11. Eternal Path (13-8) vs. 12. Ill William (5-0)

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[Eternalpath]

check.....

whoever drops 1st the other matches.....

[Ill William]

aight

bet

[Ill William]

Bitch,

You can't have sex, you'll hurt the fellas
With a snapper so green, it makes turtles jealous
Can't keep up with my style, how the hell you been lagging
& If you follow-in my Path, you're probably dragging
Guys tea bagging this whore, aint hard to tell you smell
If ya saw ya reflection eternal, ud know why talibs cd aint sell to well
I can tell ya fell off, phony & fake, this bitch is a hoax
Fuck seeing the slit in ya clit, I'd rather see a slit in ya throat
Bitch is a joke, so just end it tonight with yo knife
Even god is mad that he promised eternal...life
I'ma expose ya, alchoholic, I'll let the flaws fly
AA aint just where ya go mondays, its also ya bra size
Now bend over, & i'll be raping this philly
This match is the only time you actually gettin a Willie
Ya feel me? I dont feel you, you resemble a cow
So when I leave ya wet, its nothing to do with being arouse

[Ill William]

Just so their is no confusion, Eternal Path is a female. So goodluck ma ;)

[Eternalpath]

Your brain is unclear, no fear in willie a he or she??
No ones confused except you..since u sit down to P..
But please explain to me..if wack is cool..& thats true so..
For you won't be no competition..you'll be numera uno
and I luv to chill though..but I'm killen your frozen hopes..
I pull out my board when using your nose for ski slopes
Its christmas time folks, I got a gift to beat you easily..
Only time you'll be a star..when I put u on top of the tree
Your not even hard as me..u video game bitch
Last time u rocked someone was using Madden's hit stick
Being gansta is a classic, my scope could better your day
The red dot on your head so bright u could guide santa's sleigh
Last time I read your plays..u havent been good from the jump
Your such a character Red Skelton named you Willie LUMP LUMP
Listen chump, unlimited supply of lotion for your bed time beats..
U jerk so much u thought Isley bros were gay cuz of between the sheets


matched your lines..16

[Doc Richards]

damn will came nice

[Super.]

upping.

[Eternalpath]

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10815603

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post10815644

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post10820287

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10820378

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post10820411

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10820468

[Doc Richards]

Can't keep up with my style, how the hell you been lagging
& If you follow-in my Path, you're probably dragging
Guys tea bagging this whore, aint hard to tell you smell
If ya saw ya reflection eternal, ud know why talibs cd aint sell to well
I can tell ya fell off, phony & fake, this bitch is a hoax
Fuck seeing the slit in ya clit, I'd rather see a slit in ya throat

word.....just, if i didnt make myself clear earlier

V- Ill William

[Stigmeta]

Yea...damn. Ill William came with a real nice, witty, and hard-hitting verse here. I was feeling most of his lines, but the ones that stood out the most to me were:

Can't keep up with my style, how the hell you been lagging
& If you follow-in my Path, you're probably dragging
Guys tea bagging this whore, aint hard to tell you smell
If ya saw ya reflection eternal, ud know why talibs cd aint sell to well
I'ma expose ya, alchoholic, I'll let the flaws fly
AA aint just where ya go mondays, its also ya bra size

Yea..those were your best lines. You had a few cheesy ones, like the 'Willie' punch..but overall, your verse was pretty cool.

Eternal...I dunno girl, just wasn't really feeling your verse. You have some ok concepts, but you worded them horribly and most of them just weren't hitting very hard.

/v Ill William

[Ethiquette]

vote william

he had the harder hitting punches & fresher shit

path had some original ideas, but alot were soft, suich as the star on tree on

[Ibeechur Moms]

yeah william took this.....not a great verse..but had a couple of standout lines like the talib kweli shit..

EP....not a good verse at all...u came much better than this before. Alot of ur shit was played or poorly worded.

vote= Ill William

[Reflexx]

willie:

You can't have sex, you'll hurt the fellas
With a snapper so green, it makes turtles jealous

lol nice.

Can't keep up with my style, how the hell you been lagging
& If you follow-in my Path, you're probably dragging

nice.

Guys tea bagging this whore, aint hard to tell you smell
If ya saw ya reflection eternal, ud know why talibs cd aint sell to well

okay.

I can tell ya fell off, phony & fake, this bitch is a hoax
Fuck seeing the slit in ya clit, I'd rather see a slit in ya throat

niiiiice

Bitch is a joke, so just end it tonight with yo knife
Even god is mad that he promised eternal...life

nice.

I'ma expose ya, alchoholic, I'll let the flaws fly
AA aint just where ya go mondays, its also ya bra size

aa meetings yaaay, nice but not TOO hard hitting.

Now bend over, & i'll be raping this philly
This match is the only time you actually gettin a Willie

nice.

Ya feel me? I dont feel you, you resemble a cow
So when I leave ya wet, its nothing to do with being arouse

LOL pretty nice closer.

---

path:

Your brain is unclear, no fear in willie a he or she??
No ones confused except you..since u sit down to P..

okay.

But please explain to me..if wack is cool..& thats true so..
For you won't be no competition..you'll be numera uno

lol pretty good.

and I luv to chill though..but I'm killen your frozen hopes..
I pull out my board when using your nose for ski slopes

blah the nose/skip slopes lines are played..syn & shadows edge & some other dude used'em last week..pretty played

Its christmas time folks, I got a gift to beat you easily..
Only time you'll be a star..when I put u on top of the tree

could of been re worded a bit.

Your not even hard as me..u video game bitch
Last time u rocked someone was using Madden's hit stick

lol okay.

Being gansta is a classic, my scope could better your day
The red dot on your head so bright u could guide santa's sleigh

lol pretty good.

Last time I read your plays..u havent been good from the jump
Your such a character Red Skelton named you Willie LUMP LUMP

lmao

Listen chump, unlimited supply of lotion for your bed time beats..
U jerk so much u thought Isley bros were gay cuz of between the sheets

pretty good closer.

----

william came really witty, better punches & stayed more consistent. path kept falling off with flow & punches and kinda was stuck on the christmas lines lololol, nice stuff from both of you but william edged this out..just came harder.

vote -- william

[john hensley]

vote-Ill William

EP had an aight verse, she picked it up in the last 6 lines or so, but nothin was gettin to William enough.

William was pretty brutal and funny for alot of it, even tho the girl jokes are gettin played out now, but still he was doin well in this one.

Guys tea bagging this whore, aint hard to tell you smell
If ya saw ya reflection eternal, ud know why talibs cd aint sell to well

^^i liked that line alot too

[Ill William]

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...9#post10825559
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...8#post10825528

[Super.]

will wins.