East Round 2: 12. Opshins vs 13. Shadow's Edge

[TRAP.]

The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


-NO 1 Sentence Voting


MOD AIM CONTACTS:
-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - got you in czech
-demik - akademik416

[shadows edge]

14 or so...

1. South Round 2: 3. P Nut vs 6. Navara
2. South Round 2: 2. J Dot C vs 10. Spit That
3. East Round 2: 2. Doc Richards vs 7. Savir
4. East Round 2: 1. Tang vs 8. Vadik
5. South Round 2: 4. Silentt vs 5. Headless Verseman
6. North Round 2: 11. Dr Cause vs 14. Eternal Path

[Opshins]

word....14-16

[AlphaOmni]

vote-AlphaOmni


the verse was hard hitting, punches were there, the flow was IMMACULATE and the other verse was blah. i really liked AO's opening lines, some shit in the middle and his closer was killer! keep it up guy, you're one of the dopest here!!

pz

[Opshins]

yo yo.....u get, ewxactly 14 minutes of my time

I heard u rollin on spree’s, leave this backstreet shook
Tryna pick up girls, but ur sprees the kind that give u athletes foot
Ya cliqs is scarred, no one thinks this bitch is hard
I’ll make ya deal with so much pain you’ll get brocheurs and business cards
Witness son, how I can take old concepts into new shit
Id say put ya money where ya mouth is but I aint touch some dudes dick
Im givin it to u straight, shit cats gone feel
Punches leave ya face so caved Bruce could park his bat mobile
Yous a gay kid, I dun mean to indulge
But once duke saw me he turned it into the Battle of the Bulge
ya not seein me, ya level? im steps ahead of it
I'm quick to butcher S like kids with speech impediments
Ya such a gay fuck, rainbows I seen ya flashin it
Coz u been in more manholes then sewer management
I’m bringin heat, now ya in some peril
I’d tell u to do the same, but movers wont ship ya garbage barrel


come correct

[shadows edge]

i beat alpha... now this?

i'm bound to win, what fate wrote's shown so true
when ya couldn't even get alpha's hate vote to go for you
opshins bring the 1-2? ya must be dense dude
i'd only be facing fists of fury... if he actually tried against you
cuz see there's elite soldiers, but now you've shown us
that you can be special ops... just by riding the short bus
& everybody know, ya suck at audio, bitch trust
cuz it goes to show... and then it fucking leaves in disgust
ya shit's got our ears searing, earning this beating
now i just hope my sense of duty... can replace my lost hearing
your elimination nearing, & i'd say its in sight now
but your punches mist so bad, i'd require a fucking lighthouse
acting tight now, won't even know what hit ya
so shadow with ease'll beat ya... then use it to paint you a picture
ugly fuck, you're messing with the wrong guy
cuz harsher than your facial features, are the feature getting stomped by

[Eternalpath]

Opshins

Im givin it to u straight, shit cats gone feel
Punches leave ya face so caved Bruce could park his bat mobile

same concept just flipped diffrent....

ya not seein me, ya level? im steps ahead of it
I'm quick to butcher S like kids with speech impediments
Ya such a gay fuck, rainbows I seen ya flashin it
Coz u been in more manholes then sewer management

not bad...thought that was your best lines of your battle....some was eh but not bad for r 12...

Shawdows...

& everybody know, ya suck at audio, bitch trust
cuz it goes to show... and then it fucking leaves in disgust
ya shit's got our ears searing, earning this beating
now i just hope my sense of duty... can replace my lost hearing

not bad there...you started off slow but finished well...

Both verses were pretty even to me..both had a few lines that was aight...to good...nothing special nothing eye popping... Since your waiting on my vote..

My vote Opshins....thought he edged it...IMO...good battle for the ranks

[Opshins]

word em up...nice verse dunny....more votes

[Worst Enemy]

Opshins: Alot of your lines, were dull. Im sorry to say but they were. You had one or two nice lines, flow was alright. Average verse ya know.

Shadows Edge: Seems like you went out on a limb, and risk trying to be creative. Four of five of your lines hit, flow was coo althou rough in some places.

V: Shadows Edge.
Reason: More of his punches hit harder. Better verse overall.

[Ibeechu Farensqure]

Op

Im givin it to u straight, shit cats gone feel
Punches leave ya face so caved Bruce could park his bat mobile
Ya such a gay fuck, rainbows I seen ya flashin it
Coz u been in more manholes then sewer management


shadow...


i'm bound to win, what fate wrote's shown so true
when ya couldn't even get alpha's hate vote to go for you
& everybody know, ya suck at audio, bitch trust
cuz it goes to show... and then it fucking leaves in disgust
ya shit's got our ears searing, earning this beating
now i just hope my sense of duty... can replace my lost hearing
acting tight now, won't even know what hit ya
so shadow with ease'll beat ya... then use it to paint you a picture
ugly fuck, you're messing with the wrong guy
cuz harsher than your facial features, are the feature getting stomped by


good verse from Opshins...but better verse by Shadows....

can't believe this battle was at least twice as good as Syn's and Num's but whateva....

vote= Shadow's Edge

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by Opshins

ya not seein me, ya level? im steps ahead of it
I'm quick to butcher S like kids with speech impediments
Ya such a gay fuck, rainbows I seen ya flashin it
Coz u been in more manholes then sewer management

Originally Posted by shadows edge

i'm bound to win, what fate wrote's shown so true
when ya couldn't even get alpha's hate vote to go for you
& everybody know, ya suck at audio, bitch trust
cuz it goes to show... and then it fucking leaves in disgust
your elimination nearing, & i'd say its in sight now
but your punches mist so bad, i'd require a fucking lighthouse

overall
close one here...I thought op wuz gonna win before readin tha verses...but I don't think he put in 100%...only felt 2 of his lines as opposed to 3 from shadow...


vote=shadow

1Ne

[Opshins]

uppin

[I.deal]

vote - opshins


i liked his a verse a bit better. the first 4 bars from shadow were slow. he did pick it up from there, but i dont think it was enough... on a side note, cave lines are verrrry played.

[Opshins]

2-3...uppin

[Super.]

Witness son, how I can take old concepts into new shit
Id say put ya money where ya mouth is but I aint touch some dudes dick

that and manholes were cool. but gay, very gay. rest wasn't really good.


opshins bring the 1-2? ya must be dense dude
i'd only be facing fists of fury... if he actually tried against you
cuz see there's elite soldiers, but now you've shown us
that you can be special ops... just by riding the short bus

nice, nice. mist line was nasty as well. pretty nice verse IMO. never seen you drop like that.


v-Shadows
he had more nice lines, more personals, and he brought that nasty shit. mist, first of fury, short bus were all nice. opshins had the money line and manholes that were kinda cool, that's it though. shadows gets it on overall appeal and consistancy.

[ill nik-A]

this was close...at first I was leaning towards Osphins but I re-read though Shadow had more cliche shit it was harder hitting, though I liked Osphin's bat mobile, brocheur and speech impediment


vote-Shadow

Opshins need some fresh material.

[TRAP.]

shadows wins.