RBL North Championship: 1. J o o k 9-3 vs. 2. $1.50 5-0

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Old 04-26-2005, 09:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 04-27-2005, 12:30 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 04-29-2005, 05:42 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 04-29-2005, 06:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
your verses are Ideal
nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
check me there's no competition between you an me fool
your moms such a slut
your genes are more like a community pool
rbl mod? who cares when you gay
I'll flip ya name backwards
then give two L's to this Koo J
dont test me joke, you'll get chopped by the game
(jook 9-3 vs $1.50 5-0)
^ look bitch theres no loss by my name
I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
it's just funny
people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
don't think I won't bend ya frame
then have the voters sayin
more OOO's - - - then in ya name
this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you
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Old 04-29-2005, 06:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
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J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!J o o k will do you doggie style!
Word cool verse nigguh, I'll post tonight when I get home.
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He knows only The Cause."

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Old 04-29-2005, 09:23 PM   #6 (permalink)
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You shouldn't be here, so I'ma end it through vengence..
They respect the mag more,
Cos I've never mentioned you in it...


-chea-
WACK BITCH!!!! I'ma kill you, face it thug..
$$ doesn't equal happiness,
But in your boyfriends case it does...
I got your heart racin son, blame the eightys..
I'll fuck up your mental,
Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
been in the league,
Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
You're the record holder,
For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
Chea hold it yall, Cos I'm stashin the glock..
The closest you'll come,
To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
You the last in the flock, nigguh FUCK YA RHYMES..
I just gave you a reason to cry,
And it wasn't cos I didn't show up on time....


NIGGGGGGUUUUHHHHHHHH
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He knows only The Cause."

Win or Die.

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Old 04-30-2005, 05:43 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 04-30-2005, 01:39 PM   #8 (permalink)
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jook, u got a dope style, cassidy esque but you fuck it up wit that 3 bar shit....if u eliminate that, cuz that fucks up the delivery, you'd own the league
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Old 04-30-2005, 02:25 PM   #9 (permalink)
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his 3 lines dont fuck it up
yall just look atthe way its typed up and think its bad
thats whats wrong with u mufuckas
yall dont look at whats said
you dont like it cuz it dont stretch across the screen
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Old 04-30-2005, 02:50 PM   #10 (permalink)
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jook, u got a dope style, cassidy esque but you fuck it up wit that 3 bar shit....if u eliminate that, cuz that fucks up the delivery, you'd own the league
Word I hear you on that, I kinda like the 3-lines usage for mis-direcretional punches, but yea it would be better if i shortened the lines to 2 I presume good looks. Word @ H deezy..


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Old 04-30-2005, 05:02 PM   #11 (permalink)
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his 3 lines dont fuck it up
yall just look atthe way its typed up and think its bad
thats whats wrong with u mufuckas
yall dont look at whats said
you dont like it cuz it dont stretch across the screen
are you retarded, wtf u speakin to a GOAT for, haha...


i hate the stretched shit even worse, but both ways fuck the flow up.....period, not speakin to ya jook, just this dumbass who doesnt know what helpful criticism and a compliment is



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Old 04-30-2005, 05:44 PM   #12 (permalink)
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1.50

check me there's no competition between you an me fool
your moms such a slut
your genes are more like a community pool
rbl mod? who cares when you gay
I'll flip ya name backwards
then give two L's to this Koo J

koo J line was nice...good thought.... and the community pool was just nasty...

I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
it's just funny
people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses

ha cool personal...

the closer was cool as well... very good flow and the punches was nice....

JOOK

You shouldn't be here, so I'ma end it through vengence..
They respect the mag more,
Cos I've never mentioned you in it...

nice feed...good flip

So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
been in the league,
Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
You're the record holder,
For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....

all ill.....and closer was superb....

BREAKDOWN....

both came nice....I thought 1 50 was going to take it with some complex punches but JOOK came back with somethign nice and this is what a championship suppose to look like..great battle but..IMO

My vote JOOK...
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Old 04-30-2005, 10:00 PM   #13 (permalink)
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jook wrecked this shit. nice.
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Old 05-01-2005, 12:28 AM   #14 (permalink)
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buck 50

your moms such a slut
your genes are more like a community pool
nice
I'll flip ya name backwards
then give two L's to this Koo J
nice nameplay
it's just funny
people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
good personal


jook

I'll fuck up your mental,
Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
haha, good use of his name 'n record
You're the record holder,
For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
hahaha
It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
nasty
The closest you'll come,
To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
dope


really good champ match. i was feelin both verses, but one more than the other. buck 50 had a solid verse with good bars but jook out-did him with more. thats basically what decided this.. consistency is key in all of the aspects.

vote- jook
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Old 05-01-2005, 03:06 AM   #15 (permalink)
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1 50 had some cool shit, but jook's verse was a little funnier and a bit wittier, i just felt more of jooks lines, but yea 150 did his thing.. j o o k had enough good shit to take it, i could see it going either way though...but yea, i got jook edging it. props to both

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Old 05-01-2005, 01:36 PM   #16 (permalink)
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1.50:
trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
your verses are Ideal
nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
eh
check me there's no competition between you an me fool
your moms such a slut
your genes are more like a community pool
haha, nice
rbl mod? who cares when you gay
I'll flip ya name backwards
then give two L's to this Koo J
i thought of this when i battled him awhile ago but never wanted to use it, it's not bad, pretty good nameflip
dont test me joke, you'll get chopped by the game
(jook 9-3 vs $1.50 5-0)
^ look bitch theres no loss by my name
this was gay and terrible
I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
it's just funny
people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
k
don't think I won't bend ya frame
then have the voters sayin
more OOO's - - - then in ya name
lol...i dunno about this one
this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you
this was good


Jook:

-chea-
WACK BITCH!!!! I'ma kill you, face it thug..
$$ doesn't equal happiness,
But in your boyfriends case it does...
good line
I got your heart racin son, blame the eightys..
I'll fuck up your mental,
Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
clever
So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
been in the league,
Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
this was ok
I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
You're the record holder,
For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
aight
This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
surprised i havent seen this flipped more, this was pretty cool
Chea hold it yall, Cos I'm stashin the glock..
The closest you'll come,
To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
clever nameplay
You the last in the flock, nigguh FUCK YA RHYMES..
I just gave you a reason to cry,
And it wasn't cos I didn't show up on time....
aight

this battle was one sided to me. 1.50, you were inconsistent, you had some straight forward punches which DID hit, but you had that losses by your name thing which i thought was trash. The gene pool was tight though. Jook came pretty solid though, the nameflips were good, unfortunately for .50 i haven't been around lately and they might be played, but they were fresh to me.
striaght battle.
vote-Jook
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trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
your verses are Ideal
nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you

personals always shine in battles like this
and 1.50 def had a few nice ones


jook

So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
been in the league,
Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
You're the record holder,
For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...

best lines from jook
and with that said i think he took this in
a pretty close match..


v/jook
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trust me dude, no riders are going to pick you up
your verses are Ideal
nope, that's just the dudes dick you suck
--ok
check me there's no competition between you an me fool
your moms such a slut
your genes are more like a community pool
--nah
rbl mod? who cares when you gay
I'll flip ya name backwards
then give two L's to this Koo J
--iigh
dont test me joke, you'll get chopped by the game
(jook 9-3 vs $1.50 5-0)
^ look bitch theres no loss by my name
---nah
I keep it all in perspective i'll wreck ya nervous
it's just funny
people respect the mag more then they respect ya verses
--lol
don't think I won't bend ya frame
then have the voters sayin
more OOO's - - - then in ya name
---nah
this is the end of the verse, dont be restless dude
we all know the Troublesome in ya life got the best of you
---eh, ok

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WACK BITCH!!!! I'ma kill you, face it thug..
$$ doesn't equal happiness,
But in your boyfriends case it does...
---lol
I got your heart racin son, blame the eightys..
I'll fuck up your mental,
Cos you bout to be 5-1, 50.. the code name for crazy..
--nah
So bitch pay me, or I'll trash ya life...
been in the league,
Twice as long as you.. no wonder your half as nice..
--nah
I'm brash and hyped, and your outta rhymes..
You're the record holder,
For most bitch moves in the shortest amount of time...
--lol....tho itd be super
This is sheerly out of grime, KNOW IT dog....
It takes blood, sweat, and tears to win,
...... I'ma make your body show it ALL....
---lol..nice
Chea hold it yall, Cos I'm stashin the glock..
The closest you'll come,
To fillin my shoes.... Is the cash in my sock...
---nah
You the last in the flock, nigguh FUCK YA RHYMES..
I just gave you a reason to cry,
And it wasn't cos I didn't show up on time....
---eh, ok

close battle....v-jook tho....some of his best lines were just better than 50's
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