11. Joey Donuts 10-2 vs. 12. Headless Verseman 18-5

FórmÅl LôGíc · 10-05-2004, 01:45 AM

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headless verseman · 10-05-2004, 08:47 PM

not showing

Joey donuts · 10-06-2004, 01:33 PM

Oh

15. Dr. Cause 10-4 vs. 16. John Hensley 8-0
65. Scenario 1-1 vs. 66. The Royal Penis 1-0
103. Dr. Knockboots vs. 104. D-Illar-1
89. Onyx vs. 90. Quiet

headless verseman · 10-07-2004, 12:59 AM

eh, decided not to no show, so here's a shitty verse

im smackin his people's/
think Joey's a gonna be a good show
then u dont know what happens to sequels/
this actor is feeble, and his shits really flat/
everybody can master donuts look at nascar victory laps/
he's not willin to scrap, leave u mauled from triggers/
cuz takin shots of JD aint involvin the liquor/
upset huh queen, i bet my cream/
that i can take away J with my pressure D/
his shits lame, plus he's flirtin....kid spits quick game/
battin his lashes callin me Pappi like Hemingway's nickname/

match it

u win, but i dont like no showing

and no, for the people who will say this is wack as fuck

IT IS.....

Joey donuts · 10-08-2004, 08:33 PM

Gangsta?who you? Please your states a frantic pitty…
…only high stakes you were ever involved in was at atlantic city
Muscle head ass, you’re the type to say “I protect mine!
Steroids? I don’t pop pills stupid!…I inject mines”
And in the club, he never dances, just another dead punk that’s relaxin
When ll cool j’s song came on is the only time head sprung into action
Everyone knows your ugly, so don’t try to explore, nah kid run
He’s been in a beautiful struggle, years before talib was
And I’ll hurt him until the point of vegetables, stupid
Only reason he’s ‘soaring’ to new heights is incredible brusing

headless verseman · 10-09-2004, 12:22 AM

poor multi's, but we got ourself a match

Aven Brooks · 10-09-2004, 12:36 AM

.. Joey Donuts.. :
Everyone knows your ugly, so don’t try to explore, nah kid run
He’s been in a beautiful struggle, years before talib was

.. Headless .. :
this actor is feeble, and his shits really flat/
everybody can master donuts look at nascar victory laps/

.. too tough to call for me .. so i'ma just give ya fellas props for these lines ..

FórmÅl LôGíc · 10-09-2004, 04:48 AM

Over No Shows

ill nik-A · 10-10-2004, 10:37 AM

Headless aint try & its obvious though victory line was good & i felt joey's last 3 bars were ok, not great but consistent enuff to take it IMO

vote-JD

Aces Full · 10-10-2004, 12:33 PM

shouldve pretty obvious who won here, headless put in no effort and didnt expect anything from it, but joeys verse didnt impress me much. in the end i gotta give it to JD for a few better concepts. bleh battle...

v/ JD

59. Ace's Full 1-0 vs. 60. Orbit 1-0

Pav_ · 10-10-2004, 12:40 PM

Vote donuts
His last 4 lines took it
Only line i was feelin from headless was that donuts one and it wasnt that good

headless verseman · 10-10-2004, 05:37 PM

and no, for the people who will say this is wack as fuck

IT IS.....

Stalis Orion · 10-10-2004, 05:50 PM

word headless, you can drop the hizzeat when you want to.

Head had the sequel line I liked, donuts was aight, I liked the liquor line and the closer was decent.
Dude said he was gone no show, what you kids expect?
whewwwwwww.

Donuts,
opener was decent, I like that impression line, but steroid stuff gettin' old on Headless pretty quickly, I still chuckled though..the LL Cool J and Beautiful STruggle lines were good for what they were...some kids aint' like them pop/current event punches but I think they keep shit fresh so you get points for that.
I did however, enjoy the closing line. Some might think it was forcedddddd but I thought it was pretty good.
Ya verse was enough to take down Headless this week.

Who's Joey Donuts again? I dunno dude's alias.

Vote=JD in this one, though I think Headless has more text skill than you from what I've read.

JD=2 dope lines
Head=2 good lines
Decently close for what Head dropped but Joey had enough power to take this.

Word.

penacILLin · 10-10-2004, 05:59 PM

joey took dis 1 since headless underestimated him n thought he was gun no show. i wasnt feelin ur style headless it seems like da aim one where u use the // brakets. both came kinda mediocre, joey jus came w/ more consistency, punches, multies were blah on both parts...blah @ top 30 battle...

vote -- joey

stick's ghost · 10-10-2004, 06:27 PM

vote - Joey
by a little
close though

God. · 10-10-2004, 06:56 PM

ok..

JD got this easy.

bleh

lil hot sauce · 10-10-2004, 07:56 PM

vote-Joey Donuts

it was actually pretty close to me, but Joeys lines were more dope...

Lethal Serenity · 10-10-2004, 08:36 PM

I'm going with joey on this one...he came more consisten with his flow, punches, multies, his vocab was bleh... good shit on both parts actually I just think joey took this one...

Vote: joey

FórmÅl LôGíc · 10-10-2004, 11:46 PM

Joey Donuts Wins ^^^

Headless Verseman Loses vvv

10-05-2004, 01:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Tampa / Tallahassee, Florida Posts: 22,807	11. Joey Donuts 10-2 vs. 12. Headless Verseman 18-5 The RBL Rules and Regulations Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return. No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff. Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations. -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN! -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN -You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically. -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)! Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked. -NO 1 Sentence Voting MOD AIM CONTACTS: -Oz- JayGood259Oz -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell -Imperial - ?????? __________________ ...Black Listed**

10-06-2004, 01:33 PM	#3 (permalink)
Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah Join Date: May 2004 Location: Vegas bitchhh. Posts: 314	Oh 15. Dr. Cause 10-4 vs. 16. John Hensley 8-0 65. Scenario 1-1 vs. 66. The Royal Penis 1-0 103. Dr. Knockboots vs. 104. D-Illar-1 89. Onyx vs. 90. Quiet Last edited by Joey donuts; 10-10-2004 at 08:41 PM.

10-09-2004, 04:48 AM	#8 (permalink)
FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Tampa / Tallahassee, Florida Posts: 22,807	Over No Shows __________________ ...Black Listed

10-10-2004, 10:37 AM	#9 (permalink)
ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!! Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: HIALEAH (MIAMI) Posts: 524	Headless aint try & its obvious though victory line was good & i felt joey's last 3 bars were ok, not great but consistent enuff to take it IMO vote-JD __________________ I'm just one... ill nik-A

10-10-2004, 12:33 PM	#10 (permalink)
Aces Full I'm Sick... Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: ...n I'll give u a coughin Posts: 118	shouldve pretty obvious who won here, headless put in no effort and didnt expect anything from it, but joeys verse didnt impress me much. in the end i gotta give it to JD for a few better concepts. bleh battle... v/ JD 59. Ace's Full 1-0 vs. 60. Orbit 1-0 __________________ "If you can't spot the sucker in the first half hour, chances are you are the sucker." - Rounders "Expect me like you expect Jesus to come..." ~Pac~

10-05-2004, 08:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	not showing

10-07-2004, 12:59 AM	#4 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	eh, decided not to no show, so here's a shitty verse im smackin his people's/ think Joey's a gonna be a good show then u dont know what happens to sequels/ this actor is feeble, and his shits really flat/ everybody can master donuts look at nascar victory laps/ he's not willin to scrap, leave u mauled from triggers/ cuz takin shots of JD aint involvin the liquor/ upset huh queen, i bet my cream/ that i can take away J with my pressure D/ his shits lame, plus he's flirtin....kid spits quick game/ battin his lashes callin me Pappi like Hemingway's nickname/ match it u win, but i dont like no showing and no, for the people who will say this is wack as fuck IT IS.....

10-08-2004, 08:33 PM	#5 (permalink)
Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah Join Date: May 2004 Location: Vegas bitchhh. Posts: 314	Gangsta?who you? Please your states a frantic pitty… …only high stakes you were ever involved in was at atlantic city Muscle head ass, you’re the type to say “I protect mine! Steroids? I don’t pop pills stupid!…I inject mines” And in the club, he never dances, just another dead punk that’s relaxin When ll cool j’s song came on is the only time head sprung into action Everyone knows your ugly, so don’t try to explore, nah kid run He’s been in a beautiful struggle, years before talib was And I’ll hurt him until the point of vegetables, stupid Only reason he’s ‘soaring’ to new heights is incredible brusing

10-09-2004, 12:22 AM	#6 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	poor multi's, but we got ourself a match

10-09-2004, 12:36 AM	#7 (permalink)
Aven Brooks .. bladerunner .. Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 327	.. Joey Donuts.. : Everyone knows your ugly, so don’t try to explore, nah kid run He’s been in a beautiful struggle, years before talib was .. Headless .. : this actor is feeble, and his shits really flat/ everybody can master donuts look at nascar victory laps/ .. too tough to call for me .. so i'ma just give ya fellas props for these lines ..

10-10-2004, 12:40 PM	#11 (permalink)
Pav_ Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 159	Vote donuts His last 4 lines took it Only line i was feelin from headless was that donuts one and it wasnt that good

10-10-2004, 05:37 PM	#12 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	and no, for the people who will say this is wack as fuck IT IS.....

10-10-2004, 05:50 PM	#13 (permalink)
Stalis Orion DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 427	word headless, you can drop the hizzeat when you want to. Head had the sequel line I liked, donuts was aight, I liked the liquor line and the closer was decent. Dude said he was gone no show, what you kids expect? whewwwwwww. Donuts, opener was decent, I like that impression line, but steroid stuff gettin' old on Headless pretty quickly, I still chuckled though..the LL Cool J and Beautiful STruggle lines were good for what they were...some kids aint' like them pop/current event punches but I think they keep shit fresh so you get points for that. I did however, enjoy the closing line. Some might think it was forcedddddd but I thought it was pretty good. Ya verse was enough to take down Headless this week. Who's Joey Donuts again? I dunno dude's alias. Vote=JD in this one, though I think Headless has more text skill than you from what I've read. JD=2 dope lines Head=2 good lines Decently close for what Head dropped but Joey had enough power to take this. Word. __________________ I Win! Success!!

10-10-2004, 05:59 PM	#14 (permalink)
penacILLin konichiwa Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 250	joey took dis 1 since headless underestimated him n thought he was gun no show. i wasnt feelin ur style headless it seems like da aim one where u use the // brakets. both came kinda mediocre, joey jus came w/ more consistency, punches, multies were blah on both parts...blah @ top 30 battle... vote -- joey

10-10-2004, 06:27 PM	#15 (permalink)
stick's ghost Tommy Johnson Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: registered Posts: 1,290	vote - Joey by a little close though __________________ Stickman... a punch above the rest.

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10-10-2004, 06:56 PM	#16 (permalink)
God. Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 41	ok.. JD got this easy. bleh

10-10-2004, 07:56 PM	#17 (permalink)
lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: texas Posts: 12,159	vote-Joey Donuts it was actually pretty close to me, but Joeys lines were more dope...

10-10-2004, 08:36 PM	#18 (permalink)
Lethal Serenity Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: ohio Posts: 109	I'm going with joey on this one...he came more consisten with his flow, punches, multies, his vocab was bleh... good shit on both parts actually I just think joey took this one... Vote: joey

10-10-2004, 11:46 PM	#19 (permalink)
FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Tampa / Tallahassee, Florida Posts: 22,807	Joey Donuts Wins ^^^ Headless Verseman Loses vvv __________________ ...Black Listed

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