East: 4. AlphaOmni vs 13. Shadows Edge

[TRAP.]

The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


-NO 1 Sentence Voting


MOD AIM CONTACTS:
-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - jaysus chrLst
-demik - akademik416

[shadows edge]

In. I'm going 14-20.

East: 1. Tang vs 16. Nefarious.
West: 6. STORM GOD vs 11. Mufffy
West: 7. Orbit Einstein vs 10. Mr. Quote
South: 2. J Dot C vs 15. Gerald Morgan
South: 1. Blackdef vs 16. LM
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post10310637

[AlphaOmni]

alright sounds good i will match your 20 and raise you 4


maybe.



votes:

West: 8. Eyedill vs 9. Young Lac

[AlphaOmni]

You shouldn't even be here Shadows, my flow alone will beat you...


Rivers inkin the dope quotes… sinkin this choked hoax
Left drowned in his own sorrow for thinkin his hope floats

intro

Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows

punch

I’m quick to sever ya steeze, a deadly predator clever indeed
Alpha could make an ‘Atheist prey’ …competitors better believe

bragging

Ya can’t get more from a rhyme, I’ll leave ya forced to resign
For being big-headed with a brain mass just a portion of mine

punch

Rivers callin ya bluff, and in battle that’ll cost you a crutch
Cuz you can’t expect to get props if you’re soft to the touch

punch

He can’t match me, my style is nicely flowed and its doper
This runner-up is losing hands-down, like he folded in poker

bragging/punch

Last time we battled was childs play… you surely remember
Funny how Edge hasn’t yet grown into a worthy contender

punch

I’m raw with rhyme, you won’t get ahead with appallin lines
…Since Shadows have always been known to just, ‘fall behind’

wordplay

You got a flawed design, plus ya rappin’s more than sad
Rivers got a leg-up more times than a Captain Morgan’s ad

bragging

You’ve wasted life as a small fry, so now you’ll die as it too…
Face it Edge, even your own PUNCHES stack higher than you

punch

Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it

punch

I got the right maneuvers, kid you only spit hype and rumors
We battled once before… but Edge is leaving here twice the loser

bragging/closer


JUST to clarify for you kids. it's obvious you guys don't understand the process behind writing a well-rounded verse. ya know just cuz a verse has a masterful flow, DOES NOT MEAN IT SACRIFICES CONTENT INSTANTLY. you can have multis flow and punches. its not just about punches.

[Young Lac]

flow was nasty on that verse...

[Lares Viales]

beef aside..

pretty good shit.

[shadows edge]

when did we ever battle?

ao's plan is simple, think he'd just show n win,
had one RBL battle just to shake the rust off... that voting ring
best quit gloating kid, cuz i see right through you
such a fucking wi.gger, even the whites of his eyes are rockin fubu
kid i'll school you, its part of the journey
so learn youre lesson.... every other fucking person in the tourney
ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches
see my hunch is, i could beat you if i had just one thrown
cuz you can call my lines wack.... & finally be bad to the bone
i more than hold my own, they lied to ya, punk
cuz fuck taking a back seat to me, this bitch is tied up in the trunk
all of ya lines are junk, you're barely a factor
so when i drop, best settle for second cuz only a minute after
& you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
your disgracing... money, job... fam wish you had this
bitch, your tax bracket got more upset than fucking march madness
it's beyond sadness, y'all should know this
river deposits in banks are so small, it takes millions of years to notice
road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

[shadows edge]

Hmm... I edited because it replaced "wi.gger" ... I hope that's not an issue. That would be a gay reason to end a good match. Vote up people.

[Eternalpath]

Best two lines IMO

Alpha

Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows

Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it

Nice to me...you had some okay lines some better then the others..those I thought were your better two...

Shadows Edge

road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds

another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

Those were your best lines but the starts of your verse to me was terrible...didnt have anything worth while in it.. u picked up at the end and the tax upset/march madness line was okay..but no fire..

My vote alphaomni IMO

[Tang.]

this battle is flames


some really off the hook shit in here




not voting, sorry.

[Savir]

Alpha

Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it


vs.


shadows.edge

kid i'll school you, its part of the journey
so learn youre lesson.... every other fucking person in the tourney
ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches
& you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
your disgracing... money, job... fam wish you had this
bitch, your tax bracket got more upset than fucking march madness
it's beyond sadness, y'all should know this
river deposits in banks are so small, it takes millions of years to notice
road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses



vote-shadowsedge with the straight merking. What's with people giving
a damn about TEXT flow?....Punches win...

[Pav_]

Alpha

Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows
Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it

Shadows

ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches
i more than hold my own, they lied to ya, punk
cuz fuck taking a back seat to me, this bitch is tied up in the trunk
& you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

Vote Shadows
He had the better punches, alpha had better flow though

[AlphaOmni]

ok, on to the real votes now

[Nique...]

^Word. Because you really lost. Flow will never win battles. I mean, your flow was dope, but your punches were decent to none. I think you focused on your flow more than your punches. Anyway.


Alpha:
Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows
I’m raw with rhyme, you won’t get ahead with appallin lines
…Since Shadows have always been known to just, ‘fall behind’

vs
Shadows:
ao's plan is simple, think he'd just show n win,
had one RBL battle just to shake the rust off... that voting ring
i more than hold my own, they lied to ya, punk
cuz fuck taking a back seat to me, this bitch is tied up in the trunk
& you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

Vote-Shadows.

He came with wit, wordplay, creativity, and fresher concepts, but Shadows, don't turn into a Feeble and overdo the wordplay. Nice verse though.

Good battle, but I still think Shadows took it quite easily.

[Ibeechu Farensqure]

I don't think these voters caught most of Alpha's punches...but I would say Shadow still this....his last few lines were pretty hard..

[Young Lac]

i gotta say i thought alpha had this, cause i didnt really think this shadow cat was anyone, dont really know that he is anyone now..but he won...

alpha had a sick flow tho..punches just lacked, and that hands down line was playyyyyed as fuck...

meh@ a lot of the forced lines in both verses...

[Mr. Skull]

Alpha - Dope flow, content suffered a bit because of it but good overall verse

Shadows Edge - Flow not as strong as Alpha's, but your content was better than his. Stronger punches so you win...


Vote - Shadows Edge

[PMX_And1]

Alpha had a better flow, hands down, it was sick
but it really comes down to the punches and thats where shadow came out on top
good battle though

vote - Shadows Edge

[B L E S S]

v- Shadows Edge

ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches

^lol..

[Opshins]

vote-shadows.....wow...kid surprised me ....came dope...rivers i think under estimated him...pz