RBL Tourament Final Four: East - Doc Richards vs West - Aven Brooks

FórmÅl LôGíc · 11-23-2004, 12:38 AM

Aven Brooks:

Doc Richards:

-ChOppA STyLE- · 11-23-2004, 01:25 AM

14

gluck man

Aven Brooks · 11-23-2004, 03:32 PM

.. nah .. we goin 20-24, bruda ..

Oliver_Thenet · 11-24-2004, 01:23 AM

good luck

i swear this better be fire or i'll kill you both.

Opshins · 11-24-2004, 02:23 AM

aven gone kill it

Aven Brooks · 11-26-2004, 02:18 PM

.. edit votes here ..

Doc Richards · 11-26-2004, 11:55 PM

word

24hurr ext

kkthnxbye

Super. · 11-27-2004, 03:48 AM

you both got 24 hours.

Aven Brooks · 11-27-2004, 08:31 PM

Demik aka Day aka Doc Richards aka Choppa Style:

it’s like..
..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity..
if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty
this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted..
1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started
..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer..
peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears
..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
..lose instead .. even Ill-Nik-A gotcha with tricks
learn from Ewing’s career ..it’s only downhill afta da nick’s
..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u..
aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view
.. i own u son ..i’ll take ur life strifin wit eagles
one look at ur saddled chin made horseback ridin illegal
..so suck my dick ..bitch ..I’ll buck ur shit..
an NHL caliber slapshot’s due next time u puck ur lips
..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight..
nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite
..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see
penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees
..so poke fun of my hand ..ur jokes fail cuz..
on aim he complimented how well cut my nail was
..ur pale cous.. da end’s where ya fates leadin..
8, 9, 10, Jack .. see, u’re da perfect Queen for this str8 beating

: ]

-ion- · 11-27-2004, 11:22 PM

ahhh fuck

*starts writing*

-ion- · 11-28-2004, 02:04 AM

now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
cause you outta place
this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics
droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
the pic's disturbing
i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
gotten to the final four cuz you cheatin whore
half rican half lebanese?
you only lookin forward to a taco cart in ya convenience store
the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
so sit back and think, of the hopes you turnin kid
cause i got dollar signs in my eyes
you- the finals of the tournament
all over me on aim, but i aint fearin ya talk
cause it looks like you got ya fuckin chain out a cereal box
so let me drop some shockin truth for this actor...
the kids really voted for you alot more...
when they thought they were ridin a fallen-off fracture
but they not, and when i drop, it's over
i was gonna give you deez-nuts
but you already got an acorn atop ya shoulders
so while im droppin knowledge, i just thought you should know
havin a .. in every one of ya lines...doesnt constiture flow
this bad boy pop singer, is caught between two words
faggot, you gonna spit battle lines...
or write me a song about cute girls?
Verse full of filler, champ?...pfft you aint fly dunn
im just scannin ya verse for a line without cliches...
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......I'll let you know when i find one.....

the finals'll look good on me

Island · 11-28-2004, 11:25 AM

Great match.

it’s like..
..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity..
if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty
this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted..
1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started
..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer..
peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears
..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u..
aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view
..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight..
nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite
..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see
penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees
..so poke fun of my hand ..ur jokes fail cuz..
on aim he complimented how well cut my nail was
..ur pale cous.. da end’s where ya fates leadin..
8, 9, 10, Jack .. see, u’re da perfect Queen for this str8 beating

vs

droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
the pic's disturbing
i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
all over me on aim, but i aint fearin ya talk
cause it looks like you got ya fuckin chain out a cereal box
so while im droppin knowledge, i just thought you should know
havin a .. in every one of ya lines...doesnt constiture flow
Verse full of filler, champ?...pfft you aint fly dunn
im just scannin ya verse for a line without cliches...
I'll let you know when i find one.....

Sorry Demik, Aven got you here nig. Besides a couple lines that were a miss hit he just got into that pic HARSH. You were very good- didn't like the racial jokes, we've all seen those before. The lines I quoted from you were nice though. But plain and simple, Aven just brought it. See you in the finals, chump.

Vote - Aven

J Dot C · 11-28-2004, 12:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aven Brooks

..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test..
don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest
..lose instead .. even Ill-Nik-A gotcha with tricks
learn from Ewing’s career ..it’s only downhill afta da nick’s
..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see
penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ion-

now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
cause you outta place
this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics
droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild
the pic's disturbing
i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child
the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see
ya eyes are so fuckin slanted
you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read...
so let me drop some shockin truth for this actor...
the kids really voted for you alot more...
when they thought they were ridin a fallen-off fracture

overall
I only liked 3 lines from ave...and tha kryptonite wuz just ok...wtf @ ur opener...if ur day? makes no sense at all...plus u barely dissed demik's pic...demik on tha other hand had sum funny shit...tha opener had me rollin...

vote=demik

1Ne

Oneduh · 11-28-2004, 04:53 PM

Aven killed it, pretty sure I know who you are, or atleast one of the people on that name.

Sick battle

Muffffy · 11-28-2004, 05:22 PM

aven's verse was no nowhere near equivalent to his last rounds

Demiks verse was very consistent

while aven's closer was played..and that crater shit from aven wasnt good

however avens Umm saddled shit was coo
now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics
cause you outta place
this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics/
LMFAO so true

v/demik

wordlife.

Opshins · 11-28-2004, 08:08 PM

vote-Aven

this battle was flames no doubt, props to both....Aven...killed it....he came with some concepts that had been used but gave them a fresh play....as well as his original lines which were fire...tourney fever was DOPE....demik came with some cool shit, convenience store line was hot....just felt Aven came more consistent with the dope lines....btw demik....ur a bitch if u try to get this discounted....i gave an honest vote

-ChOppA STyLE- · 11-28-2004, 08:10 PM

it's cool man

2-2 ave

Aven Brooks · 11-28-2004, 10:28 PM

.. J dot C.. his alias is Day.. says so on top of the verse.. n u couldve at least read my verse befo droppin dat lovely hate vote : ]

Links..
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...33post10596333
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10596383
RBL Tourament Final Four: North - Island vs South - J Dot C
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...61post10596561
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post10596667
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10596772

-ChOppA STyLE- · 11-28-2004, 11:13 PM

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FórmÅl LôGíc · 11-28-2004, 11:17 PM

Battles Open Til Tomorrow

11-23-2004, 12:38 AM	#1 (permalink)
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11-23-2004, 01:25 AM	#2 (permalink)
-ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: GAWGIA WOADI Posts: 422	14 gluck man __________________ text crew '05 bitches!

11-26-2004, 02:18 PM	#6 (permalink)
Aven Brooks .. bladerunner .. Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 327	.. edit votes here .. Last edited by Aven Brooks; 11-27-2004 at 08:59 PM.

11-28-2004, 04:53 PM	#14 (permalink)
Oneduh Wf. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 8,574	Aven killed it, pretty sure I know who you are, or atleast one of the people on that name. Sick battle __________________ shut the fuck up.

11-28-2004, 05:22 PM	#15 (permalink)
Muffffy I put Germany on the Map Join Date: May 2004 Location: 15 miles outta N.O Posts: 2,510	aven's verse was no nowhere near equivalent to his last rounds Demiks verse was very consistent while aven's closer was played..and that crater shit from aven wasnt good however avens Umm saddled shit was coo now, ave text battlin has some flaws in physics cause you outta place this bitch needa stick to racing honda civics/ LMFAO so true v/demik wordlife. __________________ DOHpe . ClasSick - Mets - John Hensley ARMZ- Muffffy- properHops - Deon - UserName - shake zula- Magus As a little kid taught to follow jesus Get to the front lines N im being led by elitists- Cage Last edited by Muffffy; 11-28-2004 at 05:49 PM.

11-23-2004, 03:32 PM	#3 (permalink)
Aven Brooks .. bladerunner .. Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 327	.. nah .. we goin 20-24, bruda ..

11-24-2004, 02:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
Opshins Dooooope Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 12,161	aven gone kill it

11-26-2004, 11:55 PM	#7 (permalink)
Doc Richards 5x RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Voted 2004's Best New Battler Posts: 1,636	word 24hurr ext kkthnxbye

11-27-2004, 03:48 AM	#8 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	you both got 24 hours.

11-27-2004, 08:31 PM	#9 (permalink)
Aven Brooks .. bladerunner .. Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 327	Demik aka Day aka Doc Richards aka Choppa Style: it’s like.. ..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity.. if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted.. 1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started ..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer.. peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears ..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test.. don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest ..lose instead .. even Ill-Nik-A gotcha with tricks learn from Ewing’s career ..it’s only downhill afta da nick’s ..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u.. aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view .. i own u son ..i’ll take ur life strifin wit eagles one look at ur saddled chin made horseback ridin illegal ..so suck my dick ..bitch ..I’ll buck ur shit.. an NHL caliber slapshot’s due next time u puck ur lips ..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight.. nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite ..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees ..so poke fun of my hand ..ur jokes fail cuz.. on aim he complimented how well cut my nail was ..ur pale cous.. da end’s where ya fates leadin.. 8, 9, 10, Jack .. see, u’re da perfect Queen for this str8 beating : ]

11-28-2004, 11:25 AM	#12 (permalink)
Island I-LAND Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 99	Great match. it’s like.. ..ur fecal n gritty ..he reekin in pity.. if ur Day ..then I can already predict da rest of da week’ll be shitty this geek’ll be giddy ..get gassed n parted.. 1 sniffle from ur church bell nose indicates that mass has started ..ur last to start shit ..i’m sodomizing this queer.. peep headphones ..it look like 2 anthills colonized on his ears ..da bottom line is in here.. i stoop to test.. don’t get excited ..ur tourney fever’s easly cured by soup n rest ..laugh at dis dick ..i cant stand da wind of u.. aisle seatin in planes increased afta seein ur window view ..cluck u bitch ..now u have to fight.. nostrils so big he looked up n 2 craters got picked up on satellite ..got me laughin ight ..u stall when u see penis is ur kryptonite ..its quick to make u fall on ur knees ..so poke fun of my hand ..ur jokes fail cuz.. on aim he complimented how well cut my nail was ..ur pale cous.. da end’s where ya fates leadin.. 8, 9, 10, Jack .. see, u’re da perfect Queen for this str8 beating vs droppin hot in the battle? you fairin mild the pic's disturbing i never expected tek and super dooper to bear a child the pic disses itself, its not hard for me, see ya eyes are so fuckin slanted you gotta hold ya pupils straight when you read... all over me on aim, but i aint fearin ya talk cause it looks like you got ya fuckin chain out a cereal box so while im droppin knowledge, i just thought you should know havin a .. in every one of ya lines...doesnt constiture flow Verse full of filler, champ?...pfft you aint fly dunn im just scannin ya verse for a line without cliches... I'll let you know when i find one..... Sorry Demik, Aven got you here nig. Besides a couple lines that were a miss hit he just got into that pic HARSH. You were very good- didn't like the racial jokes, we've all seen those before. The lines I quoted from you were nice though. But plain and simple, Aven just brought it. See you in the finals, chump. Vote - Aven

11-28-2004, 08:08 PM	#16 (permalink)
Opshins Dooooope Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 12,161	vote-Aven this battle was flames no doubt, props to both....Aven...killed it....he came with some concepts that had been used but gave them a fresh play....as well as his original lines which were fire...tourney fever was DOPE....demik came with some cool shit, convenience store line was hot....just felt Aven came more consistent with the dope lines....btw demik....ur a bitch if u try to get this discounted....i gave an honest vote

11-28-2004, 08:10 PM	#17 (permalink)
-ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: GAWGIA WOADI Posts: 422	it's cool man 2-2 ave __________________ text crew '05 bitches!

11-28-2004, 10:28 PM	#18 (permalink)
Aven Brooks .. bladerunner .. Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 327	.. J dot C.. his alias is Day.. says so on top of the verse.. n u couldve at least read my verse befo droppin dat lovely hate vote : ] Links.. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...33post10596333 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post10596383 RBL Tourament Final Four: North - Island vs South - J Dot C http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...61post10596561 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post10596667 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10596772

11-28-2004, 11:13 PM	#19 (permalink)
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