin punches you would have probably won this.
nah son- i like your style and wordplay, the structure of your verse is AWFUL, its annoying as fuck to read and hard to get a flow. BUT your verse was much more hard hitting and had a couple lines that were really sick, which gives you the win. i really think you should cut down on the 3 bar style tho.
vote - nah son
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