East: 2. Doc Richards vs 15. Oliver Thenet

TRAP. · 10-19-2004, 04:16 AM

The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over

-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.

-NO 1 Sentence Voting

MOD AIM CONTACTS:
-Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
-TRAP. - jaysus chrLst
-demik - akademik416

Oliver_Thenet · 10-19-2004, 04:46 AM

lets make you write
no pics and no recycling
say 16?
g'luck and lets post by wednesday or thursday

Doc Richards · 10-19-2004, 10:20 PM

i say 20, with pic, no recycling

cool?

Oliver_Thenet · 10-19-2004, 10:24 PM

unless u got a new pic
i'll pass man
that shits played/boring it'll be the 5th time we have used it

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...9#post10269079
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10269082
South: 3. P Nut vs 14. Nique
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post10269090
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...0#post10292860
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...2#post10301192

Demi, i seen you on aim like 3 times since i pulled the verse....send the pic or im posting 2maro or tuesday...and imma only drop like 10-12

Oliver_Thenet · 10-21-2004, 04:00 PM

shit i didnt know we had a whole extra week
get me the pic

Text45 · 10-27-2004, 09:57 PM

ok

14 lines

with pic

no recycling

Oliver_Thenet · 10-28-2004, 02:48 PM

if this is demik, remove the pic cuz you never sent yours
and if that link is a pic of you, i cant see it cuz im banned on there anyways
sooooo
14 lines...no pic and im dropping in like an hour or so

Doc Richards · 10-28-2004, 11:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oliver_Thenet

if this is demik, remove the pic cuz you never sent yours
and if that link is a pic of you, i cant see it cuz im banned on there anyways
sooooo
14 lines...no pic and im dropping in like an hour or so

dude fuck that

im usin your pic

mines there

so get one of your buddies to get it for you

Pavement · 10-29-2004, 09:12 PM

Lmao you look like a pussy.. a white version of superdooper

Fat clock head faggot

Doc Richards · 10-30-2004, 12:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pavement

Lmao you look like a pussy.. a white version of superdooper

Fat clock head faggot

hey, remember when i beat you on your own site?

Oliver_Thenet · 10-30-2004, 12:37 AM

gimme like 10 extra mins dem....cuz i took a nap.

Doc Richards · 10-30-2004, 12:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oliver_Thenet

gimme like 10 extra mins dem....cuz i took a nap.

not due till 3 am est

im just writing now too yo

Oliver_Thenet · 10-30-2004, 12:45 AM

good shit, cuz them other leagues had a niggga rushin...i forget its more time here

Doc Richards · 10-30-2004, 12:47 AM

just go 10

Doc Richards · 10-30-2004, 03:02 AM

right off the bat, im not accepting votes from nique, savir, eternalpath or pav

fucka 411hype aim ring

im beating him now, for the 6th time in a row.....

youre lines are long enough to stretch around ruben studdard twice- Deon aka Oliver_Thenet

his pic
http://www.411 hype.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=2709

Aimin for your kind, straight up, I blast gays
my lines stretch twice around ruben?
they still cant meet your fat ass half way
and any punch you attempt is a poor zing..
the kid aint even likin ya shit...
he just cant beleive you ate the whole thing...
you got bigger problems, so dont even bother kid
for instance, you got the kid captive..
but how the HELL are you gonna swallow him?!?
serious though you all outta place...
skull the size of a house...
two-car garage in the middle of ya face
for his text verses..no cheers
but you a medical miracle
i never seen someone carry a fetus between their ears..
you already lost, dont matter what i say
only reason i looked at ya pic twice?
cause ya lips look like a fuckin pussy sideways...

Oliver_Thenet · 10-30-2004, 03:04 AM

demik then

demik now

demmy you trynna be as big as me now?

unwitty, not cheered by many, he'll lose and pout to all
got one fan....so he took it home and mounted it on the wall
im huge and its no surprise, but yur a whole other demik
cuz yur rockin that cap, to advertise where you'll soon be living
your one ugly kid, and what actually makes it worse
is the fact that you look better, when the fuckin pic is blurred
get tough and get smacked down, if your good then i'll ask how
cuz your brightest idea'll fade, once the lights off in the background
women stay dissing this bitch, he gets pissed and throws fits
cuz they only get close...
..... when giving tips on maintain'n his feminine lips
poor as shit, get a job loser.....cuz im passing out
not cuz yur bringing heat
but cuz your lack of it has you wearin a coat in the house

Oliver_Thenet · 10-30-2004, 03:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doc Richards

right off the bat, im not accepting votes from nique dont know, savir dont know, eternalpath dont know or pav dont like
.

pav the only 411 head outta them all...and i dont like him...never heard of eternal and nique and savir are rb heads...i dont even fucks with them

if they vote...which is unlikely......im acceptin.,....or we wont have any ,jay cee, or inkwell aim votes from you demmy.....i know yur style...why would i aim?

edit...didt mean sup

Super. · 10-30-2004, 04:35 AM

"Aimin for your kind, straight up, I blast gays
my lines stretch twice around ruben?
they still cant meet your fat ass half way

for his text verses..no cheers
but you a medical miracle
i never seen someone carry a fetus between their ears.."

lol nice duke. couldve prolly done way more shit with his pic, but whatever. only was feeling those 2 bars.

"im huge and its no surprise, but yur a whole other demik
cuz yur rockin that cap, to advertise where you'll soon be living"

that was pretty sick. line of the battle in my opinion, but that's pretty much it. LOL@demiks new pic though. rotf

v-Demik
both couldve done way better with the pics, but demik had more bars i was feelin. deon had the line of the battle, but nothin else to back it up. good battle.

Tha Talent · 10-30-2004, 12:22 PM

Demik:
the Ruben line was a great flip on his line...strong pic diss and good wording...throughout you showed some creativity, but i wish you would have gotten over the size issue...still, your word choice was very good and you flipped the size issue well...liked the two car garage line, fetus between the ears line...only lines i didn't like were the eating line and the closer...flow could have been a little tighter, and wording had some spots that would have been nicer if touched up...but still, a strong verse.

Oliver Thenet:
i realize it deals with his pic, but that intro was played...how many times are we going to use the fan line?...anyway, i thought that you had a couple decent lines...i liked the concept you were going with for the blurry pic line, but i thought it should have been more witty, and more thoughtout...i also liked the hat line...the closer was well worded, but i've seen the concept several times before in pic battles...flow was pretty strong...i thought the verse had an overall lack of wittiness...and, if you're not going to be witty, you should have been more harsh, which you definitely weren't, by barely dissing HIS appearance...still, decent.

vote=Demik
he was just more clever
and more harsh, as well

FórmÅl LôGíc · 10-30-2004, 05:17 PM

Over No Shows

10-19-2004, 04:16 AM	#1 (permalink)
TRAP. i'm soo old school. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: middle east. Posts: 25,545	East: 2. Doc Richards vs 15. Oliver Thenet The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks. Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return. No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff. Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations. -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN! -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically. -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)! Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked. -NO 1 Sentence Voting MOD AIM CONTACTS: -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell -TRAP. - jaysus chrLst -demik - akademik416 __________________ whyfebeater #1.

10-27-2004, 09:57 PM	#6 (permalink)
Text45 Jock 9mm. Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 145	ok 14 lines with pic no recycling __________________ i'm an artist with bruises, i'll punch you black and swell to blue i've seen catholic prayer hymms have a better chants in hell than you - Cane .

10-30-2004, 12:22 PM	#19 (permalink)
Tha Talent , Tha Master. Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: in the hall of fame. Posts: 3,588	Demik: the Ruben line was a great flip on his line...strong pic diss and good wording...throughout you showed some creativity, but i wish you would have gotten over the size issue...still, your word choice was very good and you flipped the size issue well...liked the two car garage line, fetus between the ears line...only lines i didn't like were the eating line and the closer...flow could have been a little tighter, and wording had some spots that would have been nicer if touched up...but still, a strong verse. Oliver Thenet: i realize it deals with his pic, but that intro was played...how many times are we going to use the fan line?...anyway, i thought that you had a couple decent lines...i liked the concept you were going with for the blurry pic line, but i thought it should have been more witty, and more thoughtout...i also liked the hat line...the closer was well worded, but i've seen the concept several times before in pic battles...flow was pretty strong...i thought the verse had an overall lack of wittiness...and, if you're not going to be witty, you should have been more harsh, which you definitely weren't, by barely dissing HIS appearance...still, decent. vote=Demik he was just more clever and more harsh, as well __________________ elitely smo

10-30-2004, 05:17 PM	#20 (permalink)
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10-19-2004, 10:20 PM	#3 (permalink)
Doc Richards 5x RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Voted 2004's Best New Battler Posts: 1,636	i say 20, with pic, no recycling cool?

10-29-2004, 09:12 PM	#9 (permalink)
Pavement HOOD.. Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 61	Lmao you look like a pussy.. a white version of superdooper Fat clock head faggot

10-30-2004, 12:47 AM	#14 (permalink)
Doc Richards 5x RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Voted 2004's Best New Battler Posts: 1,636	just go 10

10-30-2004, 03:02 AM	#15 (permalink)
Doc Richards 5x RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Voted 2004's Best New Battler Posts: 1,636	right off the bat, im not accepting votes from nique, savir, eternalpath or pav fucka 411hype aim ring im beating him now, for the 6th time in a row..... youre lines are long enough to stretch around ruben studdard twice- Deon aka Oliver_Thenet his pic http://www.411 hype.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=2709 Aimin for your kind, straight up, I blast gays my lines stretch twice around ruben? they still cant meet your fat ass half way and any punch you attempt is a poor zing.. the kid aint even likin ya shit... he just cant beleive you ate the whole thing... you got bigger problems, so dont even bother kid for instance, you got the kid captive.. but how the HELL are you gonna swallow him?!? serious though you all outta place... skull the size of a house... two-car garage in the middle of ya face for his text verses..no cheers but you a medical miracle i never seen someone carry a fetus between their ears.. you already lost, dont matter what i say only reason i looked at ya pic twice? cause ya lips look like a fuckin pussy sideways...

10-30-2004, 04:35 AM	#18 (permalink)
Super. Lovin' it Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: California Posts: 25,518	"Aimin for your kind, straight up, I blast gays my lines stretch twice around ruben? they still cant meet your fat ass half way for his text verses..no cheers but you a medical miracle i never seen someone carry a fetus between their ears.." lol nice duke. couldve prolly done way more shit with his pic, but whatever. only was feeling those 2 bars. "im huge and its no surprise, but yur a whole other demik cuz yur rockin that cap, to advertise where you'll soon be living" that was pretty sick. line of the battle in my opinion, but that's pretty much it. LOL@demiks new pic though. rotf v-Demik both couldve done way better with the pics, but demik had more bars i was feelin. deon had the line of the battle, but nothin else to back it up. good battle.

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