19. Riboclease 5-3 vs. 20. Ledge End 6-1

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

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-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - got you in czech
-USER - ton silvio
-Super. - oxnardquickie

[Ribonuclease]

Checkin in, 20 lines

[Ribonuclease]

Your set second, hold up cuz what I said's pended
I just kept stompin I aint know the ledge ended,
See a fence bro? You better jump it fast as hell,
lock you up, trash ya cell, then ring ya caskets bell,
The master fell pass the L through my synonym vortex,
lost fair and square last week, your gimmick was short stretched!
So much semen on your face that your lips sailed to sea!
like hookers given snake bites this bitch failed to please!
You takin notes? I hope so, defeats a mofo,
Ill tie the rope slow, put it on you like a logo,
Dudes a bitch, he pop the coochie rockin gucci,
tell me to spit? Im about to hawk a loogie!
No time to write today, dude heard me, you dirty
my punch lines hit, make this youngin puke turkey
Im rippin ya broham, swinging with both hands,
you got frostbite from stickin ya dick in a snowman
sharp, made from a shark my rhymes are state of the art,
Legend? I could tell this fable was fake from the start,
this took me 5 minutes, I have to say so, my rap is fatal,
you still got served like the gravy on my mashed potatoes!

[ledge end]

LMFAO @ that verse, there nothin clever to substain
thats why I'll beat you ... with the last 4 letters of ur name
Come on kid get real, youll get scraped and spewed
You said I puked turkey,
but failed to mention the turkey i ate was you
man this bitch' is generic, an ima empower ya grief
then snatch the fuckin crown... right out of ur teeth
pretty vivid huh, yuh i thought i should speak it
cos knowledge is power ... an ur a weak bitch..
you can tell i keyed this, lol i don care ur not tough
but keep rhymin fam
^ see I support more kids then ur sock does..
but in all seriousness son, i dont like to catch the hype
and i know its pretty cool..
You got a record that match ya height..
yea this is the last line before im glarin out..
and i tol u to look on the brightside... but u can stop starin now..

uno.

[Super.]

upping.

[ledge end]

upping ...


eye'll edit links in here.

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[shadows edge]

v. ledge end

not a good verse by any measure, but i have no idea what the fuck ribo was doing. synonem vortex? no.

"you can tell i keyed this, lol i don care ur not tough
but keep rhymin fam
^ see I support more kids then ur sock does.."

good enough to tak this one.

v- ledge end

i liked the ease line. not the best verse, but it's a landslide victory because the other guy has a style that shouldn't have gotten him to top 30. no lines i liked at all.

[john hensley]

ribo has a nice flow, but that was about it.

ledge end had better lines, made me laugh a couple times, ease/closer/sock lines were all preetty solid so he gets the vote.

vote-Ledge End

[kyza soza]

Vote - Ledge.

Harder punches, more consistent. Thats about it, jsut harder.

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by ledge end

LMFAO @ that verse, there nothin clever to substain
thats why I'll beat you ... with the last 4 letters of ur name
you can tell i keyed this, lol i don care ur not tough
but keep rhymin fam
^ see I support more kids then ur sock does..

^^those were tha only lines worth quotin in this battle...ribo had a nice flow but nuthin great as far as punches go...



vote=ledge

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[That Nucca]

vote ledge rather easily...dont know what type of shit ribo was on...

damn his verse was wack... hawk a loogie? AHAHAHA damn

[I.deal]

ribo was gonna for the flow, and it was solid



but if you dont punch in the rbl you aint gonna win


v - ledge

[-ChOppA STyLE-]

you can tell i keyed this, lol i don care ur not tough
but keep rhymin fam
^ see I support more kids then ur sock does.."

lmao


ledge got this easily

[Osceola]

Ribonuclease.
--- aight opener. second couplet didn't have a punch. third couplet, didn't have a punch. aight wordplay on the fourth punch. wordplay ruined your fifth punch. sixth punch was too simplistic. no punch in the 7th couplet. frostbite/snowman line was weak. aight nameplay off legends name. last punch was ehh.


ledge end.
--- aight nameplay. turkey line was cool. crown/teeth line is was straight. power/weak line, was weak. next punch was weak. liked how you flipped the brightside/staring line.


ledge wins. he had a more consistent verse, with the best lines of the battle in it. ribo, work on your wittyness. you doin' alright, just up it some mayne.


V - ledge end

[Aven Brooks]

.. lol .. ledge end killed it .. imo fo a free ribo's verse was smooth but lacked da wittyness n 'oh' factor needed in a text verse .. ledge was effortless to read n came hard .. great combo ..

vote .. ledge end

[Spit That]

Vote-End

Not a great battle but he had that opener and fam and brightside were all fresh...

[U S E R]

ribo's got everything else down except punches....the MAIN thing


kid gets that aspect down...shitll be flames...i mean, if evidence serves...lol


but...in this match...ledge got the upper hand...sock line was jokes...

rest was kind of subpar...but you really only needed to be consistantly above ribo to get the W


which u did...

so... v - ledge

[NoShit Sherlock]

vote - Ledge

the other kid got all flow

no punches, so basically the battle is over

the sock line was flames

[Lares Viales]

yeah ribo I love the flow.. like user said I think you'd be real sick if you had some serious punches, and still kept the steady flow. Ledge didn't really have to try hard he had punches and that's what makes the battle you attack the opponent with a polish verse. His flow was decent everything else was coo. JUST enough to take the battle.

V- ledge.