RBL Contendership Match: 3. Premonition 10-2 vs. 4. John Hensley 11-1

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MOD AIM CONTACTS:
-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - got you in czech
-USER - ton silvio
-Super. - oxnardquickie

[john hensley]

check, 16-20?


73. 6ft Deep (0-1) vs. 74. Defcon5 (0-1) vs. 75. ~!O!~ (2-3)
19. Riboclease 5-3 vs. 20. Ledge End 6-1
23. Macabre 3-0 vs. 24. That Nucca 3-0
7. shadows edge 15-4 vs. 8. Roddy Pipez 8-2
29. PITBOSS 2-0 vs. 30. Ace's Full 4-1
15. Quote 9-2 vs. 16. Spit That 10-3

[stickman]

yeah, whoever drops first...

RBL Championship Match: 1. Doc Richards 13-1 vs. 2. ill nik-A 18-4 vs. 2.5 Ideal 24-4
25. RdotC 2-1 vs. 26. LM 5-1
55. fast eddy (0-0) vs. 56. Urban LegendX (0-0)
61. The Joke (0-0) vs. 62. Deus-ex (0-0)
53. Osceola (0-0) vs. 54. sdizzle (0-0)
RBL Tourament Final Four: East - Doc Richards vs West - Aven Brooks

[john hensley]

hey, i need an extension if possible, i'll drop first thing tomorrow....i tried to get at the mods on AIM, but none of you are on at the moment.

[TRAP.]

Got You In Czech [9:21 PM]: it'd be better to talk to formal, super or user because im quitting modding the rbl tonight .. and leaving the website .. lol .. sorry ..
Got You In Czech [9:22 PM]: if you have an rbl question that is.
johnrussell20 [9:22 PM]: lmao
johnrussell20 [9:22 PM]: aight
johnrussell20 [9:22 PM]: yeah, i was gonna ask for an extension
johnrussell20 [9:22 PM]: but i'm headed out, do you think if they get on you can mention it or somethin, if not, i left it in the thread
johnrussell20 [9:22 PM]: and they arent on
Got You In Czech [9:22 PM]: i'll copy and paste this convo and just put it in your thread that says i granted the extension.
johnrussell20 [9:23 PM]: alright cool
johnrussell20 [9:23 PM]: thanks man
johnrussell20 [9:23 PM]: pz
Got You In Czech [9:23 PM]: .. as my last duty as a mod
Got You In Czech [9:23 PM]: pce
johnrussell20 [9:23 PM]: haha
johnrussell20 signed off at 9:23 PM

[Super.]

you both have 24 hours.

[stickman]

yeah, I'll post
the weekends are hectic..

[john hensley]

Yea, keep All Eyez On Me when i maul this snitch.
And check between ya thighs...
...if you Wonder Why They Call You Bitch.
You don't get talked to cuz i ignore the posers.
Playa, you need to Hang up the Mic like ya jordan posters.
You won 4 straight battles...but hold up bro, let's think.
Oh yeah! 3 straight no shows...and one cat didn't post his links.
Beyond that, there's somethin that we forgot to mention dude.
The fact that i beat you while you were 6-1..
..then you lost to Chee, so how the fuck are you 10 and 2?
You becomin one uh' my riders, everybody can see it ya trick.
I aint even near an Orgasm....but i still got Pre on my dick.
Stay on the sex lines, it's embarassin and now the fag is done.
Cuz i asked Trap for an extension...
...and every night your girls Trap asks for one.
Not only a fat bitch, she the type to neglect you on a date.
You must be patient with the sex...
...basically cuz you expect alot of wait.(weight)
Shit. we ain't wanna see ya, no way this hoe's the victor.
Never had an urge to see an Ugly Stick
...that's why i didn't ask you to post ya picture.
And as far as skills go, premonition is not a good thinker.
Cat needs to put the Keys Down like responsible drinkers.
Yea, i'll make you doubt, when i take you out ya minds feeble.
No fans, only cats feelin stick is Nascar drivers and Blind people.

[stickman]

it's trouble this rap
c'mon let's double it back
last time you beat me..
but I posted some bullshit, and still you struggled with that
another kid jockin Resin's style, kid is a retard
^ in just one line I've said more than you can in 3 bars
this shit'll hurt ya, that's what the fuck the truth's about
John's doing the "in thing" and got competition moving out
and how you 11-1? you ain't better than none of these kids
so they forgot one of my losses..
but dude, no one remembers even one of your wins
the sonning begins everytime I compete with nerds
if you got a appetite for destruction, you can eat ya words
this is easy, but I don't even like to battle a coward
if your wack shit is the status quo, I'm the balance of power
son my talents'll tower over you in this battle
n' you won't get no shine cuz you walkin in my shadow
everything 'bout you is fake, I'll merk this fallacy
and bury you in a shallow grave just to match your personality
all legit? nah son you're just talkin shit
you need to get a new style... call it quits
Stick is runnin this rap shit, going to the top duke
suck my dick... and enjoy whatever rank you drop to

[shadows edge]

hard battle vote on, real hard.... stick fed a bit, but had that sick remember your wins line.... then came funny with some othr shit, a couple nice cliche lines too. kinda overused them though.

john came with that serious personal style, i liked the feeling stick line, but you just had some shit that was a bit played.. like the hang the mic is kinda a flip on a really played wordplay (mic/jordan), and that weight/wait punch was blah.

i guess i give it to stick by an inch, just because he was a bit more consistent. but this was a good battle by both.

v. stick

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by john hensley

You becomin one uh' my riders, everybody can see it ya trick.
I aint even near an Orgasm....but i still got Pre on my dick.
Yea, i'll make you doubt, when i take you out ya minds feeble.
No fans, only cats feelin stick is Nascar drivers and Blind people.

Originally Posted by stickman

another kid jockin Resin's style, kid is a retard
^ in just one line I've said more than you can in 3 bars
and how you 11-1? you ain't better than none of these kids
so they forgot one of my losses..
but dude, no one remembers even one of your wins
everything 'bout you is fake, I'll merk this fallacy
and bury you in a shallow grave just to match your personality
all legit? nah son you're just talkin shit
you need to get a new style... call it quits

overall
I got stick winnin this...his lines were more raw...john only had tha 2 name plays...


vote=stick

1Ne

[That Nucca]

stick got this with harder personals...but some of his lines i dismissed cuz he fed...but going by the ones he didnt, he still took the battle, Jh only had the prejaculation line...thats it

[stickman]

more votes...

[MFB]

Dope battle ya'll. This def. was a quality battle to earn a shot at the champion. This is the first time i peeped any of your shit so it was interesting to see your styles. BOth came at eachothers neck well but i believe Premonition (stickman) was more consistent trhoughout his verse.. I caught myself saying "damn" more times with his personals then i did with Hensley's. Overall like i said before dope battle fella's but i was just feelin' Premonition's verse more. Goodluck to both competitors in the future.


vote - Premonition

[Opshins]

vote-stick

this battle was aight....stick got it easy tho...the remeber any of ur wins line...was flames.....stick got it on more dope lines basically

[Aven Brooks]

You won 4 straight battles...but hold up bro, let's think.
Oh yeah! 3 straight no shows...and one cat didn't post his links.
.. lol ..
.. da smiley on da next line made it more humorous lol ..

And as far as skills go, premonition is not a good thinker.
Cat needs to put the Keys Down like responsible drinkers.
Yea, i'll make you doubt, when i take you out ya minds feeble.
No fans, only cats feelin stick is Nascar drivers and Blind people.
.. this shit tho was sick ..

as fo Premonition..

another kid jockin Resin's style, kid is a retard
^ in just one line I've said more than you can in 3 bars
this shit'll hurt ya, that's what the fuck the truth's about
John's doing the "in thing" and got competition moving out
.. v. good ..

this is easy, but I don't even like to battle a coward
if your wack shit is the status quo, I'm the balance of power
everything 'bout you is fake, I'll merk this fallacy
and bury you in a shallow grave just to match your personality
.. feelin this alot ..


.. this is cuttin it close .. but by one or two more lines .. premonition got it .. good ish tho John ..

vote .. premonition

[Venamis]

v/ pre

I dont know this was pretty close in my opinion because Pre brought some punches that hit aiight just some of them were weak then stick like fell apart in his verse, I hate to see that when your structure just gets gay like that. Fuck that dude. Butta close battle feeling shit from both sides, just if you half ass it dont quarter ass it(stick).

[john hensley]

chea

make sure you post ya links playa, cuz you got this one.

[U S E R]

vote - stick


remember ur lines, and call it quits pretty much won it....hensely had a good verse...but the personals really gave stick the edge he needed for a win


good battle tho...

pz

[Spit That]

me actually got John tajing this...


You won 4 straight battles...but hold up bro, let's think.
Oh yeah! 3 straight no shows...and one cat didn't post his links.
Beyond that, there's somethin that we forgot to mention dude.
The fact that i beat you while you were 6-1..
..then you lost to Chee, so how the fuck are you 10 and 2?
You becomin one uh' my riders, everybody can see it ya trick.
I aint even near an Orgasm....but i still got Pre on my dick.
Stay on the sex lines, it's embarassin and now the fag is done.
Cuz i asked Trap for an extension...
...and every night your girls Trap asks for one.
And as far as skills go, premonition is not a good thinker.
Cat needs to put the Keys Down like responsible drinkers.
Yea, i'll make you doubt, when i take you out ya minds feeble.
No fans, only cats feelin stick is Nascar drivers and Blind people.
^^^I actually thought that all was fire...Punches were fresh...tho wait punch was hella played and so was the mic punch

Pre brought some freshness tho...another kid jockin Resin's style, kid is a retard
^ in just one line I've said more than you can in 3 bars
and how you 11-1? you ain't better than none of these kids
so they forgot one of my losses..
but dude, no one remembers even one of your wins
everything 'bout you is fake, I'll merk this fallacy
and bury you in a shallow grave just to match your personality
all legit? nah son you're just talkin shit
you need to get a new style... call it quits
^^All nice but

I thought that John just came more original and fresh..