23. Roddy Pipez (9-5) vs. 24. Aven Brooks (5-1)

[Super.]

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-Super. - oxnardquickie

[RoddyPipez]

*shakes hand*

free win, i signed out..

[Exit Eight]

oxnardquickie: tell aven you're takin roddy's spot

[Aven Brooks]

.. 20 .. early ..

[Super.]

Originally Posted by Exit Eight

oxnardquickie: tell aven you're takin roddy's spot

even though i didnt say that...i'll let aven shit on you.

[Label]

Who? Posted on wrong name, - "Exit Eight"

[Aven Brooks]

[Oliver_Thenet]

label aint a 411head, aven. u better try tho homie

[Exit Eight]

Obsessive masterbation, wanna know a nice test?
It's clear to tell, when ya forearm's twice as big as ya bicep
You're ugly - & we know you hate the truth
Attraction is about face, thas'why girls march away from you
That old without a trace of puberty, this guy is gay
All that peach fuzz could feed the bottom half of the United States
I think it's fashion, but it won't be after I rip him to shreds
Cuz seriously, who gets a fade w/ a different number at the tip of his head
Roudy as fuck, get ya ass beat as I'm runnin through faggots
Get punched in the eye, & leave a crater on ya fucking moon glasses
Body language says alot of things, like predictin I'm breakin this man
Cuz if he battles me, the outcome's already in the shape of his hands

[Aven Brooks]

Exit Eight:

http: //img. villagephotos. com/p/2004-6/750125/fatn igga.jpg
^get rid of da spaces

..u werent even spose to be here.. then u couldnt match me.. i'll meet u halfway tho..

.its like..
..peeps afraid to fly ..not cuz of altitude n metric..
scariest parts when da stewardess introduces passengers to Exit
..tell u whut.. fuk findin love.. make recent oaths..
to accumulate all da singles in ur town n buy some decent clothes
..u seemin broke ..thank god Ciara only had da 1,2 step..
cuz if she made it to da 4th this troll woulda looked up her dress
..n omg at ur shoes.. jus blast urself wit a shotty..
kicks dat bad wouldn’t even earn u a white belt in karate
..greasy nerd ..do u really think this coward's hard?
dude got enuff shine on his face to move a solar powered car
..i’ll shower bars ..claimin he carries guns n sells u see..
he’s great at spittin da A-K but has trouble recitin L thru Z
..it’s hell fo g .. u cant handle my power well..
ur elbows ashier than da outcome of when da towers fell
..went ova da limit.. so whut ..its a must i go wreck..
only gave u two-more ..so it'll evolve into a cancerous spread



.. yep ..

[Black Writer]

That old without a trace of puberty, this guy is gay
All that peach fuzz could feed the bottom half of the United States

haha

Body language says alot of things, like predictin I'm breakin this man
Cuz if he battles me, the outcome's already in the shape of his hands

nothin spesh, nicca.

.its like....peeps afraid to fly ..not cuz of altitude n metric..
scariest parts when da stewardess introduces passengers to Exit

hah, good shit.

..n omg at ur shoes.. jus blast urself wit a shotty..
kicks dat bad wouldn’t even earn u a white belt in karate

decent

..greasy nerd ..do u really think this coward's hard?
dude got enuff shine on his face to move a solar powered car

lmao.

..went ova da limit.. so whut ..its a must i go wreck..
only gave u two-more ..so it'll evolve into a cancerous spread

dope.


aven u my nicca but u came meh this week.. u still won tho, but u need ta step it up


vote - aven

[Super.]

upping.

[-ChOppA STyLE-]

i think exit got the upset...

[Eternalpath]

Exit..

You're ugly - & we know you hate the truth
Attraction is about face, thas'why girls march away from you

Body language says alot of things, like predictin I'm breakin this man
Cuz if he battles me, the outcome's already in the shape of his hands

Those were nice lines...and me being a military brat the first line was real nice..Good ish..

Aven

..i’ll shower bars ..claimin he carries guns n sells u see..
he’s great at spittin da A-K but has trouble recitin L thru Z
..it’s hell fo g .. u cant handle my power well..
ur elbows ashier than da outcome of when da towers fell

those were nice....not feeling much more....but I think the march away line won this

my vote Exit

[Ethiquette]

vote Ave

I liked the solar powered line, & in general he came more consistent. I didnt find anything really standout in exit's

[Iceberg X]

vote Ave, he could've won this with one line from where i'm standin. Exit's whole verse was terrible, some really shitty pic lines with a hint of "i've heard it before" style mixed in. Ave got this easy.

[Ibeechur Moms]

You're ugly - & we know you hate the truth
Attraction is about face, thas'why girls march away from you
That old without a trace of puberty, this guy is gay
All that peach fuzz could feed the bottom half of the United States
Body language says alot of things, like predictin I'm breakin this man
Cuz if he battles me, the outcome's already in the shape of his hands

^^ nice lines here....

vs.

.its like..
..peeps afraid to fly ..not cuz of altitude n metric..
scariest parts when da stewardess introduces passengers to Exit
..tell u whut.. fuk findin love.. make recent oaths..
to accumulate all da singles in ur town n buy some decent clothes
..n omg at ur shoes.. jus blast urself wit a shotty..
kicks dat bad wouldn’t even earn u a white belt in karate
..greasy nerd ..do u really think this coward's hard?
dude got enuff shine on his face to move a solar powered car
..i’ll shower bars ..claimin he carries guns n sells u see..
he’s great at spittin da A-K but has trouble recitin L thru Z
..it’s hell fo g .. u cant handle my power well..
ur elbows ashier than da outcome of when da towers fell


this was a FIYAAH battle IMO....Aven's one of my Fav's right now....but when I read Exit's for the first time...I really thought that Aven couldn't top that...that about face line's been done...but flipped it very nicely...but that singles line amongst others killed it..

vote= Aven

[john hensley]

vote-Aven


Exit came aight, he had that hand line that was nice, the peach fuzz, but the rest wasnt doin enough for me. Aven was goin pretty nice here, i liked alot of his lines

..greasy nerd ..do u really think this coward's hard?
dude got enuff shine on his face to move a solar powered car
..i’ll shower bars ..claimin he carries guns n sells u see..
he’s great at spittin da A-K but has trouble recitin L thru Z

^^good lines here, i liked the spellin one.

[Super.]

aven wins.