15. Smarty Pants (8-2) vs. 16. Frame (12-3)

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[Frame]

Inners, i`ll match you

[Smarty Pants]

Nice name. I'm gonna have field days on it. 16?

[Frame]

nothing you`ll say is gonna be new, so yeah 16s cool

frame work? frame of mind? knock you outta the frame? off the wall? all of its play dukes


*yawns*

i`m tired here`s a no show verse

they say ya girl fat as hell & i heard she on a diet, i`m not playin
you`d think that hoe is a major payne
..the way they keep that damon weigh-ins
lets stay on that subject, cuz its really fuckin stompin me
ya bitch dont got cellulites, she`s got a whole fuckin electric company
i`m jus fuckin around cuz i`m tired, but ya styles done
cuz when you drop verses you get more red lights than a luda album
ni.gg.a you cant see me, u get smashed with a latch
& i`ll put an edge to ya I - like the fucking championship match

[Smarty Pants]

Knock you into tommarow sonny, with a sprained fist and a cracked jaw
You're clearly out of the picture kid, so you know this Frame is too small
This cat honestly dropping a no-show verse?Put it in reverse dumb ho..
'Cause you'd have a better chance of winning if your verse no-showed.
Saying this shit on how your name is used out, ni66a shut up, you gay
Because these voters aint gonna lie when they say "Frame got played"
With one single hook and jab I'd easily knock the fuck outta this man...
But wait, OH SHIT!...actually that'll only eliminate his whole right hand..

[Super.]

upping.

[Frame]

lol an out of th picture line? ahah - oh well straight battle i suppose.

ups

[Eternalpath]

Smarty

Saying this shit on how your name is used out, ni66a shut up, you gay
Because these voters aint gonna lie when they say "Frame got played"

Frame

they say ya girl fat as hell & i heard she on a diet, i`m not playin
you`d think that hoe is a major payne
..the way they keep that damon weigh-ins

This battle was not as good as I expected...seeing a short verse and all. Thought u both would come with some heat...I think Frame really didnt try anything or go to hard... and smarty came with a couple lines that had some effect.. but the battle itself was boring..

My vote Smarty pants

[Exit Eight]

they say ya girl fat as hell & i heard she on a diet, i`m not playin
you`d think that hoe is a major payne
..the way they keep that damon weigh-ins
lets stay on that subject, cuz its really fuckin stompin me
ya bitch dont got cellulites, she`s got a whole fuckin electric company
ni.gg.a you cant see me, u get smashed with a latch
& i`ll put an edge to ya I - like the fucking championship match

v

With one single hook and jab I'd easily knock the fuck outta this man...
But wait, OH SHIT!...actually that'll only eliminate his whole right hand..


V- Frame


pretty obvious if you ask me....

[Ibeechur Moms]

vote = Frame

Smarty had the Frame was played line.....but that was it....the rest was blah....and I've seen this kid rip shit before...so this is suprising

Frame was average throughout....so yeah..I agree with Exit on this one

[RoddyPipez]

vote frame

reason - just personal.. but that whole verse structure was weird to me..i couldnt make out lines, icouldnt tell where the flow was.. i couldnt tell nothing.. the way you wrote it just raped it of all sense of rhyme.. and personally i aint like it. on the other hand..frame had a decent-fair verse,so i extend my vote to him

[john hensley]

Frame got this, neither were great. I liked Frames creativity more in this one, and he just came harder.

Even though Frame nameplays are a bit played, i liked the way this one was worded by Smarty

You're clearly out of the picture kid, so you know this Frame is too small

kinda cool.

vote-Frame

[Frame]

I voted on all top 30, holla if you need links

[Super.]

frame wins.