I'm Deon 1-0 Vs. PENALTY 0-1

-Oz- · 02-07-2005, 04:01 PM

RBL North Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due Friday night 12:00 Pacific time.
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 10:00 EST
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
A line is 1 length of the screen.

-Voting-
5 Votes per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 100 posts.
No 1 line voting!

-General Rules-
--No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask
--No editing after BOTH verses are posted
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
--No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP
--Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

-Mod AIM Contacts-
Oz --- JayGood259oz
Super --- x Hazmat x
Blackdef --- Yo Boi Curt
Tekneek --- Tekneek2006

I'm Deon · 02-07-2005, 04:57 PM

Ready to lose dun dun?

12.
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post11156163
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post11156110
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post11142094
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post11142033
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post11156197
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post11176198

Orange407County · 02-07-2005, 05:02 PM

i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com
you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches?
watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in..
make it harder ta' breathe like fab did
u tryina meet boys here?
internet fags is your favorite shit..
i got the talent..
'n you got his pics on ya favorites list
voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse
you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
think u hard cause u plastered..
like we cant punch holes in walls
i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy
i'll bury you 2 ft..
that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi?
shit, im on topic..i might burn ya..
this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna
lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you..
plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too
we can go blast, but if you see me pull it?
bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet
this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted

blah...

headless verseman · 02-07-2005, 06:08 PM

hahaah, that last line is fucking retro as hell......thats a good line

should be a dope match, and i dont know who either of these aliases is

I'm Deon · 02-07-2005, 06:37 PM

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=835623

syn champed this league, back when my pops was around,
nd if he was alive man,
he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/
and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist
since i broke ya streak last time we faced...
now i'll help you get another 1 started/
Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom,
but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle...
if we faught in frodos living room/
Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
Hoes say he AIM's to please first
with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/
Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth,
you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/
My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest,
but fall back for the real men...
like super when blackdef got modded/
dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
shoulda stuck with what you had...
now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/

I'm Deon · 02-07-2005, 06:58 PM

7. Synthesis (8-0) vs. 8. Oliver_Thenet (6-2)

^ the fuck at that not workin

Worst Enemy · 02-07-2005, 07:07 PM

Deon won.

Why?

Quote:

Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
Hoes say he AIM's to please first
with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/

Quote:

dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
shoulda stuck with what you had...
now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/

Much harder verse.
Vote - I'm Deon

perma frost · 02-07-2005, 07:18 PM

huh i dont think so lmfao
vote l8r

MFB · 02-07-2005, 07:20 PM

Good battle here but clearly there was an obvious winner...

Penalty, i wasn't honestly feelin' your verse to much man, seriously i seen you come alot harder but it just seems like you got outshined here real bad. You had some good punches and shit but they didnt connect as hard as I'm Deon's did

I'm Deon, real strong verse, your punches along with personals hit hard and you also had more LOL lines then your opponent. The aim line was tight along with your closer. you did feed off his verse with the "naming people" but that doesnt matter cause the rest of your verse made up for it

vote- I'm Deon

J Dot C · 02-07-2005, 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orange407County

i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com

Quote:

Originally Posted by I'm Deon

Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
Hoes say he AIM's to please first
with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
shoulda stuck with what you had...
now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/

overall
deon won...had better lines...big curves wuz my fav of tha 3 I liked...

vote=deon

1Ne

perma frost · 02-07-2005, 10:16 PM

an aim line ?
good thing the league restarted i guess its original now

the closer was bad, yeah the ratio line
big curves wasnt good,
oc line was pretty cool

penalty had the closer
chicks wit dicks, pretty matched
but a few more decent lines

the epi lines werent doing it though

vote - penalty

castro'DAMUS · 02-07-2005, 11:00 PM

voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse

this was the line of the battle,

Syn's style is fucking second to none on this shit, dude has like a DipSet Text swagger, haha shits appealing as all hell

honestly, people need to start looking at more than just who had the better lines, syn's shit was more appealing, better flow, concepts were fresher, all that shit...

he showed that a battle verse does not have to be all "setup - punch" and shit all the time

fuck what yall are seeing, syn got this...

VOTE - Penalty aka Syn

I'm Deon · 02-07-2005, 11:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by castro'DAMUS

honestly, people need to start looking at more than just who had the better lines,

Wait, so if you have the better lines you STILL lose? Thats a new one pal.
why would you look past the BETTER lines?

with that sad though.

3-2

props and g'luck to syn syn

perma frost · 02-07-2005, 11:54 PM

your lines sucked dude, hes saying look outside the box though
its about the overall verse and style and appeal

syns got some original ass formatting, it all fits well
that verse was dope as fuck either way though

iLLweezy · 02-08-2005, 11:00 AM

Syn - Verse was dope as hell. Flow was onpoint, and you were consistent with the disses. "The Talent" line was crazy. At first I didn't understand, then I gave it a 2nd look, and BOOM! Shit was fire. Had me laughin' my ass off with this kid in my computer class right now. Then you came with that Epi line, and that was raw. Soiunded nice, and a fresh concept to use. I didn't like the Serge line or the Speeding Bullet line. But the closer was crazy. Made me laugh, and another fresh concept. Dope verse.

I'm Deon - What suddenly turned me away from you verse was the fact that you played off his verse your very first line. That was just horrible. But you came back with the streak line, and that was very nice personal/punch combination. Flow was on point, and you have consistancy. I don't like how you utalize that style in text writing, though. Just doesn't appeal to me.

Overall - Syn shows he's more comfortable with that style, and it's not about punches. His verse flowed perfectly, and he came at his opponent time and time again, not stopping once. He had more appealing lines, while keeping in mind a sick flow and a creative choice of words

Line of the Match: Syn
"voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse"
LMFAO!!

Vote - Syn

Vote on mine when it goes up against Calefaction

-Weez

Dukane · 02-08-2005, 11:08 AM

Orange County

i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com
lol
you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches?
watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in..
make it harder ta' breathe like fab did
lol
u tryina meet boys here?
internet fags is your favorite shit..
i got the talent..
'n you got his pics on ya favorites list
lol
voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse
aiight
you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
think u hard cause u plastered..
like we cant punch holes in walls
ohhh
i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy
i'll bury you 2 ft..
that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi?
Damn
shit, im on topic..i might burn ya..
this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna
lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you..
plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too
ok
we can go blast, but if you see me pull it?
bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet
this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted
ok

I'm Deon

syn champed this league, back when my pops was around,
nd if he was alive man,
he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/
ok
and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist
since i broke ya streak last time we faced...
now i'll help you get another 1 started/
nice
Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom,
but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle...
if we faught in frodos living room/
eh..
Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
Hoes say he AIM's to please first
with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
nice
was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
nice
im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/
hahaha
Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth,
you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/
eh..
My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
eh..
and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest,
but fall back for the real men...
like super when blackdef got modded/
aiight
dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
shoulda stuck with what you had...
now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/
nice

Vote = OC

eyedeal · 02-08-2005, 11:11 AM

vote = penalty

i wasn't really feelin some of the concepts I'm Deon posted
some were a lil' too basic compared to penalty's shit
it was a lil' close tho
i just felt like penalty wanted the win more than Deon did
with lines like this it's hard to lose...

Quote:

Originally Posted by penalty

you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
think u hard cause u plastered..
like we cant punch holes in walls

Quote:

Originally Posted by penalty

this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted

good battle, holla

TeNk · 02-08-2005, 03:39 PM

bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com
nah IM deon lines are played as fuck against him.

you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches?
watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in..
make it harder ta' breathe like fab did
eh.

u tryina meet boys here?
internet fags is your favorite shit..
i got the talent..
'n you got his pics on ya favorites list
coo.

voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse
aight.

you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
think u hard cause u plastered..
like we cant punch holes in walls
ok.

i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy
i'll bury you 2 ft..
that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi?
nice.

shit, im on topic..i might burn ya..
this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna
no.
lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you..
plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too
well i dont know the personal, so i cant say much

we can go blast, but if you see me pull it?
bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet
na.

this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted
coo closer.

syn champed this league, back when my pops was around,
nd if he was alive man,
he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/
ok.

and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist
since i broke ya streak last time we faced...
now i'll help you get another 1 started/
eh.

Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom,
but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle...
if we faught in frodos living room/
no

Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
Hoes say he AIM's to please first
with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
cool
was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
lol

im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/
nice.

Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth,
you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/
nah.

My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
no...

and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest,
but fall back for the real men...
like super when blackdef got modded/
damn lol.

dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
shoulda stuck with what you had...
now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/
nice closer.

v-deon.

Orange407County · 02-08-2005, 11:28 PM

word word..

links:

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post11141650
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post11144007
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post11155164
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post11155176
Alpha Omni 1-0 Vs. Rawkus 1-0
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post11163453

02-07-2005, 04:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,593	I'm Deon 1-0 Vs. PENALTY 0-1 RBL North Rules & Regulations. -Duedates- All Verses due Friday night 12:00 Pacific time. All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 10:00 EST (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches) -Line Limit- All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets) A line is 1 length of the screen. -Voting- 5 Votes per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all. Voting is open to anyone with at least 100 posts. No 1 line voting! -General Rules- --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask --No editing after BOTH verses are posted --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle! --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league. -Mod AIM Contacts- Oz --- JayGood259oz Super --- x Hazmat x Blackdef --- Yo Boi Curt Tekneek --- Tekneek2006

02-07-2005, 04:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: 313-334 Posts: 361	Ready to lose dun dun? 12. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post11156163 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post11156110 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post11142094 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post11142033 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post11156197 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post11176198 Last edited by I'm Deon; 02-12-2005 at 10:46 PM.

02-07-2005, 05:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
Orange407County Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 3,017	i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god? i bet thousands wanna IM Deon.. 'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches? watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in.. make it harder ta' breathe like fab did u tryina meet boys here? internet fags is your favorite shit.. i got the talent.. 'n you got his pics on ya favorites list voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first.. u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls think u hard cause u plastered.. like we cant punch holes in walls i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy i'll bury you 2 ft.. that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi? shit, im on topic..i might burn ya.. this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you.. plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too we can go blast, but if you see me pull it? bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin.. 'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted blah... __________________ soundclick.com/orange407county Last edited by Orange407County; 02-07-2005 at 05:57 PM.

02-07-2005, 11:00 PM	#12 (permalink)
castro'DAMUS Still So Fly. Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Toronto. Posts: 12,276	voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first.. u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse this was the line of the battle, Syn's style is fucking second to none on this shit, dude has like a DipSet Text swagger, haha shits appealing as all hell honestly, people need to start looking at more than just who had the better lines, syn's shit was more appealing, better flow, concepts were fresher, all that shit... he showed that a battle verse does not have to be all "setup - punch" and shit all the time fuck what yall are seeing, syn got this... VOTE - Penalty aka Syn __________________ Made men ain't suppose to make statements.

02-08-2005, 11:00 AM	#15 (permalink)
iLLweezy ILLWeeMaN Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: En-Why Posts: 2,687	Syn - Verse was dope as hell. Flow was onpoint, and you were consistent with the disses. "The Talent" line was crazy. At first I didn't understand, then I gave it a 2nd look, and BOOM! Shit was fire. Had me laughin' my ass off with this kid in my computer class right now. Then you came with that Epi line, and that was raw. Soiunded nice, and a fresh concept to use. I didn't like the Serge line or the Speeding Bullet line. But the closer was crazy. Made me laugh, and another fresh concept. Dope verse. I'm Deon - What suddenly turned me away from you verse was the fact that you played off his verse your very first line. That was just horrible. But you came back with the streak line, and that was very nice personal/punch combination. Flow was on point, and you have consistancy. I don't like how you utalize that style in text writing, though. Just doesn't appeal to me. Overall - Syn shows he's more comfortable with that style, and it's not about punches. His verse flowed perfectly, and he came at his opponent time and time again, not stopping once. He had more appealing lines, while keeping in mind a sick flow and a creative choice of words Line of the Match: Syn "voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first.. u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse" LMFAO!! Vote - Syn Vote on mine when it goes up against Calefaction -Weez __________________ iLLWeeZGoD Baby! Topical Prince.. Not Topical God (Well, I used to be..) Nah'm Sayin'!?

02-07-2005, 06:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	hahaah, that last line is fucking retro as hell......thats a good line should be a dope match, and i dont know who either of these aliases is

02-07-2005, 06:37 PM	#5 (permalink)
I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: 313-334 Posts: 361	http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=835623 syn champed this league, back when my pops was around, nd if he was alive man, he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/ and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist since i broke ya streak last time we faced... now i'll help you get another 1 started/ Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom, but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle... if we faught in frodos living room/ Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn, Hoes say he AIM's to please first with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/ was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks, for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/ im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act, since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/ Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth, you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/ My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind, While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/ and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest, but fall back for the real men... like super when blackdef got modded/ dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines, shoulda stuck with what you had... now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/

02-07-2005, 06:58 PM	#6 (permalink)
I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: 313-334 Posts: 361	7. Synthesis (8-0) vs. 8. Oliver_Thenet (6-2) ^ the fuck at that not workin

02-07-2005, 07:18 PM	#8 (permalink)
perma frost gay stars suck taint Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: san diego, CA Posts: 9,249	huh i dont think so lmfao vote l8r

02-07-2005, 07:20 PM	#9 (permalink)
MFB Get It In Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: 2one5 Posts: 24,899	Good battle here but clearly there was an obvious winner... Penalty, i wasn't honestly feelin' your verse to much man, seriously i seen you come alot harder but it just seems like you got outshined here real bad. You had some good punches and shit but they didnt connect as hard as I'm Deon's did I'm Deon, real strong verse, your punches along with personals hit hard and you also had more LOL lines then your opponent. The aim line was tight along with your closer. you did feed off his verse with the "naming people" but that doesnt matter cause the rest of your verse made up for it vote- I'm Deon

02-07-2005, 10:16 PM	#11 (permalink)
perma frost gay stars suck taint Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: san diego, CA Posts: 9,249	an aim line ? good thing the league restarted i guess its original now the closer was bad, yeah the ratio line big curves wasnt good, oc line was pretty cool penalty had the closer chicks wit dicks, pretty matched but a few more decent lines the epi lines werent doing it though vote - penalty

02-07-2005, 11:54 PM	#14 (permalink)
perma frost gay stars suck taint Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: san diego, CA Posts: 9,249	your lines sucked dude, hes saying look outside the box though its about the overall verse and style and appeal syns got some original ass formatting, it all fits well that verse was dope as fuck either way though

02-08-2005, 11:08 AM	#16 (permalink)
Dukane The God Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 137	Orange County i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god? i bet thousands wanna IM Deon.. 'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com lol you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches? watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in.. make it harder ta' breathe like fab did lol u tryina meet boys here? internet fags is your favorite shit.. i got the talent.. 'n you got his pics on ya favorites list lol voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first.. u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse aiight you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls think u hard cause u plastered.. like we cant punch holes in walls ohhh i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy i'll bury you 2 ft.. that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi? Damn shit, im on topic..i might burn ya.. this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you.. plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too ok we can go blast, but if you see me pull it? bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin.. 'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted ok I'm Deon syn champed this league, back when my pops was around, nd if he was alive man, he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/ ok and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist since i broke ya streak last time we faced... now i'll help you get another 1 started/ nice Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom, but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle... if we faught in frodos living room/ eh.. Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn, Hoes say he AIM's to please first with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/ nice was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks, for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/ nice im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act, since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/ hahaha Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth, you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/ eh.. My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind, While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/ eh.. and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest, but fall back for the real men... like super when blackdef got modded/ aiight dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines, shoulda stuck with what you had... now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/ nice Vote = OC

02-08-2005, 03:39 PM	#18 (permalink)
TeNk Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 44	bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god? i bet thousands wanna IM Deon.. 'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com nah IM deon lines are played as fuck against him. you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches? watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in.. make it harder ta' breathe like fab did eh. u tryina meet boys here? internet fags is your favorite shit.. i got the talent.. 'n you got his pics on ya favorites list coo. voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first.. u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse aight. you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls think u hard cause u plastered.. like we cant punch holes in walls ok. i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy i'll bury you 2 ft.. that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi? nice. shit, im on topic..i might burn ya.. this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna no. lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you.. plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too well i dont know the personal, so i cant say much we can go blast, but if you see me pull it? bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet na. this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin.. 'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted coo closer. syn champed this league, back when my pops was around, nd if he was alive man, he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/ ok. and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist since i broke ya streak last time we faced... now i'll help you get another 1 started/ eh. Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom, but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle... if we faught in frodos living room/ no Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn, Hoes say he AIM's to please first with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/ cool was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks, for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/ lol im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act, since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/ nice. Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth, you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/ nah. My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind, While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/ no... and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest, but fall back for the real men... like super when blackdef got modded/ damn lol. dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines, shoulda stuck with what you had... now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/ nice closer. v-deon.

02-08-2005, 11:28 PM	#19 (permalink)
Orange407County Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 3,017	word word.. links: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post11141650 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post11144007 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post11155164 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post11155176 Alpha Omni 1-0 Vs. Rawkus 1-0 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post11163453 __________________ soundclick.com/orange407county Last edited by Orange407County; 02-11-2005 at 10:22 AM.