5. Eternal Path 15-9 vs 6. Richard Corey 15-2

-Oz- · 01-10-2005, 12:35 PM

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Richard Corey · 01-10-2005, 03:06 PM

in....16-20

Eternalpath · 01-10-2005, 09:08 PM

whoever drops first...the other matches

Eternalpath · 01-14-2005, 10:22 PM

RBL champ? don't be gassed...I'll stick u to the rstl literally..
with this tech..one shot have u painted full of imagery
& U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right??
Your verse is worst, post your head
at least the'll B some highlights..
C'mon Corey your a star of porno bet your ready to explode
Your going neck 4 neck with john holmes..
in how your dick rode..
Why u lack balls? when u start beef u never appear
cuz when my gun cocks..well yours just dissappear...
and I spoke with your mom..she spilled all your glory
U've lived your whole life in the basement..
so NOW I know why u so good at making up stories....

10 lines

Richard Corey · 01-15-2005, 02:29 AM

They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks?
When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map?
Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore
…so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award
She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull”
I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full...
Plus she has hair like barbwire, with tangles you couldn’t sift by hand
Bitch asked for a press and curl, when she needed an entire weight-lifting plan
She wears more lipstick than a prostitute…so I don’t even say what’s next
I just call her a slut, tell her to open her mouth, and have ‘make up’ sex.

Super. · 01-15-2005, 05:23 AM

upping.

Eternalpath · 01-15-2005, 02:39 PM

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...5#post10971315

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post10971301

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10971362

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post10974386

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...5#post10974435

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post10974570

john hensley · 01-15-2005, 02:46 PM

hmm..

EP:

& U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right??
Your verse is worst, post your head
at least the'll B some highlights..

^^honestly the only line i was feelin...rest were ok, opener was my next fav. but it wasn't THAT great...it's cool tho, keep writin and improvin like u been doin.

RC:

They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks?
When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map?
Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore
…so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award
She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull”
I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full...

^^these were all solid...korea line was funny as hell i thought, Geico was creative, and the last line was a good flip. The rest were cool too. Nice short verse.

vote-RC

Aces Full · 01-15-2005, 03:25 PM

RBL champ? don't be gassed...I'll stick u to the rstl literally..
with this tech..one shot have u painted full of imagery
eh...not really feelin it, flow is way off and punch didnt hit too hard
& U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right??
Your verse is worst, post your head
at least the'll B some highlights..
coulda been much better, wording was off. decent
C'mon Corey your a star of porno bet your ready to explode
Your going neck 4 neck with john holmes..
in how your dick rode..
hmm...dunno who john holmes is, guess this is ok
Why u lack balls? when u start beef u never appear
cuz when my gun cocks..well yours just dissappear...
heh, this was alright, still not hittin as hard as it could be
and I spoke with your mom..she spilled all your glory
U've lived your whole life in the basement..
so NOW I know why u so good at making up stories....
goddamn you need to word shit better, this was a dope concept i thought, but the punch was lacking cuz of the wording.

They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks?
When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map?
heh, this concept is pretty used but this was a somewhat more creative spin on it. feelin it, specially since she is a girl
Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore
…so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award
hahahhahha, comedy
She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull”
I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full...
haha, nice concept, a little bit stretched but got the job done.
Plus she has hair like barbwire, with tangles you couldn’t sift by hand
Bitch asked for a press and curl, when she needed an entire weight-lifting plan
lol kinda dope, feelin the style rich.
She wears more lipstick than a prostitute…so I don’t even say what’s next
I just call her a slut, tell her to open her mouth, and have ‘make up’ sex.
werd, nice closer, solid ass verse, no bad misses and a couple heavy hitting lines. you definitely came with enough to beat her.

v/ - Rich

throw one of those patented explained votes on my shit against perma if you get a chance, rc

Exit Eight · 01-15-2005, 05:37 PM

They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks?
When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map?
Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore
…so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award
She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull”
I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full...

path wasnt bad

she had

Why u lack balls? when u start beef u never appear
cuz when my gun cocks..well yours just dissappear...

buuuuut

V- RC

SevenBC · 01-15-2005, 06:47 PM

I feel that this battle was completely one sided.. Richard Corey's verse was much harder and more clever, and written better. EternalPath's verse was decent, but RC's verse was a better battle verse.. The only problem with RC's verse is it was kinda stretched/long lines.. Keep it simple and to the point

VOTE: Richard Corey

Eternalpath · 01-15-2005, 09:54 PM

I dont understand wording.....

nice verse Mr. Corey....

BlackDef · 01-15-2005, 11:56 PM

yeah richard corey kinda tore you apart with the female diss's. simple concepts but you cant say thier played cuz females hardly do battle. shit was a solid verse corey. Path, you had some nice concepts that cuda been worded better, as in "worded diffrent to make the read more smooth to the reader" you definatly doing ya thing, just just got dealt a short hand here. good luck in the later rounds ma.

Vote: Corey

BLESSING · 01-16-2005, 03:06 AM

& U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right??
Your verse is worst, post your head
at least the'll B some highlights..

vs

They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks?
When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map?
Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore
…so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award
She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull”
I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full...

lol....massacre

vote
corey

Eternalpath · 01-16-2005, 10:36 AM

oh well i gave it what i have....and it reads fine to me but i dunno wording is just sumthin I have over came yet...

thanks for the advice blackdef....

I'll use it and try to make it better next week...

congrats to Mr Corey....go and win a title or sumthin lol

01-16-2005, 02:25 PM

v- rc

landslide

loved the opener, although i think i've seen you use it before. ep didn't haven anything i liked.

Patriarch · 01-17-2005, 10:30 PM

richard corey WINS 17-2

eternal path LOSE15-9

01-10-2005, 12:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
-Oz- ^^^^^ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 2-25 Posts: 25,593	5. Eternal Path 15-9 vs 6. Richard Corey 15-2 Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return. No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff. Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations. -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT PACIFIC! -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN -You MUST vote on 6 battles & EDIT the vote links in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically. -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)! Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked. -NO 1 Sentence Voting - Outside voting is allowed. Any problems will be looked into -NO EXTENTIONS! -If there isnt 5 votes for every battle, all battles will be left open, the mag will not go up, and ranks & threads won't be posted. MOD AIM CONTACTS: -Oz - Jaygood259Oz -USER - ROFLZ MY WOFLZ -Super. - x1hazmat1x

01-10-2005, 03:06 PM	#2 (permalink)
Richard Corey King Richard Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Laurel, MD Posts: 1,519	in....16-20 __________________ 2004 Champ of Champ Tourney Winner * 4X RSTL Champion * RBL Champion * WBL Champion * BBL Champion Quote of the Moment: "This is pretty funny though ...you know you're dope at text when heads use your lines for their AUDIO battles, haha.." -- B.E.Reborn

01-10-2005, 09:08 PM	#3 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	whoever drops first...the other matches __________________ God's child

01-14-2005, 10:22 PM	#4 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	RBL champ? don't be gassed...I'll stick u to the rstl literally.. with this tech..one shot have u painted full of imagery & U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right?? Your verse is worst, post your head at least the'll B some highlights.. C'mon Corey your a star of porno bet your ready to explode Your going neck 4 neck with john holmes.. in how your dick rode.. Why u lack balls? when u start beef u never appear cuz when my gun cocks..well yours just dissappear... and I spoke with your mom..she spilled all your glory U've lived your whole life in the basement.. so NOW I know why u so good at making up stories.... 10 lines __________________ God's child

01-15-2005, 02:29 AM	#5 (permalink)
Richard Corey King Richard Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Laurel, MD Posts: 1,519	that was actually pretty nice, however... They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks? When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map? Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore …so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull” I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full... Plus she has hair like barbwire, with tangles you couldn’t sift by hand Bitch asked for a press and curl, when she needed an entire weight-lifting plan She wears more lipstick than a prostitute…so I don’t even say what’s next I just call her a slut, tell her to open her mouth, and have ‘make up’ sex. __________________ 2004 Champ of Champ Tourney Winner * 4X RSTL Champion * RBL Champion * WBL Champion * BBL Champion Quote of the Moment: "This is pretty funny though ...you know you're dope at text when heads use your lines for their AUDIO battles, haha.." -- B.E.Reborn

01-15-2005, 05:23 AM	#6 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	upping.

01-15-2005, 02:39 PM	#7 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...5#post10971315 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post10971301 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10971362 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...6#post10974386 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...5#post10974435 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post10974570 __________________ God's child

01-15-2005, 02:46 PM	#8 (permalink)
john hensley Incredible Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: SEATTLE, WA Posts: 1,483	hmm.. EP: & U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right?? Your verse is worst, post your head at least the'll B some highlights.. ^^honestly the only line i was feelin...rest were ok, opener was my next fav. but it wasn't THAT great...it's cool tho, keep writin and improvin like u been doin. RC: They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks? When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map? Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore …so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull” I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full... ^^these were all solid...korea line was funny as hell i thought, Geico was creative, and the last line was a good flip. The rest were cool too. Nice short verse. vote-RC

01-15-2005, 03:25 PM	#9 (permalink)
Aces Full I'm Sick... Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: ...n I'll give u a coughin Posts: 118	RBL champ? don't be gassed...I'll stick u to the rstl literally.. with this tech..one shot have u painted full of imagery eh...not really feelin it, flow is way off and punch didnt hit too hard & U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right?? Your verse is worst, post your head at least the'll B some highlights.. coulda been much better, wording was off. decent C'mon Corey your a star of porno bet your ready to explode Your going neck 4 neck with john holmes.. in how your dick rode.. hmm...dunno who john holmes is, guess this is ok Why u lack balls? when u start beef u never appear cuz when my gun cocks..well yours just dissappear... heh, this was alright, still not hittin as hard as it could be and I spoke with your mom..she spilled all your glory U've lived your whole life in the basement.. so NOW I know why u so good at making up stories.... goddamn you need to word shit better, this was a dope concept i thought, but the punch was lacking cuz of the wording. They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks? When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map? heh, this concept is pretty used but this was a somewhat more creative spin on it. feelin it, specially since she is a girl Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore …so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award hahahhahha, comedy She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull” I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full... haha, nice concept, a little bit stretched but got the job done. Plus she has hair like barbwire, with tangles you couldn’t sift by hand Bitch asked for a press and curl, when she needed an entire weight-lifting plan lol kinda dope, feelin the style rich. She wears more lipstick than a prostitute…so I don’t even say what’s next I just call her a slut, tell her to open her mouth, and have ‘make up’ sex. werd, nice closer, solid ass verse, no bad misses and a couple heavy hitting lines. you definitely came with enough to beat her. v/ - Rich throw one of those patented explained votes on my shit against perma if you get a chance, rc __________________ "If you can't spot the sucker in the first half hour, chances are you are the sucker." - Rounders "Expect me like you expect Jesus to come..." ~Pac~

01-15-2005, 05:37 PM	#10 (permalink)
Exit Eight Turn Here Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Battle Creek, Michigan Posts: 166	They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks? When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map? Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore …so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull” I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full... path wasnt bad she had Why u lack balls? when u start beef u never appear cuz when my gun cocks..well yours just dissappear... buuuuut V- RC __________________ Exit Eight

01-15-2005, 06:47 PM	#11 (permalink)
SevenBC I ♥ to sleep Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 558	I feel that this battle was completely one sided.. Richard Corey's verse was much harder and more clever, and written better. EternalPath's verse was decent, but RC's verse was a better battle verse.. The only problem with RC's verse is it was kinda stretched/long lines.. Keep it simple and to the point VOTE: Richard Corey

01-15-2005, 09:54 PM	#12 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	I dont understand wording..... nice verse Mr. Corey.... __________________ God's child

01-15-2005, 11:56 PM	#13 (permalink)
BlackDef THE G.O.A.T!! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Above da clowds Posts: 2,580	yeah richard corey kinda tore you apart with the female diss's. simple concepts but you cant say thier played cuz females hardly do battle. shit was a solid verse corey. Path, you had some nice concepts that cuda been worded better, as in "worded diffrent to make the read more smooth to the reader" you definatly doing ya thing, just just got dealt a short hand here. good luck in the later rounds ma. Vote: Corey

01-16-2005, 03:06 AM	#14 (permalink)
BLESSING You've Been Blessed Join Date: Nov 2000 Posts: 23	& U changed your hairstyle, didn't know we cared right?? Your verse is worst, post your head at least the'll B some highlights.. vs They say loose lips sink ships, so why fear any more bombs or attacks? When this bitch could spread her legs and wipe North Korea off of the map? Oh my God, the diseases you receive when you sleep with this whore …so many bad transmissions, Geico gave her a lifetime achievement award She said she was well endowed, I look at her like, “That’s bull” I ain’t a pessimist, but when I peep ya chest, I don’t see the cup as half full... lol....massacre vote corey Last edited by BLESSING; 01-16-2005 at 03:13 AM.

01-16-2005, 10:36 AM	#15 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	oh well i gave it what i have....and it reads fine to me but i dunno wording is just sumthin I have over came yet... thanks for the advice blackdef.... I'll use it and try to make it better next week... congrats to Mr Corey....go and win a title or sumthin lol __________________ God's child

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01-16-2005, 02:25 PM	#16 (permalink)
Macabre Guest Posts: n/a	v- rc landslide loved the opener, although i think i've seen you use it before. ep didn't haven anything i liked.

01-17-2005, 10:30 PM	#17 (permalink)
Patriarch Pat knows.. Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Orlando Posts: 12,298	richard corey WINS 17-2 eternal path LOSE15-9

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