17. Pav 9-3 vs 18. Headless Verseman 18-6

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Old 10-11-2004, 03:40 AM   #1 (permalink)
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17. Pav 9-3 vs 18. Headless Verseman 18-6

The RBL Rules and Regulations


Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

-You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over
** In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets



-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


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Old 10-11-2004, 11:30 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I'll try and post by tomorrow night

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Old 10-12-2004, 09:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Been busy..

Yo-kid.. your flows-shit.. and it consits of old-flips
^See.. those are multies.. the things I could beat you alone with
I'd give you some input.. but I normally don't help flamers
Cuz when it comes to lines.. we all seniors like 12 graders
& your gay crews are something I wouldnt be a part of brah
Cuz not only do you spend time in the closet.. you also chill in Narnia
I read the last last mag.. I was shook.. like whoa kid
I thought you were dope!! then I realized you wrote the whole thing
Your on the cock of your idol frac.. yeah... this mans a queer
Following around aven brooks.. even rocking that brand of gear
& you claim you hustle? like your boys need bail dog?
But to me.. your just another bitch acting tuff like female cops
& you think your a legend? claimin that you still do shit?
But the only fresh thing you drop every week.. are excuses

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Old 10-16-2004, 12:43 AM   #4 (permalink)
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fuck, had a verse and lost it.........here's what i came up with the second time


Pav, Your a lame bastard, ur in the shadows while i got fame mastered
with strength to easily ring this dawg like the guy ur named after
ill leave his frame tattered, mainly cuz this cheater's gay
ur neck's like audibles, when coming up to the snap I can go either way
speakin claims, not to be cliche but ima merk his brain
jerk and spray clips of rounds that'll be surfin his waves
no shit im the cocky type, much more then lots of hype
ill put your career on ice like the fuckin hockey strike
and yea im stuntin this guy, closet fag im uppin his pride
i wouldnt doubt Pav'll prevail cuz he's the type to dress up as a bride
nothin'd surprise me, but, are you kiddin me bitch
so shook he went mixtape style, name omitted on a subliminal diss
your 'seen your' punch was cute, but i can weaken the trend
cuz to beat me
you need to graduate but got held back like a lineman beat by an end


pppppppzzzzzzzzzz
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Old 10-16-2004, 03:28 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Pav

Yo-kid.. your flows-shit.. and it consits of old-flips
^See.. those are multies.. the things I could beat you alone with

ok..

I'd give you some input.. but I normally don't help flamers
Cuz when it comes to lines.. we all seniors like 12 graders

ok..

& your gay crews are something I wouldnt be a part of brah
Cuz not only do you spend time in the closet.. you also chill in Narnia

ehh..

I read the last last mag.. I was shook.. like whoa kid
I thought you were dope!! then I realized you wrote the whole thing

lol..

Your on the cock of your idol frac.. yeah... this mans a queer
Following around aven brooks.. even rocking that brand of gear

lol..

& you claim you hustle? like your boys need bail dog?
But to me.. your just another bitch acting tuff like female cops

ok..

& you think your a legend? claimin that you still do shit?
But the only fresh thing you drop every week.. are excuses

lol..

HV

Pav, Your a lame bastard, ur in the shadows while i got fame mastered
with strength to easily ring this dawg like the guy ur named after

ok..

ill leave his frame tattered, mainly cuz this cheater's gay
ur neck's like audibles, when coming up to the snap I can go either way

Im getting tired of footbal lines, i see em in a lot of verses, but i thought this one was coo..

speakin claims, not to be cliche but ima merk his brain
jerk and spray clips of rounds that'll be surfin his waves

ok..

no shit im the cocky type, much more then lots of hype
ill put your career on ice like the fuckin hockey strike


lol..

and yea im stuntin this guy, closet fag im uppin his pride
i wouldnt doubt Pav'll prevail cuz he's the type to dress up as a bride

meh..

nothin'd surprise me, but, are you kiddin me bitch
so shook he went mixtape style, name omitted on a subliminal diss

lol..

your 'seen your' punch was cute, but i can weaken the trend
cuz to beat me
you need to graduate but got held back like a lineman beat by an end

Didnt like this one..

Pretty close. but im saying Pav.
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Old 10-16-2004, 09:05 AM   #8 (permalink)
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no pav did win, ya shit was stretched and didn't flow


be all like

boooooooo lmfao


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wow, more haters.....g


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Old 10-16-2004, 04:15 PM   #10 (permalink)
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pretty good battle.

Pav-

you had some cool lines, the senior line i've kinda seen before, but i thought the mag line was pretty funny.

Headless-

would have liked to see your first verse. this one wasn't bad but not really too consistent, i liked the audible and prevail lines, but that was about it this go around. like i said, woulda been cool to see your first one.

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Old 10-16-2004, 04:47 PM   #11 (permalink)
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WTF...A Headless Verseman verse with multis? Its a new day in the rap game....


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ill leave his frame tattered, mainly cuz this cheater's gay
ur neck's like audibles, when coming up to the snap I can go either way

This was dope, could have been worded slightly better

speakin claims, not to be cliche but ima merk his brain
jerk and spray clips of rounds that'll be surfin his waves

This is good, tho the idea has been used, i like yours

nothin'd surprise me, but, are you kiddin me bitch
so shook he went mixtape style, name omitted on a subliminal diss

Prevail was ok. Closer was a garbage football line. Flow made your verse much more enjoyable.

Pavvie


I'd give you some input.. but I normally don't help flamers
Cuz when it comes to lines.. we all seniors like 12 graders

This is cool, tho I dont much care for similies anymore, i like this

& you claim you hustle? like your boys need bail dog?
But to me.. your just another bitch acting tuff like female cops

aight

& you think your a legend? claimin that you still do shit?
But the only fresh thing you drop every week.. are excuses

good personal

Pretty good verse. I thought you missed on some lines that if they were better could have given you the win. The frac line, narnia and aven brooks took away consistency in your verse. Still a good drop.

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Old 10-16-2004, 05:26 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Been busy..

Yo-kid.. your flows-shit.. and it consits of old-flips
^See.. those are multies.. the things I could beat you alone with
I'd give you some input.. but I normally don't help flamers
Cuz when it comes to lines.. we all seniors like 12 graders
plaaaaaaaaaaaaaayed....a real bad start

Headless was meh...but didn't have back to back crap like pav did...

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