13. Richard Corey 14-2 vs 14. In Awe 14-3

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[Richard Corey]

in...

and I'm going 30.


http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10917703
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10931908
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10932498
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post10932674
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10932733

[in awe]

damn at 30

will see

[in awe]

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[Richard Corey]

Originally Posted by in awe

I can key up a verse right now duke, are you here?

stop bein ghost
and fuckin post
so I can boast
about you bein toast

^no show just incase

ill be around, so let me know if your postin doggy

if you want to, go ahead. But I'm puttin' the finishing touches on mine now...

[Richard Corey]

I saw this battle and went, “Awe, shit!”…not that I’m impatient
I just like to start off a verse with a little word association
Y’see Awe chronically self-stimulates, plus he likes the fellas…
And by the way he handles his small staff, Suge Knight got jealous
And New Years was kinda like your birthday with your father at ten…
Y’know, there was screaming, some balls fell…then the party began!
Later Awe joined the Mile High club for Gays for some mean fellating
So when I say ‘the swallows up in the air’…I don’t mean migration
Plus he bit RM’s style, so respecting him is something I refuse to do
Fuck Starburst, check his verses if you want to see a real fruit chew.
This faggot is trash, there’s no mistaking, I’m erasing this clown
How you gonna barge in on me…when a barge is taking you out?
Your shit is played! I know he’ll drop some ‘age lines’ at first
he’ll have to bite his mom’s ass cheek just to write his verse
So put on a vest or find a nurse, while I’m flauntin’ the tech
pullin’ the hammer back and poppin’ In like an unwanted guest
I’m taking his emaciated and bony-ass and I’m hangin’ this whore
Even conspiracy theorists say that’s a small frame up they can ignore.
He said he was ill…What, was I supposed to have shuddered?
When his lies are ‘stretching thin’ more than his yoga instructor
No joke, I’ve seen his pic…this bony bitch ain’t got nothin’ on me!
One punch and I’ll knock his fucking muscle tone off key!
Oh, and thank User for convincing me to give you a place to lie
If he could shed all that shit, I could at least let shit stay in mine…
And if you don’t believe he’s a faggot then you’re off ya dense dome
Cos’ he’s the best end-packer burrying it since Reggie White went home

[Richard Corey]

argh...call it

Richard Corey wins 15-2
In Awe loses 14-4


such a shame...

[in awe]

^ I didnt know you were a mod now duke. Im busy at work so heres some keyed ish

coreys fam
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=844951

Your only worth a quick key, but ill try an keep it raw
I'd ask OZ for an extension, but your girl took them all
Dude ya ugly as fuck, I could diss you in so many ways
ya ears are so big, mike tyson would have ta chew for days
Plus look at ya girl dawg, the chick aint got no breasts
If I wanted to come off the wall, i'd sock her in the chest
how come all ya eyes look small an chinese, I dont believe it
if I dropped my verse like this, you prolly couldnt even read it
the wedding looked nice, you sure know how ta pick'em
corey didnt hold back, shit, he even got Tyrone Biggums
I wasnt gonna use no old line, but since your demanding
your girl said you battle like a savage, but you cant be randy
right now I respect those cats with no life, im not jokin
cuz corey just got married and had a kid, and he's still postin
take ya fam ta see a game, how does that sound dude?
then when the crowd starts doing the wave I could fuckin drown you
cuz this bitch is overrated, his riders are smokin bowls
If ya bridged the gap between us you could fill it with a million trolls
you shouldnt be on the net, someone have this man banned
dudes a member of b-boys and cant even do a handstand
I just beat you last month, you know you got murdered yo
cuz im quick ta make the roof of ya mouth into a convertible

[-Oz-]

To the top

[Ill William]

Lazy ass voters.

Ill do line by line for this battle.

Richard Corey.

I saw this battle and went, “Awe, shit!”…not that I’m impatient
I just like to start off a verse with a little word association

Well, tough rhyme, I can see how you could say this to make it rhyme, but everyone might not feel it. Anyway, this is a played idea, but I liked the way that you approached it.

Y’see Awe chronically self-stimulates, plus he likes the fellas…
And by the way he handles his small staff, Suge Knight got jealous

This is ok. lol Kinda funny.

And New Years was kinda like your birthday with your father at ten…
Y’know, there was screaming, some balls fell…then the party began!

Don't like this, a bit TOO obvious don't you think?

Later Awe joined the Mile High club for Gays for some mean fellating
So when I say ‘the swallows up in the air’…I don’t mean migration

Don't like. Cliche lines are played, even though this was original, I didn't like it. Not to mention its the third "you're gay" line in a row. Kind of redundant.

Plus he bit RM’s style, so respecting him is something I refuse to do
Fuck Starburst, check his verses if you want to see a real fruit chew.

Another one, don't like.

This faggot is trash, there’s no mistaking, I’m erasing this clown
How you gonna barge in on me…when a barge is taking you out?

Not feeling this one.

Your shit is played! I know he’ll drop some ‘age lines’ at first
he’ll have to bite his mom’s ass cheek just to write his verse

...

So put on a vest or find a nurse, while I’m flauntin’ the tech
pullin’ the hammer back and poppin’ In like an unwanted guest

Aight, nothing new or really original, but a nice break from gay lines.

I’m taking his emaciated and bony-ass and I’m hangin’ this whore
Even conspiracy theorists say that’s a small frame up they can ignore.

Cool idea, wording could have been better, I still like.

He said he was ill…What, was I supposed to have shuddered?
When his lies are ‘stretching thin’ more than his yoga instructor

No thanks.

No joke, I’ve seen his pic…this bony bitch ain’t got nothin’ on me!
One punch and I’ll knock his fucking muscle tone off key!

Heh, good.

Oh, and thank User for convincing me to give you a place to lie
If he could shed all that shit, I could at least let shit stay in mine…

Blahish.

And if you don’t believe he’s a faggot then you’re off ya dense dome
Cos’ he’s the best end-packer burrying it since Reggie White went home

Meh

Wow. Ive seen some dope lines and verses from you. This is not one of them. Some of the best writers on the net can't write a good "anything" more than 16 lines. Good and original ideas are just so scarce nowadays. This made your verse very inconsistant, and at times boringly redundant and predictable. Still a couple good zingers.

In Awe.

Your only worth a quick key, but ill try an keep it raw
I'd ask OZ for an extension, but your girl took them all

It's been done. Lots of times.

Dude ya ugly as fuck, I could diss you in so many ways
ya ears are so big, mike tyson would have ta chew for days

Good, could have been better.

Plus look at ya girl dawg, the chick aint got no breasts
If I wanted to come off the wall, i'd sock her in the chest

Aight.

how come all ya eyes look small an chinese, I dont believe it
if I dropped my verse like this, you prolly couldnt even read it

No thanks.

the wedding looked nice, you sure know how ta pick'em
corey didnt hold back, shit, he even got Tyrone Biggums

...

I wasnt gonna use no old line, but since your demanding
your girl said you battle like a savage, but you cant be randy

No thanks.

right now I respect those cats with no life, im not jokin
cuz corey just got married and had a kid, and he's still postin

Decent, tho he kind of negated this.

take ya fam ta see a game, how does that sound dude?
then when the crowd starts doing the wave I could fuckin drown you

Good idea, poor execution. I like still.

cuz this bitch is overrated, his riders are smokin bowls
If ya bridged the gap between us you could fill it with a million trolls

Ha, good play on an old concept.

you shouldnt be on the net, someone have this man banned
dudes a member of b-boys and cant even do a handstand

aight

I just beat you last month, you know you got murdered yo
cuz im quick ta make the roof of ya mouth into a convertible

Nice.

I liked your verse. Kind of. Alot of ideas, could have been actually dope, if you thought them through a little more. Still, decent shit, some badly played lines, again the same shit I said to corey, going more than 16, can ruin the best people on the net.

Vote In Awe.

Good battle. But next time shorten it up, and maybe it will be a dope battle.

[Da Dude Crook]

vote richard corey, awe's verse didnt really have punchlines that were very good. alot of concepts were rushed and just werent impressive. corey didnt have all that great of verse either. i dont know what happened

[Vadik]

lines i felt:

I saw this battle and went, “Awe, shit!”…not that I’m impatient
I just like to start off a verse with a little word association
Y’see Awe chronically self-stimulates, plus he likes the fellas…
And by the way he handles his small staff, Suge Knight got jealous
So put on a vest or find a nurse, while I’m flauntin’ the tech
pullin’ the hammer back and poppin’ In like an unwanted guest
No joke, I’ve seen his pic…this bony bitch ain’t got nothin’ on me!
One punch and I’ll knock his fucking muscle tone off key!

how come all ya eyes look small an chinese, I dont believe it
if I dropped my verse like this, you prolly couldnt even read it




in awe didnt come very strong... corey came decent.


vote = rc

[john hensley]

RC: i thought ur verse was pretty cool, started strong but then it kinda got lackluster towards the end

No joke, I’ve seen his pic…this bony bitch ain’t got nothin’ on me!
One punch and I’ll knock his fucking muscle tone off key!

I saw this battle and went, “Awe, shit!”…not that I’m impatient
I just like to start off a verse with a little word association
Y’see Awe chronically self-stimulates, plus he likes the fellas…
And by the way he handles his small staff, Suge Knight got jealous



In Awe: you were aight, i dunno, i liked some of your lines but it didn't really appeal to me....the only lines i really liked were the last few, convertible line, troll line and wave lines were cool, but the rest i wasn't really feelin. cool verse, just not enough for me to give u the vote..


vote-RC

[Muffffy]

I saw this battle and went, “Awe, shit!”…not that I’m impatient
I just like to start off a verse with a little word association
(eH)
Y’see Awe chronically self-stimulates, plus he likes the fellas…
And by the way he handles his small staff, Suge Knight got jealous
(k)
And New Years was kinda like your birthday with your father at ten…
Y’know, there was screaming, some balls fell…then the party began!
(heh)
Later Awe joined the Mile High club for Gays for some mean fellating
So when I say ‘the swallows up in the air’…I don’t mean migration
(lol)
Plus he bit RM’s style, so respecting him is something I refuse to do
Fuck Starburst, check his verses if you want to see a real fruit chew.
(hell no)
This faggot is trash, there’s no mistaking, I’m erasing this clown
How you gonna barge in on me…when a barge is taking you out?
(lol nice)
Your shit is played! I know he’ll drop some ‘age lines’ at first
he’ll have to bite his mom’s ass cheek just to write his verse
(k)
So put on a vest or find a nurse, while I’m flauntin’ the tech
pullin’ the hammer back and poppin’ In like an unwanted guest
(no)
I’m taking his emaciated and bony-ass and I’m hangin’ this whore
Even conspiracy theorists say that’s a small frame up they can ignore.
(eh)
He said he was ill…What, was I supposed to have shuddered?
When his lies are ‘stretching thin’ more than his yoga instructor
(eh_
No joke, I’ve seen his pic…this bony bitch ain’t got nothin’ on me!
One punch and I’ll knock his fucking muscle tone off key!
(cool)
Oh, and thank User for convincing me to give you a place to lie
If he could shed all that shit, I could at least let shit stay in mine…
(nice)
And if you don’t believe he’s a faggot then you’re off ya dense dome
Cos’ he’s the best end-packer burrying it since Reggie White went home
(cool)

ehh ok verse rc


Your only worth a quick key, but ill try an keep it raw
I'd ask OZ for an extension, but your girl took them all
(fuck no)
Dude ya ugly as fuck, I could diss you in so many ways
ya ears are so big, mike tyson would have ta chew for days
(k)
Plus look at ya girl dawg, the chick aint got no breasts
If I wanted to come off the wall, i'd sock her in the chest
(no)
how come all ya eyes look small an chinese, I dont believe it
if I dropped my verse like this, you prolly couldnt even read it
(heh)
the wedding looked nice, you sure know how ta pick'em
corey didnt hold back, shit, he even got Tyrone Biggums
(no)
I wasnt gonna use no old line, but since your demanding
your girl said you battle like a savage, but you cant be randy
(wack linkage)
right now I respect those cats with no life, im not jokin
cuz corey just got married and had a kid, and he's still postin
(lol)
take ya fam ta see a game, how does that sound dude?
then when the crowd starts doing the wave I could fuckin drown you
(k)
cuz this bitch is overrated, his riders are smokin bowls
If ya bridged the gap between us you could fill it with a million trolls
(k)
you shouldnt be on the net, someone have this man banned
dudes a member of b-boys and cant even do a handstand
(loool)
I just beat you last month, you know you got murdered yo
cuz im quick ta make the roof of ya mouth into a convertible
(k)


v/in awe much more consistent

i wasnt feelin much of rc's verse

wtf


So put on a vest or find a nurse, while I’m flauntin’ the tech
pullin’ the hammer back and poppin’ In like an unwanted guest
^that shti was wack as fuck

[in awe]

its close

uppin

[-Oz-]

Richard Corey wins. Dont no show next week Awe lol