21. Revelations (6-0) vs. 22. Nefarious. (5-0)

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[Nefarious.]

Hi..
I like, the number, twelve.

['Revelations']

I hope you dont suck to have that record

[Nefarious.]

Me too :^). G'luck..

Everyone’s rooting for you, and it’s smart of my pears
Even I’m taking your side.. Wit a chainsaw to your ribs
Noone is fucking with Nef, so you better flee, whore
Ya not worth a hard spit.. So I’ll just slob on the keyboard
I stayed up late and wrote a hot verse to abuse, kid
Then seen your last drop and decided not to use it!
I admit: I had a drug problem that left me stranded & sick
Then I had a revelation.. And abandoned the kid!
^Ok.. Ok.. That was mediocre play & nothing of worth
See, I wanted to give’em a preview of your upcoming verse
Plus I’m done merking herbs.. you’re the last to fall
Rev was over my head.. Til he started sucking it; shaft & all

-How Does my dick taste, sweety?..

['Revelations']

Heh...


Knew ya record was fake....so Im here to take you down son
No showed not long ago, and booted in RBL Tourney's round one
I heard ya past audios, and I'll be honest..they had me dying...
Ya delivery was so bad that Pizza Hut got e-sued for bad driving
I leave this dumb fuck speechless....he dont know what to say..
By dishin out such a bad asswhoopin...he thought it was a buffet
I read ya verse, and damn man...RBL'll hate ya shit.....
It's cool to come played, but you exemplified ya past relationships
Sayin Im wack, but I put your shit to a screeching hault...
Cuz he's far from the truth.....and lives right nextdoor to false
Nef....your one ugly mother fucker honestly...I know it's sad dude
To have a face only a mother would love.....to deny she had you


Sucks not to have any family pictures, huh??

[Ethiquette]

vote-revel


Anyway, the battle wasn't as good as I thought it would've been with ya records

I didn't feel any lines in special, there was alotta played shit, like the Nef's verbal violence one, the keyboard thing & the 'preview youre verse'. Rev had the old buffet concept, and didnt really like his opener

In all, my vote goes to Rev, he didnt have as much old concepts as Nef, n originality is all 4 me

[D.A.N.G.E.R.]

Nef:

I stayed up late and wrote a hot verse to abuse, kid
Then seen your last drop and decided not to use it!
^^ight.

Rev:


Sayin Im wack, but I put your shit to a screeching hault...
Cuz he's far from the truth.....and lives right nextdoor to false
Nef....your one ugly mother fucker honestly...I know it's sad dude
To have a face only a mother would love.....to deny she had you
^^iight.

Vote-Rev

the reason he gets ma vote is he had ••••• punches...n i liked his verse more
came more consistant
but it was quiet a close battle...

['Revelations']

Originally Posted by Ethiquette

Anyway, the battle wasn't as good as I thought it would've been with ya records

Yes I agree...I really didnt put much effort this week honestly been busy as shit.....so I do apologize for coming a bit crud

[Super.]

upping.

[Eternalpath]

NEF

Everyone’s rooting for you, and it’s smart of my pears
Even I’m taking your side.. Wit a chainsaw to your ribs
Noone is fucking with Nef, so you better flee, whore
Ya not worth a hard spit.. So I’ll just slob on the keyboard

REV

I read ya verse, and damn man...RBL'll hate ya shit.....
It's cool to come played, but you exemplified ya past relationships
Sayin Im wack, but I put your shit to a screeching hault...
Cuz he's far from the truth.....and lives right nextdoor to false
Nef....your one ugly mother fucker honestly...I know it's sad dude
To have a face only a mother would love.....to deny she had you

NEF was aight...just not hard in the punches he did have..the drool on the keyboard is pretty weak..but anyway I think Rev had a better verse with his closer alone..good job fellas

my vote Revelations

[RdotC]

Vote rev....

the mother would love line was nice

Nef. just didnt have anything that really stood out to me

vote- Rev

[Exit Eight]

nefarious didnt really have any 'wow' punches

even though revs verse seemed rushed, the mother line was pretty sick

V- Revelations

[Ibeechur Moms]

Nef

Noone is fucking with Nef, so you better flee, whore
Ya not worth a hard spit.. So I’ll just slob on the keyboard
I admit: I had a drug problem that left me stranded & sick
Then I had a revelation.. And abandoned the kid!
^Ok.. Ok.. That was mediocre play & nothing of worth
See, I wanted to give’em a preview of your upcoming verse

vs.

Rev

Nef....your one ugly mother fucker honestly...I know it's sad dude
To have a face only a mother would love.....to deny she had you

^^^ that was sick...but the rest were not good at all besides the pizza hut line

this was close...but Imma go against yall and say Nef took this.....more consistent IMO

vote= Nef

[A-bomb inabowl]

nef...you started off good, but then you just startin spittin, and lost youre punches. too bad, i was gonna vote for ya. rev took it, he had some good punches. But all in all, i wasnt really impressed. Especially considering y'alls records


vote-revelations

[Frame]

I`m with Ibeech on this, I got nef winnin with one more bar. both came mediocre but thats really about it. i know both yall could do better then again aint this like yall 4th time battlin? oh well

vote/ - W1

[john hensley]

word, decent battle. I'm goin against the grain here though, doesnt look like it will matter, but i thought Nef was a bit better.

Both were aight, i thought Rev would come a bit nicer, i dont know shit about Nefarious, but i've heard Rev is nice. Both came aight, nothin bad or anything, just not stand out.

But i'm votin Nef on this, i thought he was more consistent and had me interested more.

[Yung Impression]

rev won this

he had better punches

but nef had some good lines

but Rev took this

vote=Rev

[Super.]

rev wins.