11. Oneduh 14-2 Vs 12. Dis-Honour 10-0

[Hating Mantis]

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[castro'DAMUS]

czeeech, g'luck

25. Skybe 10-5 Vs 26. Synthesis 10-5
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...01#post8803701
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...24#post8803724
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...61#post8803761
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...09#post8803809
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...24#post8803824

[Oneduh]

I don't wanna wait until friday night for 14 lines..

Try to get at this shit early if possible, goodluck



http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...07#post8792007
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...87#post8799087

[castro'DAMUS]

I dont write until friday night though, 10-16 then, lol....

1 up

[Oneduh]

Demik & Headless gave you wins, it's clear who had the easier route
If I throw a match, it'll be on a trail of gas that leads to your house
I got better things to do than battle fags, he failed at being nice
Dissy's not high on agenda, females to be precise
What you did for User was cool, but he didn't ask you to ghost ONCE
He knew you couldn't grasp the concept of having a hand in a dope punch
Playin off my lines won't work, so he'll look to sway voters
& drop a verse with more flips than the hook to Game Over
You're known for tasteless braggin, just an overrated faggot
After you boozed your confidence, I'll play the role of Chaser tablets
When I put the blade to your spleen, there's no hope of the cut healing
& misery loves company, so you better go with your gut feeling
You can call me a textcee, I stay improvin with keys while..
You stay droppin 3 minute writtens, & losin to freestyles

Crown me bitches.

[castro'DAMUS]

DH' stay giving you 'head lines' like durags....

haha lets go

this shits simple as cake, son, how you gonna win..
when you lost the belt to headless, and I took it from him?
its said that im felt, no questions asked im gettin' the belt
and one? well, you ran away from wack,..... N got ahead of yourself
lets stick to the truth for real, dont let my flame die out
the only reason this guy ever became champ was b'cuz cane signed out
your fighting with hope, you wanna win N you might if I choke
but still your about as lethal as james bond.....with his license revoked
DH is the truth, and One is nothing worth believin'
when we all know.. Anthraxspits: absolutely nothing worth you reading
we've been thru it all, its real when the truth rattles
demiks the weak link..
..and oneduhs, well... the guy who sets up our crew battles
this guys my leader? never that, so the talkin is thru
cuz WonderFlow is so....you know what, fuck it....Im dropin' the crew
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...75#post8778175

JEAHHHH

crown ME!

[castro'DAMUS]

Absent Minded aka Opshins aka Egotistical

cannot vote on this battle!


last up, good battle oneduh

[FYIFB]

Demik & Headless gave you wins, it's clear who had the easier route
If I throw a match, it'll be on a trail of gas that leads to your house
haha..

I got better things to do than battle fags, he failed at being nice
Dissy's not high on agenda, females to be precise
heh..

What you did for User was cool, but he didn't ask you to ghost ONCE
He knew you couldn't grasp the concept of having a hand in a dope punch
lmao, ouch..

Playin off my lines won't work, so he'll look to sway voters
& drop a verse with more flips than the hook to Game Over
haha, plus the setup was totally on point, liked these 2 alot..

You're known for tasteless braggin, just an overrated faggot
After you boozed your confidence, I'll play the role of Chaser tablets
hahahaa, dope shit..

When I put the blade to your spleen, there's no hope of the cut healing
& misery loves company, so you better go with your gut feeling
You can call me a textcee, I stay improvin with keys while..
You stay droppin 3 minute writtens, & losin to freestyles

ewww, didnt like how you finished, it was going so well
the misery lines iffy, worded alot better then ive seen before, but nah wasnt lovin it..
last line got a small smirk from me tho, i guess you get some points for it..but i didnt think Oz's verse was a free.....iono...
your top half of the verse was pure comedy, you straight attacked him, got on HIM, lovly shit thurr..

__________________

this shits simple as cake, son, how you gonna win..
when you lost the belt to headless, and I took it from him?
ehhh @ best..

its said that im felt, no questions asked im gettin' the belt
and one? well, you ran away from wack,..... N got ahead of yourself
lol, cool, i know everybody hates when people say its a played concept, but this is, took away from it all, still cool..

lets stick to the truth for real, dont let my flame die out
the only reason this guy ever became champ was b'cuz cane signed out
nah..

your fighting with hope, you wanna win N you might if I choke
but still your about as lethal as james bond.....with his license revoked
lol, cool..

DH is the truth, and One is nothing worth believin'
when we all know.. Anthraxspits: absolutely nothing worth you reading
ehhh, creative yea, jus not much effect to me..

we've been thru it all, its real when the truth rattles
demiks the weak link..
..and oneduhs, well... the guy who sets up our crew battles
ehhh..

this guys my leader? never that, so the talkin is thru
cuz WonderFlow is so....you know what, fuck it....Im dropin' the crew
lmao, hilarious..

yea, iono yo, not as consistant, not much wow from ya verse, had some creative lines(some not so creative, makes oneduh flip line connect even more) but nothin really WOW..




.....iono this 1's pretty easy for me to judge
oneduh seemed to have the more appealing verse, tho DH's closer was niiice lol

vote - oneduh

[Residual]

i have an opinion on who I think won,
and it's not clear cut like Vybe said...
Oneduh came flames then kind of fell off...that throw a match line was dope as fuck, Game Over line was pretty good but that booze ya confidence line/chaser, no man, that shit just doesn't work but the misery line was ok...didn't feel the closer but jeah, I know what's up on the personal tip.

DH came on the personal tip...some of the lines were pretty good, opener was ok, cane line was funny, james bond line was bleh though...that AIM line was pretty good, lmao@sets up our crew battles, good shit there...droppin' the crew line was coo, ionno that's a bad move though yo.

Ionno, to me it ain't clear cut but I definitely feel Oneduh had that match line, which was, oddly enougg, line of the match. Play on words bitches.
Ionno, both styles were good, this is prolly THE match to peep in the top 30, to me it is anyway.
My opinion's kind of swaying.

I'll come back and edit in who I think won after I read a couple more times.
I think you both came good though, shit was a pretty coo match.

I am swaying a bit to one side though, it's probably obvious too.
I'll holla.

[Beäst]

Tru, i was feelling the same way in regards to match of the week to peep.

Oneduh-from the getgo u captured my attention with that nice match punch an kept consistent imo with the exception of a few lines such as the Boozed wordplay. But overall u had a really nice verse.

Dis honour-i was kind of iffy on your whole verse..half the personals i liked and seemed like they hit hard, the other half i wasnt really feelin. U had a nice verse too, but overall i found myself leaning towards Oneduh and it quite possibly could be because of how he started his shit out.

So...Vote=Oneduh

[Trinidad]

Shhhhhhhhhhhh

[-Oz-]

Shhhhhhhhhhhh

[FYIFB]

Shhhhhhhhhhhh

[Egotistical]

vote=Oneduh......he started off with flames...came really dope..but he fell off in a couple places..but verse was still nice.....Dissy...his closer actually was not even a punch...and the WF disses werent really doing it for me...i like the james bond line it was nice...cane line was ehhhh since u won the title on a noshow....like i said...the headless opener was not good since u won on a noshow...do what you want Dh...discount my vote but its honest so w/e

[-Oz-]

Originally Posted by Oneduh

Demik & Headless gave you wins, it's clear who had the easier route
If I throw a match, it'll be on a trail of gas that leads to your house

Very Nice Line, Mag Shit

I got better things to do than battle fags, he failed at being nice
Dissy's not high on agenda, females to be precise

Do Not Like, Dont Really Hit To Me

What you did for User was cool, but he didn't ask you to ghost ONCE
He knew you couldn't grasp the concept of having a hand in a dope punch

Good Personal

Playin off my lines won't work, so he'll look to sway voters
& drop a verse with more flips than the hook to Game Over

Very Very Nice

You're known for tasteless braggin, just an overrated faggot
After you boozed your confidence, I'll play the role of Chaser tablets

Do Not Like At All

When I put the blade to your spleen, there's no hope of the cut healing
& misery loves company, so you better go with your gut feeling

Blah @ Cliche

You can call me a textcee, I stay improvin with keys while..
You stay droppin 3 minute writtens, & losin to freestyles

Blah Closer. Oneduh had that fire in the beginning, but his second half of his verse lacked anything appealing. Still some dope lines in there, some impressive shit. For every dope line, there was some forced wordplay line that was as bad as the others were dope. Pretty well rounded verse, might have been better spreadin the good concepts out more, instead of the end just being BOOOOO. Also, I <3 Oneduh

Originally Posted by Dis Honour

this shits simple as cake, son, how you gonna win..
when you lost the belt to headless, and I took it from him?

NiCE ... Reguardless of how he got the title, this is a good line. It aint Dissy fault Headless was shook, that only add's more to the line.

its said that im felt, no questions asked im gettin' the belt
and one? well, you ran away from wack,..... N got ahead of yourself

Blah Cliche

lets stick to the truth for real, dont let my flame die out
the only reason this guy ever became champ was b'cuz cane signed out

Aight Personal, Just Kinda Rhyming Facts Tho

your fighting with hope, you wanna win N you might if I choke
but still your about as lethal as james bond.....with his license revoked

I Like This Alot

DH is the truth, and One is nothing worth believin'
when we all know.. Anthraxspits: absolutely nothing worth you reading

Ha, I Like This As Well, Tho Kinda Predictable, Still Nice To Me

we've been thru it all, its real when the truth rattles
demiks the weak link..
..and oneduhs, well... the guy who sets up our crew battles

[b]Pretty Good, Since I Aint Seen Oneduh Battle In 1

this guys my leader? never that, so the talkin is thru
cuz WonderFlow is so....you know what, fuck it....Im dropin' the crew

I Dont Like.
Dissy had a pretty dope verse as well. Not as many weak lines and the good ones spread about more, some good personals too.

I see this battle extremely close. It really could go either way. Anyway To Break It Down, Both Had 1 Blah Cliche POS line. Oneduh had an additional 3 Bars I didnt care for, While Dissy had 2. Oneduh had 2 dope lines, but so did Dissy, But put next to each other I think Oneduhs 2 are overall better. On the other hand, I feel Oneduhs worst lines were worse than Dishonours worst lines. So yeah, this is Obviously very very close. I know alot of cats gonna hate Dishonour, I wont lie I wanted to see him lose, But

Vote Dis-honour, his verse just had more pizazz. Very close, & had Oneduh had one more good line, he would have won, But I can't ignore the second half of his verse. Very nice battle fellas, definitely Mag Material

[Anaphora]

Demik & Headless gave you wins, it's clear who had the easier route
If I throw a match, it'll be on a trail of gas that leads to your house
-this was pretty nice...

I got better things to do than battle fags, he failed at being nice
Dissy's not high on agenda, females to be precise
-This was worded a little weird, but I get the idea..

What you did for User was cool, but he didn't ask you to ghost ONCE
He knew you couldn't grasp the concept of having a hand in a dope punch
- Hahaha

Playin off my lines won't work, so he'll look to sway voters
& drop a verse with more flips than the hook to Game Over
- haha, nice

You're known for tasteless braggin, just an overrated faggot
After you boozed your confidence, I'll play the role of Chaser tablets
-pretty nice.

When I put the blade to your spleen, there's no hope of the cut healing
& misery loves company, so you better go with your gut feeling
-Haha

You can call me a textcee, I stay improvin with keys while..
You stay droppin 3 minute writtens, & losin to freestyles
-This was funny too, nice closer.
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this shits simple as cake, son, how you gonna win..
when you lost the belt to headless, and I took it from him?
-Nice opener

its said that im felt, no questions asked im gettin' the belt
and one? well, you ran away from wack,..... N got ahead of yourself
-this was a little awkward, but nice concept.

lets stick to the truth for real, dont let my flame die out
the only reason this guy ever became champ was b'cuz cane signed out
-haha

your fighting with hope, you wanna win N you might if I choke
but still your about as lethal as james bond.....with his license revoked
- I wasn't feeling this one as much.

DH is the truth, and One is nothing worth believin'
when we all know.. Anthraxspits: absolutely nothing worth you reading
- the first read of this I didn't like it, but the second time around it kinda grew on me... not bad.

we've been thru it all, its real when the truth rattles
demiks the weak link..
..and oneduhs, well... the guy who sets up our crew battles
- ehh... this was ok. I like the tone of it, but you could've worded it more effectively I think.

this guys my leader? never that, so the talkin is thru
cuz WonderFlow is so....you know what, fuck it....Im dropin' the crew
-I'm torn between the whole dropping wf being a cheesy publicity stunt to win this, or it just being something that happened... not sure about it.

Overall, I think I liked Oneduh's verse more... both had some good lines, but I think One had a couple more. Good match though.