7. Oz 13-1 vs 8. Joey Donuts 11-2

[TRAP.]

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Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
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-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over
** In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets



-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


-NO 1 Sentence Voting


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[-Oz-]

Sup Man. You Pick It

[Joey donuts]

20?
Doesnt really matter
Good luck ozzy

[-Oz-]

Fuck wordplay in everyline. I show you how to do this son!

jo·ey

NOUN:
pl. jo·eys
A young animal, especially a baby kangaroo.

To beat Oz?
Ya gotta be sick, you aint stopping me bitch
If Joey's a baby kangaroo, then PLZ HOP off of my dick
Head? He got from a bitch
It's lame tho, ya cant blame ho's cuz they follow their nose
Joey'll cum in a girls food, just so she'll swallow his load
WHOA. Joe, stop with the flowing, can it kid
If ya food for thoughts fresh?
Then the rest of RM join me in eating moldy sandwiches
This man just bitches
& wishes he coud spin records, but since he's gay
Donuts, Joey's government name is da only way you a D J
Ya fundamentally retarded, never started shit
Since no government would Fund-a-mentally retarded kid
So ya apartments shit, a buck would help, i bet it would
If a Bill hits the floor, ya respond quicker than the senate could
Crack? He said its good
Ya'll should know hes a hopeless cokehead, it helps bro relax
But since he's a hope-less cokehead, PLZ go relapse
We know he raps,
Did you know he acts? I smiled at clips
Of Joe in Jurrasik Park, yeah..he played the big pile of shit
No denial you bitch? Prolly gonna no show dude
But if I read all that^^, I guess I'd prolly no show too
You blow so you, wont be worshipped as a new pac
Claim ya sick as AIDS? Then I thank god there's limited flu shots!

Fresh To Deathhhhhhhh...G'Luck Joey =)

[merc 11]

another kid dissin res but takes his style lol

[Joey donuts]

Just got back from my game
Posting soon

[Joey donuts]

To beat joey?, a question like that is a sound still comment
Fucker turned a good style into a downhill process
But he changed it up a bit, and you know what makes this wild

Originally Posted by merc 11

another kid dissin res but takes his style

Would never give me my props, hey it’s cool but sucks
So now I’ll fish for my compliments in your pool of blood
Get knocked down a couple ranks is where he shall mingle
Next week all you’ll see is 40. oz like a d-12 single
Scrawny ass, all I got to do is smack this bitch punk slut
Writes verses with three bars, but in life he cant lift one up
Oz wished me a good luck, hey thank you, big up
Now I’ll dish out a string of punches then hang you with em
In school he get’s clowned for his hair, just a dumb fuck
Difference between you and me is I got a buzz…you got a buzz cut
Couldnt see how many lines you went, now I’m brain deaded
I’m up against a dude who’s more of a b.i.g. bitch than faith evans
Just gave it to you heavy, fuckers fully clowned…
…That his newly found glory is just that, newly found
He truly bound for a loss, hear the pound, and you lost
My dick is always at work and oz is down for the job

G’luck

[square.]

wtf? this is like the 3rd battle in a row where ppl didnt come like they usually do.

v/ oz

ionno, joey looks like he didnt try at all. the verse just went downhill from that sucky fish for compliments line. i liked the opener tho. weird, cuz u usually bring some good shit. i guess u out of time. oz came alright, didnt like his first half, then got a bit better from the government line and i must admit, the jurassic park line was funny.. caught me off guard.


[sQ]

[Yuno Alwin]

damn..


vote-Oz

..i thought joey was gonna beat em', but jo came quarter ass'd

[-Oz-]

Quit drawing comparisons. My style and Resins are NOTHING alike.

[shadows edge]

v. Joey

Would never give me my props, hey it’s cool but sucks
So now I’ll fish for my compliments in your pool of blood
Get knocked down a couple ranks is where he shall mingle
Next week all you’ll see is 40. oz like a d-12 single

This was the only good part of Joey's verse... normally you bring like 4-6 lines that are dope, then a decent rest... this time the rest was pretty eh...

But then I read Oz's verse. And didn't like it.. at all.


Ya gotta be sick, you aint stopping me bitch
If Joey's a baby kangaroo, then PLZ HOP off of my dick
So ya apartments shit, a buck would help, i bet it would
If a Bill hits the floor, ya respond quicker than the senate could

That was decent. But the rest.. was hit or miss i guess. and totally missed with me. that "cum in food" line was fucking horrible... the D,J line was blah... food for thought was wtf.

[I.deal]

oz had some ups and downs


the intro is blah

It's lame tho, ya cant blame ho's cuz they follow their nose
Joey'll cum in a girls food, just so she'll swallow his load

kinda funny

WHOA. Joe, stop with the flowing, can it kid
If ya food for thoughts fresh?
Then the rest of RM join me in eating moldy sandwiches

so so

& wishes he coud spin records, but since he's gay
Donuts, Joey's government name is da only way you a D J

trash, who cares if hes a dj or not

So ya apartments shit, a buck would help, i bet it would
If a Bill hits the floor, ya respond quicker than the senate could

good concept

Crack? He said its good
Ya'll should know hes a hopeless cokehead, it helps bro relax
But since he's a hope-less cokehead, PLZ go relapse

gross



jd was all over the map

To beat joey?, a question like that is a sound still comment
Fucker turned a good style into a downhill process

huh?

Get knocked down a couple ranks is where he shall mingle
Next week all you’ll see is 40. oz like a d-12 single

thats pretty hot

Couldnt see how many lines you went, now I’m brain deaded
I’m up against a dude who’s more of a b.i.g. bitch than faith evans

gross



joey had the line of the battle... but i think oz won it overall

[Pav_]

Vote Joey
=D

[headless verseman]

yuck



this is an example of POOOOOR wordplay

Would never give me my props, hey it’s cool but sucks
So now I’ll fish for my compliments in your pool of blood

besides the premise being played a motherfucker's motherfucker.....do you HONESTLY know of hearing ANYBODY FISHING IN A POOL?!?!?!?




YUCK......u got some good shit, but this is plain newb ish



ill re read tomorow when this leaves my memory, cuz i stopped after i read that

[-Oz-]

3-1 UP.

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[Cornelius]

what does aids and flu shots have to do with each other

[ill nik-A]

whoa

Oz
some of ur punches were just not hard hitting, DJ, sandwhiches cum, no show & flu shots i wasnt digging, though that relapse line was good rest was ok

Joey I only like the Merc 11 flip though Resin references usually suck this one was predictable but funny, i wasnt feeling bars, faith, buzz, found, pool of blood at all

vote-OZ overall better verse
though both can do better

[Katharsis]

vote = oz for out texting his opponent...


i like that one like with the georgia peaches

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Oz Wins ^^^

Joey Donuts Loses vvv