21. /\/\oonshyne 4-1 Vs 22. Sativa 5-2

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Old 05-04-2004, 08:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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21. /\/\oonshyne 4-1 Vs 22. Sativa 5-2

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Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
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-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT EASTERN! (meaning if you post at 12:01am, you are late)
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-Each battler is allowed to up their threads TWICE in a match.
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-You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links
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my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over
** In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets
** In a 4-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 10 Lines/5 Couplets


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Old 05-04-2004, 10:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 05-05-2004, 10:46 PM   #3 (permalink)
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ya battle last week?.. you really sought above controverse
took such a bite.. i thought mcgruff sponsored ya verse
ya record grew tho.. to bad i'll end the peak this week
and you'll need another 9 battles.. just to reach six feet
get stomped out.. matter of fact, trampled six deep
with kicks so hard.. even Warlokk'll wanna sample this beat
so just stop holmes, I mean it.. not one utter in
and what Sat do?.. drops Tone to fuck other men
whats the definition of Sativa.. it's rather unique
but stands for nothing.. except to flush right after you pee
you climbing up the ranks, gettin props..funny, me too
cept' i'll put ya buzz in a box, like the Honeycomb bee do
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Old 05-07-2004, 09:20 PM   #4 (permalink)
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rush'd again..

I'm real, so chill.. over all I wont attack you
Moon-shine? for being distilled alcohol, you lack proof
& your punches are stacked too, let me enlighted you now
PINK FAGGOT! probly piss'd @ Camron for bitin your style
Your attempts at personals are funny to me, believe it kid
You the only rapper in Queens who don't know what Sativa is
The establishment text division.. thats jus asking for trouble
So i'ma rhyme in 6 bar couplets.. while you rhyme w/ ur couple
Yeah, text crews are gay.. & youre the fakest that...
Spits awkward... moonshyne is more like text jamaican rap
Go ahead.. underestimate me, in the thought you'll relish
Coz yu misconcieve kids...... & your mother is jealous

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Old 05-07-2004, 11:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hmmm . . . interesting. Actually, some might find this hard to believe, but I'm feeling Sativa's verse more than Moonshyne's. I just feel like Sativa's was hotter overall. To make it more simple, basically Sativa's lines were better than Moonshyne's. That's my personal feelings on it.

Best Lines

Moonshyne: "whats the definition of Sativa.. it's rather unique
but stands for nothing.. except to flush right after you pee"

Sativa: "I'm real, so chill.. over all I wont attack you
Moon-shine? for being distilled alcohol, you lack proof"


Not an incredible battle, but someone had to win.


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Old 05-08-2004, 01:02 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 05-08-2004, 05:19 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Moonshyne:
ya battle last week?.. you really sought above controverse
took such a bite.. i thought mcgruff sponsored ya verse
haha, cool open
ya record grew tho.. to bad i'll end the peak this week
and you'll need another 9 battles.. just to reach six feet
haha, creative way to say it, but could've been wittier
get stomped out.. matter of fact, trampled six deep
with kicks so hard.. even Warlokk'll wanna sample this beat
ahahaha, nice
so just stop holmes, I mean it.. not one utter in
and what Sat do?.. drops Tone to fuck other men
eh, decent
whats the definition of Sativa.. it's rather unique
but stands for nothing.. except to flush right after you pee
eh
you climbing up the ranks, gettin props..funny, me too
cept' i'll put ya buzz in a box, like the Honeycomb bee do
eh, decent ending


Sativa:
I'm real, so chill.. over all I wont attack you
Moon-shine? for being distilled alcohol, you lack proof
played as fuck
& your punches are stacked too, let me enlighted you now
PINK FAGGOT! probly piss'd @ Camron for bitin your style
wtf, nah
Your attempts at personals are funny to me, believe it kid
You the only rapper in Queens who don't know what Sativa is
ok
The establishment text division.. thats jus asking for trouble
So i'ma rhyme in 6 bar couplets.. while you rhyme w/ ur couple
ehhhh
Yeah, text crews are gay.. & youre the fakest that...
Spits awkward... moonshyne is more like text jamaican rap
wtf was that?
Go ahead.. underestimate me, in the thought you'll relish
Coz yu misconcieve kids...... & your mother is jealous
ok ending


v/ Moonshyne

He was more creative IMO. Sativa didn't bring nothing. He had like one good concept, if that. Moonshyne's whole verse was good, cept for like 2 concepts. And I saw where Sativa's been voting on battles saying shit's played but he used a fucking proof line. If that shit ain't played than I don't know what is. Anyways, Moonshyne took this shit.

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Liked the warlokk line. Came w/ some 5/10 type shit
Sative, u dinnit show me enuff. Why u need to rush when u have all week to think up battle lines? It makes no sense. U didnt have any good lines IMO.
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Old 05-09-2004, 04:07 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 05-09-2004, 02:12 PM   #10 (permalink)
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vote-sativa, don't really have a breakdown, i just read through, and i guess i liked his versemore,the sample this beat line was coo...probably my favorite, but i think sativa had more/better lines


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Old 05-09-2004, 04:08 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Moonshyne was mostly played concepts, the flips were decent just not original.

Sativa is actually good, I didn't see it coming
came with some funny little lines, much better punches on this side of the battle.



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Old 05-09-2004, 05:52 PM   #12 (permalink)
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moonshyne - started off real nice and kept it dope for some lines, then i wasnt feelin a couple of your lines. but you had some decent concepts, creative verse, fun to read. i liked this line, even tho i've heard it before used different ways:

"get stomped out.. matter of fact, trampled six deep
with kicks so hard.. even Warlokk'll wanna sample this beat"

sativa - i really liked ya flow, u used a real nice delivery style. i felt the first half of your verse was really dope and creative, but after that it became boring and generic sounding. wasnt feelin the concepts u used in like the last 5 or 6 lines of your verse. again, this line is played, but i liked it still:

"I'm real, so chill.. over all I wont attack you
Moon-shine? for being distilled alcohol, you lack proof"

vote - moonshyne

close battle, felt moonshyne had a more entertaining verse, peace
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