9. Vectoreman 6-2 Vs 10. Oliver Twist 7-2

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[Oliver Twist]

prolly 18

23. Anaphora 4-0 Vs 24. Ibeechu Farensquare 4-0

[vectoreman]

18's good ..

[Oliver Twist]

To rise is the plan but I'll atleast let u die as a man
I'll ring ur neck more times than tribes in Sudan
Beyond any passing hope u'll find out why I'm frankly dope
Leave Tore in pinstripes w/ his hands crossed like the Yankees coach
U should study my style, u see how far urs as a whole got u
Cuz even ur father figures that I should be ur role model
I swear I'll bomb ya even tho I don't care for drama
Far as dicks go
This dudes die'n to Blow O's like he's addicted to marijuana
Ur mind is shootin blanks mines is like a nine or a glock
Ya gunz is so Meek u could be signed to the Roc
My armys trackin u down, it'll get ugly when we find ya
Cuz I got a height of numbers behind me like a police line up
Homo refs are really played dawg but I can factually say
That I can use em as personals on u cuz ur actually gay
U posting wack is coo yo so lets not even pretend we're rivals
So skip God, ull be the first one I thank when I win the title
My disses were tight so theres no need to finish the fight
When u woke up it was Sunny but u'll sleep w/ the fishes tonite



twist

[vectoreman]

you're 7-2? when i win i'mma gloat, in fact ..
i aint seein that many stretched lines in a yoga class
plus, i'm rude to ya moms then lay the pipe to ya lady
& they both agreed that the twist went out back in the 80's.
ya family photo's embarassing, you cant live up to your name ..
so i twist ya fuckin spine.. so you can fit inside'a the frame
you looked up to me, mayne - i'm wack? be honest
go back to '01 when you did a track & begged me to be on it
& i'll be honest; he's fat as fuck - walks & shakes ass
i could cut ya body up & box the pieces in every weight class
you'll drop out the top 20, i'll make you the loser
why you guys wastin ya lines - this kid's fatter than user
but with prolly 1/4 the skill, you's a dork f'real
your chances are like chris reeves' gettin an endorsement deal
& you'll die quickly, trust.. you'll be in hell soon
but satan will reject you -
cause you so ugly even 'extreme makeover' cant help you
with the closer, i suggest you bulk up that chest & thighs
been stretchin concepts enough.. just read ya verse for exercise


vectore.

[Trinidad]

One Sided Battle Here

Oliver- your personals were descent .. no true punch lines i felt were in your verse ... some attempt to use wordplay .. didnt come that hard .. & your lines were a lil' to stretched .. i liked the addicted to marjuanna line though .. overall descent verse

Vectore- you had some pretty witty punches .. & punches i liked .. like the 80's line was dope as well as the yoga class line .. Haha
Punches deff hit much harder thans Twists .. overall your verse was pretty good

Vote- Vec by a run .. Nice verse by the two though

[Skrybe]

^
Basically what he said. Oliver Twist's punches were . . . ehhh, okay . . . just kinda weak. *shrug* It's not like he didn't put punches in there, but they just didn't seem to hit hard enough. VEC USED A CHRISTOPHER REEVE LINE! PUNK!! LOL Nah, just kidding (I used a Christopher Reeve line last week; you probably didn't even see it, though; doesn't matter). Vectore's verse was pretty dope. He definitely connected with the punches, and that's pretty much all he needed to do in this battle. Not saying Oliver was extremely horrible, or that Vec's verse was extremely overpowering - cause I'm sure he can drop doper than that - but basically Vec dropped enough to win. So go you. LOL

Vote - Vectoreman

[-Oz-]

Over No Shows

[vectoreman]

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...11#post8792911
2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...14#post8792914
3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...19#post8792919
4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...28#post8792928
5. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...36#post8792936
6. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...44#post8792944

[Anaphora]

To rise is the plan but I'll atleast let u die as a man
I'll ring ur neck more times than tribes in Sudan
-haha, this made me laugh right from the start.

Beyond any passing hope u'll find out why I'm frankly dope
Leave Tore in pinstripes w/ his hands crossed like the Yankees coach
-this was pretty good too.

U should study my style, u see how far urs as a whole got u
Cuz even ur father figures that I should be ur role model
-ehh, this was ok, not as good as the others.

I swear I'll bomb ya even tho I don't care for drama
Far as dicks go
This dudes die'n to Blow O's like he's addicted to marijuana
-I wasn't a fan of this line.

Ur mind is shootin blanks mines is like a nine or a glock
Ya gunz is so Meek u could be signed to the Roc
- ehh...

My armys trackin u down, it'll get ugly when we find ya
Cuz I got a height of numbers behind me like a police line up
-I get it, but it wasn't the best concept ya know? not so much of a punch as just word play.

Homo refs are really played dawg but I can factually say
That I can use em as personals on u cuz ur actually gay
-heh

U posting wack is coo yo so lets not even pretend we're rivals
So skip God, ull be the first one I thank when I win the title
-this was ok too

My disses were tight so theres no need to finish the fight
When u woke up it was Sunny but u'll sleep w/ the fishes tonite
-ehh... nice set up, but didn't follow through as hard as you could've... the beginning of the second line didn't seem to fit as well as it could've...

You had a really good flow, though in times it seemed a little bit forced, making likes a little awkward, but nothing too bad.
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you're 7-2? when i win i'mma gloat, in fact ..
i aint seein that many stretched lines in a yoga class
-this was pretty good...

plus, i'm rude to ya moms then lay the pipe to ya lady
& they both agreed that the twist went out back in the 80's.
-don't you mean the 50's?

ya family photo's embarassing, you cant live up to your name ..
so i twist ya fuckin spine.. so you can fit inside'a the frame
-eh...

you looked up to me, mayne - i'm wack? be honest
go back to '01 when you did a track & begged me to be on it
-Haha, this was pretty good personal... not sure if its true, but hey...

& i'll be honest; he's fat as fuck - walks & shakes ass
i could cut ya body up & box the pieces in every weight class
-ok ok...

you'll drop out the top 20, i'll make you the loser
why you guys wastin ya lines - this kid's fatter than user
- don't know what the first part of this line has to do with the second... but ok, another fat joke...

but with prolly 1/4 the skill, you's a dork f'real
your chances are like chris reeves' gettin an endorsement deal
-I think he does endorse shit... if you'd said like, a nike endorsement deal, that would've been great, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt on this one.

& you'll die quickly, trust.. you'll be in hell soon
but satan will reject you -
cause you so ugly even 'extreme makeover' cant help you
-ehh..

with the closer, i suggest you bulk up that chest & thighs
been stretchin concepts enough.. just read ya verse for exercise
-you spent at least 3 lines saying he's fat... and then you're telling him to bulk up? I dunno about the setup, but the last line was pretty witty.

Pretty good verse, didn't have the flow oliver did, but some good punches.
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This wasn't nearly as one sided as the other people said... Oliver's first two punches were sick, then it kinda fell off a bit, but he had good flow thoughout, nice multi's... Vect had a couple good punches, the chris reeves line needed just a little extra, but its damned funny... but he didn't have the flow so much as Oliver did... I don't think people really read verses to be honest... but yea, I'm gonna give this to Oliver. the first four lines and flow won it for him in my eyes.

[Ibeechu Farensqure]

vote= Vec

OT didn't come as nice as he did last week, had some good lines though. The opener was hot. The rest didn't have the hard hitting punch quality

Vec had some hot lines that hit OT from every angle. With flow, punches, and personals, all pretty good. Thats why he gets the vote.

[vectoreman]

last up ..

[stOOpid]

nuttin reallly punchy from twist..

you're 7-2? when i win i'mma gloat, in fact ..
i aint seein that many stretched lines in a yoga class
you looked up to me, mayne - i'm wack? be honest
go back to '01 when you did a track & begged me to be on it
& i'll be honest; he's fat as fuck - walks & shakes ass
i could cut ya body up & box the pieces in every weight class

this is what i liked from vec.. esp the weightclass one

this battle was ok at best.. but vec cleary took it tho.. pz

[/\/\oonshyne]

Originally Posted by vectoreman

plus, i'm rude to ya moms then lay the pipe to ya lady
& they both agreed that the twist went out back in the 80's.

that shit was hilarious.. fuck the history lesson ^^
Vec had the funny quips as far as the nameplay, pretty good with the setups too

Oliver's first 4 lines was fire, the rest was residue
both had good setups and flips tho
however Oliver had more cornier lines.. like the Gun/Roc line and the ref joint
Vec pretty much just had the extreme makeover one i didn't like
so vote Vec

[The Royal Penis]

interesting, i'm feeling oliver's shit alot more then vec's, he had some nice nameplays early, and came on some personal shit, but i'm kind of tired of fat jokes... noone has lived up to what resin did to user, and still yea, vec came with some shit that would have beat anyone who didn't start like this

To rise is the plan but I'll atleast let u die as a man
I'll ring ur neck more times than tribes in Sudan
Beyond any passing hope u'll find out why I'm frankly dope
Leave Tore in pinstripes w/ his hands crossed like the Yankees coach
U should study my style, u see how far urs as a whole got u
Cuz even ur father figures that I should be ur role model
hah, nice

U posting wack is coo yo so lets not even pretend we're rivals
So skip God, ull be the first one I thank when I win the title
feeling this one too...


vote-Twist

[M.dot.STAR]

Twist had the punches
Vec had the personals, but the punches were more clever


vote - Twist

[-Oz-]

Vectore wins. Oliver if you dont start posting links, you will be banned.