RBL North Championship: 1. J o o k 10-3 vs. 2. Super 4-0

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Old 05-03-2005, 02:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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RBL North Championship: 1. J o o k 10-3 vs. 2. Super 4-0




RBL North Rules & Regulations.

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A line is 1 length of the screen.

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Old 05-04-2005, 01:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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in... 24

Here I am nigguh:
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He knows only The Cause."

Win or Die.

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Old 05-04-2005, 04:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 05-06-2005, 01:16 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 05-06-2005, 10:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 05-06-2005, 10:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 05-06-2005, 11:46 PM   #7 (permalink)
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3 bar style, generic ass, played ass, predictable gay n.igga textcee, NICE NAIL THOUGH ON THE 1ST PIC

Check my past three battles but keep ur distance B
Cause god damn, you look like more of a bitch than me
Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money
Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
Now i dont even gotta put Em on my ipod, we breakin limits
If i wanted a sick 'nail in the coffin ill' just bury ya body in it
That record only shows that this nig aint truly felt
Shit, I got less chins than he got losses under his belt
We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl
My bullets'll knock ya cap off and you cant see me
When yall see the B. Coming, it aint that new shit from Beanie
You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area
What're those hieroglyphics on ya clothes, im bein sincere
Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga, at least it aint my gear
Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive manuever
Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost

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Old 05-06-2005, 11:52 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Wtf duke? YOU GIVE ME A SHIRTLESS PIC bitch.

Another bitch move son WOW... Fuck a oz fuck a super fuck you niggus son......


FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..
I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
You give me goosebumps,
With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...
My bars hail shine, your verse is soft an bare..
Ya chins need so much Nip - Tuck
They had to take the tv series off the air.
I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
But when reality STRIKES,
Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..
The probs to real, and we know the kids scary,
He'll stage a disappearance,
...like the bitch who didn't want to get married....
The hits weary, you know I'm heartless son...
Cos once I hit you,
4 rights will put you back where you started from...
You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
You're so attached to OZ,
On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..
So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..
The falls heavy, so leave! it's either that or ya dead..
Cos J o o k stays on top of shit ... like the hat on your head...
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He knows only The Cause."

Win or Die.

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Old 05-06-2005, 11:52 PM   #9 (permalink)
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******* = w e t b a c k

19. Oz 0-0 vs. 20. Catchphrase 0-0
21. Odin. 0-0 vs. 22. Mic Booth 0-0
Hades 0-0 vs. Tim-God 0-0
PMX And1 4-2 vs. MiC 1-1
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"Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home.
He knows only The Cause."

Win or Die.

Still want to quit?

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Old 05-06-2005, 11:56 PM   #10 (permalink)
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FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..


holy shit hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahahahah
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Old 05-06-2005, 11:58 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
But when reality STRIKES,
Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..
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Old 05-07-2005, 12:17 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money
Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl
You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area
Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive manuever
Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost


Quote:
Originally Posted by J o o k
FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..
I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
You give me goosebumps,
With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...
You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
You're so attached to OZ,
On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..


overall
pretty coo battle...expected more pic dissed but wuteva...both came nice...jook's opener wuz nice...mexican independence made me laugh...reality strikes wuz an ok flip of my line I used against super a minute ago...super had more lines I liked overall...line of battle wuz jooks opener...but super had more nice lines...


vote=super

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Old 05-07-2005, 12:40 AM   #13 (permalink)
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I will break down thoroughly to ensure fairness. And for the record, Ive voted against Super in every title shot he ever had lol.


Super *****wod

Check my past three battles but keep ur distance B
Cause god damn, you look like more of a bitch than me

Good opener, and ... true.

Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money

Good, poor multi

Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage

no no, not good

Now i dont even gotta put Em on my ipod, we breakin limits
If i wanted a sick 'nail in the coffin ill' just bury ya body in it

aight, bit of a stretch, wtf @ that Freddy Kruger nail tho

That record only shows that this nig aint truly felt
Shit, I got less chins than he got losses under his belt

ok

We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl

Good, I like gun lines

My bullets'll knock ya cap off and you cant see me
When yall see the B. Coming, it aint that new shit from Beanie

Aiiiight, not great

You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area

aiiiiight

What're those hieroglyphics on ya clothes, im bein sincere
Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga, at least it aint my gear

no no

Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive manuever

Good

Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost

Very good

Flow was kind of boring, as were multis, but the punches were actually pretty good throughout. One of the best verses I seen you write, without me...that is. Nothing come off as really dope, but consistently good, which is better than a lacking verse. Decent effort.

J O O K

FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..

Aight, Ive seen 10,000 variations of this, usually with a raft tho

I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
You give me goosebumps,
With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...

Very good

My bars hail shine, your verse is soft an bare..
Ya chins need so much Nip - Tuck
They had to take the tv series off the air.

Horrible wordplay, really dont make any kind of sense. Needed to be put together differently

I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
But when reality STRIKES,
Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..

No thanks, played to death

The probs to real, and we know the kids scary,
He'll stage a disappearance,
...like the bitch who didn't want to get married....

Good

The hits weary, you know I'm heartless son...
Cos once I hit you,
4 rights will put you back where you started from...

Uh, no no

You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
You're so attached to OZ,
On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..

Very stretched, and pointless. Not even because Im involved, but the fact that the line is irrelevent to anything

So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..

I liked this alot

The falls heavy, so leave! it's either that or ya dead..
Cos J o o k stays on top of shit ... like the hat on your head...

Pretty played

At first read, I though JOOK won, then after I read both a few times, I have had a change of heart like the Game. Anyway, Jooks had the better lines, with the Bra line and the R L Stine shit, but his lows were way lower and more frequent that Supers.
Super was more consistent, not that I base battles on consistency, but all around he got this.

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Old 05-07-2005, 12:48 AM   #15 (permalink)
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super came alot stronger than i thought he was gonna....

You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area

LMAO very nice.....


Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost

quality closer..i liked alot....


Jook was just plain and simply funny as fuck....


FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...that was the best line of the battle hands down...


I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
You give me goosebumps,
With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...

haha nice....


So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..

comedy...haha loved that...


this was a really good title match..whoever wins will have eraned there title in this one..

but i gotta give the edge to jook...simply because i luaghed out loud at alot of his lines...his comedy value won me over...



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Old 05-07-2005, 03:59 AM   #16 (permalink)
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I move that oz vote discredited. Being super openly admits to him ghostwriting for him.

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Win or Die.

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Check my past three battles but keep ur distance B
Cause god damn, you look like more of a bitch than me
1 you look like more of a bitch actually

Ya go without a shirt cause ya so fucking poor dunny
We can all tell last week wasnt your first struggle with money
2 haha what can I say

Im going to the top while ya slumping, watch my leverage
My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
0 his winning percentage above 70 so you must be a fat fuck

Now i dont even gotta put Em on my ipod, we breakin limits
If i wanted a sick 'nail in the coffin ill' just bury ya body in it
1.5

That record only shows that this nig aint truly felt
Shit, I got less chins than he got losses under his belt
1

We know how ya got ur spot, i want mine back, ill get it with shells
So watch me as i put a couple magazines to the 'head' of the rbl
1.5

My bullets'll knock ya cap off and you cant see me
When yall see the B. Coming, it aint that new shit from Beanie
2 heh

You aint approved by the masses, how ya farin brah?
See, people DO want you to be cut..just more in the wrist area
2.5

What're those hieroglyphics on ya clothes, im bein sincere
Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga, at least it aint my gear
1 you are wearing a sweater with writing on it

Ya won't 'defend' that title of yours, dude you's a loser
Since everyone knows a Jook is an offensive maneuver
1 played

Ill be the first credible champ and i dont mean to boast
You dont deserve an Oz. of respect, i didnt even need him to ghost
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14.5/ 33
super had a verse that just dissed himself the whole time especially the body fat percentage


FUCKKKK a mexican, I'm about to make tragedy splendor..
While you take the Backseat to success.... with 8 other family members..
3 made me laugh

I'll happily bend ya, I'm known to gnawl frail spines..
You give me goosebumps,
With more ghosted text ... then R.L. Stine...
2.5 I remember rl stein

My bars hail shine, your verse is soft an bare..
Ya chins need so much Nip - Tuck
They had to take the tv series off the air.
2 bad wording but fresh

I caught the flare, you just tryna not get killed..
But when reality STRIKES,
Atleast you'll still have work, picking crops in fields..
1.5

The probs to real, and we know the kids scary,
He'll stage a disappearance,
...like the bitch who didn't want to get married....
3 lmao

The hits weary, you know I'm heartless son...
Cos once I hit you,
4 rights will put you back where you started from...
2.5 this has to be the wittiest line i've seen this week

You garbage slut, I'm here to end ya vengence..
You're so attached to OZ,
On Cinco De Mayo, you couldnt even celebrate Mexican Independence..
2.5 lol

So in the endin kid, I got the bombs ready...
This broke ******* will need a change cup... like when his bra's sweaty..
2.5 lol

The falls heavy, so leave! it's either that or ya dead..
Cos J o o k stays on top of shit ... like the hat on your head...
1 eck

20.5 / 27
jook pretty much devoured super from the start

lol @ super getting some votes it just shows how the league is fucked up nowadays

jook took this easily

vote = jook
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Aight pretty nice champ battle ,not the best ive seen but nice. Both of yall had some nice punches, some more than others... but Super, u cant expect to win when ur dissin urself in half of your own verse. Heres what im talkin about....
"you look like more of a bitch than me
My body fat is higher than your fucking winning percentage
Yeah i get my shit written ni.gga"

Why have a pic battle if your gonna spend more time dissin yourself than your opponent? The cut line was ill, the sturggle with money, and the magazine line was nice... but i dunno about all that previously stated stuff...

J o o k, u came alot more direct, the mexican jokes were killer... your opener killed it, and the hat line at the end was sick as well. Basically a verse filled with a lot more wittyness and cleverness throughout each punch n personal.

Punches- J o o k
Personals - Tie
Multies- J o o k
Metas - J o o k
Flow- J o o k
Overall - J o o k

kinda one sided to me... can someone fill me in on this ghost writing situation??? i didnt even know it was legal...

VOTE = J o o k

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Old 05-07-2005, 10:42 AM   #19 (permalink)
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vote jook

he had more standout lines like the cups line, independence line, RL stine line.
flow was on point. overall nice verse.

super didn't say anything that made me laugh or anything really.

good battle.
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Old 05-07-2005, 11:24 AM   #20 (permalink)
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Mahatma. takes it up the butt!
I was gonna vote on this battle but I am very attracted t