15. Platune 10-4 Vs 16. Oliver Twist 7-3

[-Oz-]

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[Platune]

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[Oliver Twist]

aight

[Oliver Twist]

This is war yo, so how u even ranked w/ that poor flow?
Cuz last week Dough delivered but u was more like DiGiorno
U dun wanna fight lass, seein u isnt even a slight task
Kiddo u just pattern my behavior like cheats in psych class
U aint flingin as hard so check what u bringin to me god
Have coroners carryin a Tune like theyre singin on the job
Ya girls a slut thats fa sho, me n her fuck on the low
Had her filmin ametuer porn but she can suck like a pro
In my estute game u suffer from my shrewd brain
Ya style's so suspect it could be a character in the Clue game
They dont kno bout swallowin like u do or about skull
But dont tell em anymore, uve already said a mouthful
Ur weak kid, ur lifes fading as u suffer each hit
To beat me ud need more 'unpresidented' moves than impeechment



twist

[Meticulous]

im here


I hope u diss me for losin to dough but i got a fresher plan
How u gonna diss me for losin to a champ, u LOST to vectoreman
You shouldn't fuck wit me, I'll leave u broke G
I'm like chauncey billups when i send this shot into O.T.
Ur the faggot dude, but im not the one to stereo type
So when i step to the mound im not pitchin, just walkin on ur burial site
Oliver's hungry for dope punches, now ur starvin bitch
Coz i got more ways to slice ya then a carvin kit
Im done with u clown, see now im droppin favors
Twist is gettin forgotten like a bad Bop it player
I got u scared dog, man i can hear that bumpin chest
When i said this is like football, no OT, just sudden death

all u get is 12, got shit to do

[-Oz-]

Over No Shows

[The Royal Penis]

Too bad the best battle in the RBL has no votes



This is war yo, so how u even ranked w/ that poor flow?
Cuz last week Dough delivered but u was more like DiGiorno
hahahahaha, nice

U dun wanna fight lass, seein u isnt even a slight task
Kiddo u just pattern my behavior like cheats in psych class
hmm it's ok

U aint flingin as hard so check what u bringin to me god
Have coroners carryin a Tune like theyre singin on the job
this is nice

Ya girls a slut thats fa sho, me n her fuck on the low
Had her filmin ametuer porn but she can suck like a pro
heh

In my estute game u suffer from my shrewd brain
Ya style's so suspect it could be a character in the Clue game
loving your multi's man

They dont kno bout swallowin like u do or about skull
But dont tell em anymore, uve already said a mouthful
ouch

Ur weak kid, ur lifes fading as u suffer each hit
To beat me ud need more 'unpresidented' moves than impeechment
almost.... almost

flow is kick ass, punches are thebest i've read so far, original and witty...got the nice style to go wtih it, killer verse

I hope u diss me for losin to dough but i got a fresher plan
How u gonna diss me for losin to a champ, u LOST to vectoreman
hah, nice opener

You shouldn't fuck wit me, I'll leave u broke G
I'm like chauncey billups when i send this shot into O.T.
cool play, simple but still nice

Ur the faggot dude, but im not the one to stereo type
So when i step to the mound im not pitchin, just walkin on ur burial site
i like the multi alot, makes this punch that much better

Oliver's hungry for dope punches, now ur starvin bitch
Coz i got more ways to slice ya then a carvin kit
ehh weaker here

Im done with u clown, see now im droppin favors
Twist is gettin forgotten like a bad Bop it player
... low point

I got u scared dog, man i can hear that bumpin chest
When i said this is like football, no OT, just sudden death
cool closer


good flow, style is on, punches were there most of the time, sagged a little towards the end, but still a good verse


overall i see Twist with the better verse


vote-Twist

[kaLeeF]

"They dont kno bout swallowin like u do or about skull
But dont tell em anymore, uve already said a mouthful"

"U aint flingin as hard so check what u bringin to me god
Have coroners carryin a Tune like theyre singin on the job"

liked those lines...from twist verse..


"got u scared dog, man i can hear that bumpin chest
When i said this is like football, no OT, just sudden death"

only line that stood out in mets verse to me

vote=oliver wit the better verse

[FaceLesss]

nice..battle...oliver came a lil harder though..i was feelin his disses that digirno line was crucial..thats gonna make the mag.lol....met u did tha damn thing..woulda beat damn near any othere verse i seen this week...but he got ya dawg

too many OT references... u used that shit like 4 times or something...

Oliver came out wit nice punches... a nice personal to open it
some cool multis throughout
and some funny shit too...

Plat... it just read like a lot of filler... no real punches.. I know it's playoff time, but you got hella basketball references in there...

Vote: Twist

[Opshins]

^^bwahah at that vote....there is like 1 basketball line in there....and im sorry but u suck

[Meticulous]

good battle twist..maybe next time i can post a verse of mine

[stOOpid]

twist
This is war yo, so how u even ranked w/ that poor flow?
Cuz last week Dough delivered but u was more like DiGiorno
In my estute game u suffer from my shrewd brain
Ya style's so suspect it could be a character in the Clue game
Ur weak kid, ur lifes fading as u suffer each hit
To beat me ud need more 'unpresidented' moves than impeechment

met
I hope u diss me for losin to dough but i got a fresher plan
How u gonna diss me for losin to a champ, u LOST to vectoreman
You shouldn't fuck wit me, I'll leave u broke G
I'm like chauncey billups when i send this shot into O.T.
Ur the faggot dude, but im not the one to stereo type
So when i step to the mound im not pitchin, just walkin on ur burial site
Oliver's hungry for dope punches, now ur starvin bitch
Coz i got more ways to slice ya then a carvin kit

these are my fav lines.. met had some hard fucking punches in ther.. twist verse was decent to me.. i didnt like the fact that he used five similies in his verse he started with four str8 similies.. and the only ones that were strong were the opener and closer.. the opener was Illy tho.. and those lines from met was fiyah.. i got met taking this easy vote= met

[-Oz-]

Oliver Twist wins