17. Butler 13-3 vs 18. Quote 8-1

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[Butler]

in...

[Mr. Quote]

ten.

[Butler]

look,
junior

i ain't heard a' you before, i guess u'v hardly been noticed.
so ur 8-1 record just proves the skill level of all ur opponents
i'll open chambers when i paint the grill.
wit enuff shells on da man to raise this muh fuckas cable bill
ur a bum Quote. ya money in the bank is thin.
ya whole wardrobe's second hand. could replace big ben's
listen kid. i'm gonna punk ya shit.
my uppercuts'll knock ya face up. an leave the kids motherless
ya scripts r just bogus Quote. get into focus
u need to polish up so much: here's plane tickets to poland
,,i'm your idol. dissin my work is thoughtless
shit quote'll catch the right hook,
'n prolly try to write some verses for it

^see i could drop clever shit. or just make fun a' this geek
either way his dome's catchin' the top 12 punches this week

all u get. busy

[Mr. Quote]

lol wow
thanks

Butlers raw as fuck -
but ya first name ain't Caron.. ur weightless
13-3 till the Heat left ya & introduced you to a rapist
fuck this rookie, i'll swing fists n' leave u w/ whip lash
ya whole verse was an underscore as if you held down shift dash
i'ma pound the livin daylights out ya, leave ya eyes tinted
& i'd call it a day - but then again you wouldnt know the difference
lol @ this wannabe, quotes takin his pay off
cuz i'm the reason this broke ass butler got laid off
Quote'll knock a screw lose, you know i'm doin' ya wrong
& have ya pattern turn more colors than a louis vuitton
not tryin hard on you, i done paid my dues
cuz butlers really only good for polishin' my shoes
ur verse was garbage & to think it was ya best
i'ma handcuff ya tongue to give your mouth arrest

[Nique...]

Smh, did you ask Com to use that line? You know, your closer?

im sorry.... but butler from rap-concepts?

[Mr. Quote]

Originally Posted by Nique...

Smh, did you ask Com to use that line? You know, your closer?

shut your mouth unless you know what you're talking about, slut.

its recycled, i used it months ago on RB

[U S E R]

i gotta go with butler


quote came cool and all, but butlers got that raw edge to his lines that makes his shit stand out more


quote had some cool ideas tho...like the shift dash shit...coulda been done a lot better tho

plus like u said the closers been done before, so that took off some originality points there

overall, like i said, i gotta go with butler


cool battle

pz

[TRAP.]

upping for votes.

[Mr. Quote]

Originally Posted by U S E R

i gotta go with butler


quote came cool and all, but butlers got that raw edge to his lines that makes his shit stand out more


quote had some cool ideas tho...like the shift dash shit...coulda been done a lot better tho

plus like u said the closers been done before, so that took off some originality points there

overall, like i said, i gotta go with butler


cool battle

pz

good looks, appreciate it

i didn't really care cuz i was tired last night and had no lines written

so i recycled one bar, but it was from a 1-2 punch league on RB which i know most of you aren't from so that shouldn't take originality away.

[U S E R]

you mightve recycled it word for word

but concept wise, its been done before...thats more what i meant, man

pz

[Mr. Quote]

ooo alright i gotcha, thanks

vote up

[Ibeechu Farensqure]

butler killed this....

quote...straight verse...closer was pretty tight...i think i've seen it before though

but damn...butler quotes


i'll open chambers when i paint the grill.
wit enuff shells on da man to raise this muh fuckas cable bill
ur a bum Quote. ya money in the bank is thin.
ya whole wardrobe's second hand. could replace big ben's
listen kid. i'm gonna punk ya shit.
my uppercuts'll knock ya face up. an leave the kids motherless
ya scripts r just bogus Quote. get into focus
u need to polish up so much: here's plane tickets to poland
,,i'm your idol. dissin my work is thoughtless
shit quote'll catch the right hook,
'n prolly try to write some verses for it

almost his entire verse.....some clever shit this week B

vote= butler

[Mr. Quote]

= \

did he really?

hmm.. i'm rusty

good battle

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by Butler

i'll open chambers when i paint the grill.
wit enuff shells on da man to raise this muh fuckas cable bill
^see i could drop clever shit. or just make fun a' this geek
either way his dome's catchin' the top 12 punches this week

Originally Posted by Mr. Quote

fuck this rookie, i'll swing fists n' leave u w/ whip lash
ya whole verse was an underscore as if you held down shift dash
Quote'll knock a screw lose, you know i'm doin' ya wrong
& have ya pattern turn more colors than a louis vuitton

overall
both had played shit...but best line I think wuz tha underscore one...


vote=quote

1Ne

[ill nik-A]

I actually liked Butler's better overall verse & yea that arrest line has been done plenty of ways, shft dash line was kool though for Quote


vote-Butler

[Doc Richards]

i'll open chambers when i paint the grill.
wit enuff shells on da man to raise this muh fuckas cable bill
^see i could drop clever shit. or just make fun a' this geek
either way his dome's catchin' the top 12 punches this week


niceness there


Quote'll knock a screw lose, you know i'm doin' ya wrong
& have ya pattern turn more colors than a louis vuitton

clever


in the end, butler gets it on consistency

[Mr. Skull]

i'll open chambers when i paint the grill.
wit enuff shells on da man to raise this muh fuckas cable bill
^see i could drop clever shit. or just make fun a' this geek
either way his dome's catchin' the top 12 punches this week

Ether by Butler..

dope ish..

vote - Quote

[Evangalist]

both had some hot shit

but all my fav. lines from this battle were from butler , poland , de man and a few others

vote - Butler , stronger, wittier punches