West: 5. Aven Brooks vs 12. Pav

[TRAP.]

The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


-NO 1 Sentence Voting


MOD AIM CONTACTS:
-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - jaysus chrLst
-demik - akademik416

[Pav_]

Im down for anything under 16

[Aven Brooks]

.. in .. 16-20 .. early ..

[Pav_]

Aven Brooks?

Washed up and talking shit, thats what this fags about.
Aven's alot like storm g, but has nothing in the past to brag about.
So listen brook, your not a thug!! so why you talking that crap?.
When you prolly.
Have glasses so thick, you could see people walking on maps!!.
How could you even pretend to be like that?? you should be strangled.
Rockin jeans so tight, that even your farts'll come out ya ankles.
Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.
So now your on ya knees prayin for loads, like you had a fucked up ps2.
& me winning this match is a given, without that bull or doubt.
Cuz ill stay stompin a mudhole in your ass till it resembles your house.
& voters dont like rookies or noobs, so there isnt no hope for you.
Unless you make a name for yourself.. then use it to vote for you.
The rbl tourny is for the best of the best & your trash kid.
& If I was formal, I'd transfer your wack ass to the halloween havoc.

Mawfucka..

[Oliver_Thenet]

bravo at the map line pav
nice shit

[Pav_]

Thanks duke

[Aven Brooks]

who says fart in a battle?


it's like ..
..when i get wyle ur style gets ended..
if ur Pa, consider this the re-enactment of Eric & Kyle Menendez
..look at Oliver.. that fake hurrah shows
There's Starz, HBO, Showtime & all he gave u was a Bravo
..u whack ho.. i aint like other sound vets,
ostriches prefer decapitation ever since u became an underground head
..surround lead.. no one knows or wants to have u..
What, Why & When feel left out since it's always Pav Who?
..outrap u.. a deaf crooks runnin..
he too busy fightin fo Women's Rights to see a left hook comin'
..u look sonned n .. just quit fag..
fuck studios, animal cruelty can't even motivate u to hit Labs
..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt
..get creamed n hurt.. u cant see me, g..
abusin ya powers will only scratch ya Goldmember DVD
..after this I'll be in CB3.. but the God's calm..
ur sexlife has a Beverly Hills background.. n!gga it involves Palms

[Super.]

HOLY SHIT ON

[Mr. Skull]

Vote - Aven Brooks

Pav - the walking on maps line was the only line you had

Aven - Menendez bros. bravo (good way of flipping that.), lab and tide lines

[Hating Mantis]

Yeah

[-Oz-]

Good battle.

Pav

So listen brook, your not a thug!! so why you talking that crap?.
When you prolly.
Have glasses so thick, you could see people walking on maps!!.

Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.
So now your on ya knees prayin for loads, like you had a fucked up ps2.

These were dope

Washed up and talking shit, thats what this fags about.
Aven's alot like storm g, but has nothing in the past to brag about.

This was aight

But lines like these were just awful man.

Rockin jeans so tight, that even your farts'll come out ya ankles.
Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.

& voters dont like rookies or noobs, so there isnt no hope for you.
Unless you make a name for yourself.. then use it to vote for you.

Still, your getting better. This is the first time Ive seen a verse from you with original ideas in a while. Keep on truckin mufucka.

Aven Brooks

..u whack ho.. i aint like other sound vets,
ostriches prefer decapitation ever since u became an underground head'

..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt

These were dope, altho both of the second lines suffer from bad wording. Try taking out some of the unecessary words.

..get creamed n hurt.. u cant see me, g..
abusin ya powers will only scratch ya Goldmember DVD

This was good

..u look sonned n .. just quit fag..
fuck studios, animal cruelty can't even motivate u to hit Labs

This is horribly played, cant believe skull liked it lol

In the end you both had about the same amount of lines I liked. I would say Aven had my fav line, being the Ostriche one. But what really fucked Pav was a terrible fart line, never use one again, they ruin verses man. Especially in a battle THIS close, it was sadly a deciding factor in my vote for

Aven Brooks

Good battle tho.

[Ibeechu Farensqure]

Aven won....

I pretty much agreed with everything OZ said except for the Tide line...because I flipped that one before...so it didn't seem as fresh to me.

Pav....you had some good shit too, but I think you just underestimated your opponent.

[Savir]

maps line was ass, some kid sold me that joke on a paper
for 5 cents when I was in the 3rd grade.


anyway..

Pav.

No quotable lines. Mudhole I seen done a couple of time, and both
were better than yours. 'vote for you' type of shit is boring. And I don't
really care if he farts in tight pants.


Aven Brooks


..look at Oliver.. that fake hurrah shows
There's Starz, HBO, Showtime & all he gave u was a Bravo

^^^
Nice, now Pav knows how dickriders work against you.

Ostrich line was a bit of a stretch, not bad concept though...

..surround lead.. no one knows or wants to have u..
What, Why & When feel left out since it's always Pav Who?
..outrap u.. a deaf crooks runnin..
he too busy fightin fo Women's Rights to see a left hook comin'

^^^^^
Owned.

..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt
^^^^
good

palms wasn't good, and lab was meh as well..but you won this


vote/ Aven Brooks

[Oliver_Thenet]

geez
pav u got kinda merked here dunny

the mendez and bravo lines did you in

all i liked was the map line

vote aven

[That Nucca]

lmao...first decent battle ive seen in the tourney...

pav came decent...after the first half of his verse he started doin good...

but

aven brooks really killed him, i admit i didnt understand the first line, but after that everything else was good...the tide line was sick...and his personals were nice...

vote Aven

[B L E S S]

v- Aven

first dude was iight, but wholly outshined tho'..

[Oliver_Thenet]

Originally Posted by Savir

..look at Oliver.. that fake hurrah shows
There's Starz, HBO, Showtime & all he gave u was a Bravo

^^^
Nice, now Pav knows how dickriders work against you.

i just peeped this..im the LAST nig you will ever see dickryde
i dont even like pav...thus the bravo...cuz usually i cant stand his shit

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by Pav_

How could you even pretend to be like that?? you should be strangled.
Rockin jeans so tight, that even your farts'll come out ya ankles.
Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.
So now your on ya knees prayin for loads, like you had a fucked up ps2.

Originally Posted by Aven Brooks

it's like ..
..when i get wyle ur style gets ended..
if ur Pa, consider this the re-enactment of Eric & Kyle Menendez
..look at Oliver.. that fake hurrah shows
There's Starz, HBO, Showtime & all he gave u was a Bravo
..u whack ho.. i aint like other sound vets,
ostriches prefer decapitation ever since u became an underground head
..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt
..after this I'll be in CB3.. but the God's calm..
ur sexlife has a Beverly Hills background.. n!gga it involves Palms

overall
ab won...more dope lines...only like 2 from pav...and wtf at everyone sayin that map line is dope...shit's an old ass momma joke from like 12 years ago...


vote=aven

1Ne

[DiViNeHaTrEd]

who is Aven?
I like dude's creative lines, the Pa and Bravo lines were on some witty shit.
Pretty good, reminds me of a few people with a different, watered down style.

[EYE-Z]

aven raped the kid