East Round 2: 2. Doc Richards vs 7. Savir

[TRAP.]

The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


-NO 1 Sentence Voting


MOD AIM CONTACTS:
-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - got you in czech
-demik - akademik416

[Savir]

In..


Goodluck.

[Camber]

lets make it pic


12

[Savir]

I expected this, but nah...

1) What hasn't been said about your pic?
2) I don't have one. No camera phone, no digital shit, no scanner.

:(

[Savir]

nvm. I'll try....but I'll do it later.

[Savir]

gl




Dem's girl is mine....this faggot just sits on the shelf
the bitch'll bore one helluva seed....while you fuckin bore everyone else
I'll send em to hell, the old vet'll get served up
cuz by the age of your concepts we can tell how mature verse sucked
& he's a disappointment, i'll leave frowns on this scared bitch
with shot's at chagrin, that'll leave you a lot more than embarrassed
what's with the pic battles? you know this loser is done with
when he shows his face online....more than he does in public
Fucka gets bruised in fights, he's the sore loser type
you bout to get raped worse than when you faced Booga at Hype
I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
& throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars




shieet...

[Doc Richards]

how to NOT flip a line

ima bash his fucking skull, watch me blaze this fucka
have em run and hide in the caves that I left in his facial structure- Savir last week

have prospectors diggin out the caves left in his chest- Inkwell 6 months ago





fact is, you predictable, i know what comes with this geek..
stretched lines....played punches....and a vote from nique


it's serious
sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
...like abortion clinics
the voice in ya head gassin you is trickin in the fight
it'll go off when i shut the door on ya ass
like the refridgerator light
reppin RapBattles cause no other site wants him
only raised the people's eyebrows...
when ya shit hit rock bottom
Stuck on this text shit...your the type we'll never see blow
& you had your shot at greatness...then you opted to reload
the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
similar to your voting style



anyone who says the three-line style compromises flow...just dont vote


word;round 3;word

[Criteria]

v/ Doc Richards

just came across smoother..id say it was pretty close content-wise, but demik
came wittier, the closer was nice & a few others.

Sevir had some personals, but werent creative enough nor excecuted well-enough to be like dope..

[Super.]

I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
& throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

LOL. nice. the pic thing was cool too. thought the rest was blah though, lots of played concepts.

it's serious
sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey

lmao, this was pretty sick. rock bottom was cool too.

v-Demik

savir didnt bring it like last round, if he did he wouldve gotten the W prolly. he had two line i liked and demik had 2lines i liked as well, but i felt demik was more consistent. he had other decent shit and savir had a lot of that blah shit i wasnt felin. u know ur my boy, but i felt u got the L.

lol @ How to not flip a line.

Vote Demik Richards

Just an overall better verse. Quit using that fucking reload line tho, I hate it.

[headless verseman]

I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
& throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

cool line, only line demik really had that was dope


this also proves super's a fuckin idiot, cuz that rock bottom line was terrible





doc had a KILLER beginning

it's serious
sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
...like abortion clinics

and this

Stuck on this text shit...your the type we'll never see blow
& you had your shot at greatness...then you opted to reload
the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
similar to your voting style

decent ending



fridge line was utter garbage, so was the rock bottom line


but i got doc wit the upset, think demik coasted cuz his quotables were lackin, but beyond that, he just didnt CLOWN doc

[Doc Richards]

ok wait


Doc Richards= Demik
Savir-= Savir



so its 4-0 me

[Trombley]

headless voting was so horrible its sad. how does he not know demik is doc when they are in the same crew?

what's with the pic battles? you know this loser is done with
when he shows his face online....more than he does in public
Fucka gets bruised in fights, he's the sore loser type
you bout to get raped worse than when you faced Booga at Hype
I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
& throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

savir had these lines here that were ok the rest was bullshit


i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
...like abortion clinics

this was line of the battle

Stuck on this text shit...your the type we'll never see blow
& you had your shot at greatness...then you opted to reload
the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
similar to your voting style

this capped off an ok verse, but the rest was wack. closer was ironic

close battle but the winner here is demik. he just had a better verse i believe

[shadows edge]

I'll send em to hell, the old vet'll get served up
cuz by the age of your concepts we can tell how mature verse sucked
& he's a disappointment, i'll leave frowns on this scared bitch
with shot's at chagrin, that'll leave you a lot more than embarrassed
I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
& throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars


vs

it's serious
sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
...like abortion clinics


Tough... some personals from both, but savir doesn't have a voting ring, so that ones kinda gay. anyway, demik probably had the nicest lines, but also the worst ones.... savir had more consistently fresh lines, not bad wordplay.

v. savir

tight battle though...

[Yo Razah]

Savir had the stone wall line, rest was blah..

Demik had this

fact is, you predictable, i know what comes with this geek..
stretched lines....played punches....and a vote from nique


& the abortion line


vDemik

[Nique...]

-Looks at Demiks line & his voting ring & then Razah's hate vote.

V/Savir.

You guys might as well put Demik in the Finals. Dickriding faggots.

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by Savir

I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
& throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

Originally Posted by Doc Richards

fact is, you predictable, i know what comes with this geek..
stretched lines....played punches....and a vote from nique
it's serious
sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
...like abortion clinics
the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
similar to your voting style

overall
savir only had 1 good line...demik had more...he wins...


vote=demik

1Ne

[Muffffy]

this is a tragedy.

demik won..but to say that most of sevir's verse was blah

...u must be fucking crazy

im not voting..its pointless..

[God Speed.]

Originally Posted by Muffffy

this is a tragedy.

demik won..but to say that most of sevir's verse was blah

...u must be fucking crazy

im not voting..its pointless..

im gonna pretend all i seeis demik won

[Savir]

Good battle Doc...read your verse and thought it would be close, but
I was already losing before the verses were up.