23. God. 6-0 vs 24. Premonition 7-2

[TRAP.]

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[God.]

16' monster

[stick's ghost]

yeah,
who is this?

[God.]

munsta munsta



theres a devil in me son, im death in disguise so listen
cuz u'll never excorcise any demons, when ur exorcising with them
& u need training in text, must be the drugs ya usin for kicks
so let God foil ur plans, just so you can shoot up the shit
u keep it suburban & u'll see my hood burn virals
when sticks gets jumped quicker than subway turnstiles
i've read u before & hope u'll up the bar a little bit?
but the only one u could set higher, is the line limits bitch
the webs ur life & for it u could never get to champ
with more kicks out the net, than bad keepers in soccer camp
but u probably aint fearin, that's fine & cool to me
cuz to you, net rappin aint half as hard, as high school can be
being ugly as u are man, it's serious dog
but i aint about to take ur spot away, thats clearasils job
ur past your prime monster when the stop signs not ringin
& ur bout to be left...
with plates in ur chest big enough to tune hot 97


bitch

[JSincere]

heard god is all mighty, so who hyped my rival
my verse won't just change his story, i'm about to re-write the bible
no personals? that puts you on the losing side
cuz if you're god on the boards, you're playing jesus' role and being crucified
you the type of guy... hardly anyone'll peep
son, countin ya sheepish punches'll put anyone to sleep
your style as original as ya name, it's gotta be
and there's more god's on the board then in greek mythology
hiding behind an alias and still got nothin to haul for a rank
n' if he's writing out his life story, he's really just drawing a blank
I'm not beggin for remorse, but I done a lotta sin
& it never crosses my mind to ask for God's help.. since I wanna win
god is mine, dickfuck I'll leave you lost n' blind
Monster'll nail you with any of the concepts that cross my mind
flippin and still winnin, still sinnin... check the facts duke
I wrote my whole verse as a joke just so I could match you...


front.

[square.]

v/ god


straight battle fellas. just feeling his style more.


[sQ]

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Over no shows.

[Lampoon]

vote - sincere...

...close battle...just thought sincere ended off better

[JSincere]

1-1
I'll edit my votes here..
RBL Championship Match: 1. Scientz 20-4 vs 2. Eyedill 14-2
13. Eddie. 10-3 vs 14. Main Event 8-0
15. Cheemunga 13-4 vs 16. Shadows Edge 12-4
57. ROC C 2-2 vs 58. Ring 2-2
102. ..Blah.. vs 103. Vaskwel
47. Ace's Full 2-0 vs 48. Ex-Cal 2-0

[eyedeal]

vote=god

i was feelin more of his concepts.. monster kept it too basic.. although, some of his lines were decent, just not enough to take the win IMO.

[JSincere]

don't close this till there's at least 3 more votes

[lil hot sauce]

vote-premo

God, you did pretty good, but you just werent very consistant, as for monster, you did good as well, and you were more consistant...

so monster gets the vote

[BlackDef]

hmm... this was a close battle but not on monsters favor

I really thought you over use the God concept and really didnt give much thought in making the flips a bit more witty. Nice flow towards the end. Two of your punches was long as fuck in the begining which threw me off. God just had fresher material and flipped the concepts very well IMO. I like the turnstyles, the set the bar, and the clearasil lines were nice. Good verse.

Vote - God on more consistancy and overall delivery in this match. Monster had a coo verse but in all honesty it could have been better. =/

[JSincere]

^ edit that shit and vote for me

[lil hot sauce]

lol^

[Katharsis]

vote = god

because i read threw the votes and saw it was unanimous and this would be the quickest way to get my 6 votes last minute

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Premonition Wins ^^^

God Loses vvv

God Fails to Post Links