7. John Dough 10-2 Vs 8. Platune 10-3

[Hating Mantis]

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[Platune]

i'm droppin like 14-16

[Dough Jordan]

i'll do the same pop

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[Dough Jordan]

lets be real, pop u gonna murder who?/
how u 10-3 and half the league never heard of u/
better get a voting ring and get on some group shit/
I'll have ya bones flop faster than that snoop flick/
break em all, tap that keyboard, hit that shift hard/
gimme a run for money? more like walk for a gift card/
diss that I'm white please like I rhyme different son/
know race to me's nothing but a timed distance run/
I know ur record's fake, that knowledge I'll drop some/
win vs u's a jacob watch, almost every rapper's got one/
surprise fam, I'm great and can't stop the reign/
u wuz the key to success but the lock'sve changed/
check the match predictions, u wuz served wit a omen/
call ya verses Tim Duncan cuz they spur of the moment/
all rushed fast, when I write and the pencil's pounding.../
u'll pass away like intentional grounding/

please...

[-Oz-]

Platune got an hour.

[-Oz-]

Over No Shows

[Meticulous]

So u was brave enuff to post, got ur back off the wall
Since oz became mod and u asked to borrow some balls
I got no sorrow at all for white boys tryin to look all real
Like u a crook in jail..when the only yards u seen were on football fields
U aint close if u look at skill, so tell us about birds and prices
How u be in the kitchen cookin...but with herbs and spi ces
Ur familys goin through a crisis, now u can talk bout who is tough
Since ur moms like a gang member, the way she be shootin up
whut.. u think ur movin up, people IM'in u cuz they heard u hot
But everyone took u off their b/l after you got served by doc
Turned ya spot, u shouldnt even try to spare an answer
unless u want to get cut quicker than barry sanders
u aint near my standards, can't see me on paper
and audios.....u could only lasts 4 bars like cd players
Tryin to act major, doc put u through enuff embarassment
u can stop beating urself up over it....i already took care of it

[Meticulous]

ay can someone help me..i'm tryin to edit it to put es after herbs...can a mod do this...nevermind

[ST_UC]

vote - dough

plat was alright... but dough came like his usual... which means it wasnt a contest

multis = tie
punches - dough - by far
flow- dough by far...
cats think flow has to do with line length but it doesnt... cuz plats lines were almost the same length... all of doughs shit hit on time, cept for the last bar, and everyone knows that bar dont matter... dough took this... faV BAR WAS...

surprise fam, I'm great and can't stop the reign/
u wuz the key to success but the lock'sve changed/

nothings changed... it went good with the stanza before it.... none of doughs punches were spectacular... but a verse of "decent" punches can beat a 'couple' of "aight" punches

vote = Dough

[Sativa.]

the break down,

lets be real, pop u gonna murder who?/
how u 10-3 and half the league never heard of u/

very weak opener.. i cant beleive cats still use that type of concept

better get a voting ring and get on some group shit/
I'll have ya bones flop faster than that snoop flick/

okay.. simple, but i've seen the bones/snoop concept since that movie 1st came out

break em all, tap that keyboard, hit that shift hard/
gimme a run for money? more like walk for a gift card/

heard bux use the concept first, but this' a better flip, too bad it's so old

diss that I'm white please like I rhyme different son/
know race to me's nothing but a timed distance run/

nice, wrd'd nicely & good counter to his whiteboy shit(though u dropp'd 1st)

I know ur record's fake, that knowledge I'll drop some/
win vs u's a jacob watch, almost every rapper's got one/

damn.. concept's kinda simplistic, but kids'll think it's dope coz of the fancy expensive watch refference

surprise fam, I'm great and can't stop the reign/
u wuz the key to success but the lock'sve changed/

weak...

check the match predictions, u wuz served wit a omen/
call ya verses Tim Duncan cuz they spur of the moment/

actually, Parker's more of the Spur of the moment.. simple kinda play'd concept

all rushed fast, when I write and the pencil's pounding.../
u'll pass away like intentional grounding/

I felt it.. simple & to the point. probly ur best line


So u was brave enuff to post, got ur back off the wall
Since oz became mod and u asked to borrow some balls

blah.. opener is direct but basic, better than dough's

I got no sorrow at all for white boys tryin to look all real
Like u a crook in jail..when the only yards u seen were on football fields

okay diss.. haven't really heard that concept, i guess it's suppose to be gansta

U aint close if u look at skill, so tell us about birds and prices
How u be in the kitchen cookin...but with herbs and spi ces

haha.. okay diss, but these disses are very generic now

Ur familys goin through a crisis, now u can talk bout who is tough
Since ur moms like a gang member, the way she be shootin up

another funny type personal, but it's way weak..

whut.. u think ur movin up, people IM'in u cuz they heard u hot
But everyone took u off their b/l after you got served by doc

simple diss, but direct

Turned ya spot, u shouldnt even try to spare an answer
unless u want to get cut quicker than barry sanders

blah @ this line

u aint near my standards, can't see me on paper
and audios.....u could only lasts 4 bars like cd players

i liked this.. good flow

Tryin to act major, doc put u through enuff embarassment
u can stop beating urself up over it....i already took care of it

okay personal & a solid closer.. could have been better


vote Platune
less filler & fresher concepts

[eyedeal]

damn, dough had some dope lines this week.

cool battle.

[Serge dot T]

Originally Posted by Sativa.

the break down,

lets be real, pop u gonna murder who?/
how u 10-3 and half the league never heard of u/

very weak opener.. i cant beleive cats still use that type of concept

ur a fucking idiot, how about that for a concept?

[eyedeal]

^^ ahahahahaha

[Beäst]

lets be real, pop u gonna murder who?/
how u 10-3 and half the league never heard of u/--aiight
better get a voting ring and get on some group shit/
I'll have ya bones flop faster than that snoop flick/--nice
break em all, tap that keyboard, hit that shift hard/
gimme a run for money? more like walk for a gift card/--boo
diss that I'm white please like I rhyme different son/
know race to me's nothing but a timed distance run/--wheres the punch here?
I know ur record's fake, that knowledge I'll drop some/
win vs u's a jacob watch, almost every rapper's got one/---aiight
surprise fam, I'm great and can't stop the reign/
u wuz the key to success but the lock'sve changed/--boo
check the match predictions, u wuz served wit a omen/
call ya verses Tim Duncan cuz they spur of the moment/--dam, i thot up this same exact punch a week ago but dinnit use it. I dinnit really like it tho is why. Too easy to think of. Anyone who thinks of the concept "Spur of the moment" is gonna use Tim Duncan with it. Wack shit..
all rushed fast, when I write and the pencil's pounding.../
u'll pass away like intentional grounding/--?Wtf? Boo

Dough-aiight verse, had some shit i liked but some shit i dinnit like such as the spur of the moment and the other cliche punches.

So u was brave enuff to post, got ur back off the wall
Since oz became mod and u asked to borrow some balls--blah, dinit like it
I got no sorrow at all for white boys tryin to look all real
Like u a crook in jail..when the only yards u seen were on football fields--dinnit like
U aint close if u look at skill, so tell us about birds and prices
How u be in the kitchen cookin...but with herbs and spi ces--um...k whatever
Ur familys goin through a crisis, now u can talk bout who is tough
Since ur moms like a gang member, the way she be shootin up--it was eh to me. 4.8/10 shit
whut.. u think ur movin up, people IM'in u cuz they heard u hot
But everyone took u off their b/l after you got served by doc--aiight
Turned ya spot, u shouldnt even try to spare an answer
unless u want to get cut quicker than barry sanders--no
u aint near my standards, can't see me on paper
and audios.....u could only lasts 4 bars like cd players--k
Tryin to act major, doc put u through enuff embarassment
u can stop beating urself up over it....i already took care of it--bwahaha..sorry, wack shit..i used this line years ago

"But dont beat your self up over this..cus then i'd be out of a job"
^That was my line tho..

Met/Platune-had some aiight lines but for the most part i wasnt feelin ya shit at all

V-Dough, granted he had wack cliche punches that were played he still came with some aiight lines to make up for it where as Platune just didnt catch my attention reading his verse.

[Meticulous]

Originally Posted by Beäst

lets be real, pop u gonna murder who?/
how u 10-3 and half the league never heard of u/--aiight
better get a voting ring and get on some group shit/
I'll have ya bones flop faster than that snoop flick/--nice
break em all, tap that keyboard, hit that shift hard/
gimme a run for money? more like walk for a gift card/--boo
diss that I'm white please like I rhyme different son/
know race to me's nothing but a timed distance run/--wheres the punch here?
I know ur record's fake, that knowledge I'll drop some/
win vs u's a jacob watch, almost every rapper's got one/---aiight
surprise fam, I'm great and can't stop the reign/
u wuz the key to success but the lock'sve changed/--boo
check the match predictions, u wuz served wit a omen/
call ya verses Tim Duncan cuz they spur of the moment/--dam, i thot up this same exact punch a week ago but dinnit use it. I dinnit really like it tho is why. Too easy to think of. Anyone who thinks of the concept "Spur of the moment" is gonna use Tim Duncan with it. Wack shit..
all rushed fast, when I write and the pencil's pounding.../
u'll pass away like intentional grounding/--?Wtf? Boo

Dough-aiight verse, had some shit i liked but some shit i dinnit like such as the spur of the moment and the other cliche punches.

So u was brave enuff to post, got ur back off the wall
Since oz became mod and u asked to borrow some balls--blah, dinit like it
I got no sorrow at all for white boys tryin to look all real
Like u a crook in jail..when the only yards u seen were on football fields--dinnit like
U aint close if u look at skill, so tell us about birds and prices
How u be in the kitchen cookin...but with herbs and spi ces--um...k whatever
Ur familys goin through a crisis, now u can talk bout who is tough
Since ur moms like a gang member, the way she be shootin up--it was eh to me. 4.8/10 shit
whut.. u think ur movin up, people IM'in u cuz they heard u hot
But everyone took u off their b/l after you got served by doc--aiight
Turned ya spot, u shouldnt even try to spare an answer
unless u want to get cut quicker than barry sanders--no
u aint near my standards, can't see me on paper
and audios.....u could only lasts 4 bars like cd players--k
Tryin to act major, doc put u through enuff embarassment
u can stop beating urself up over it....i already took care of it--bwahaha..sorry, wack shit..i used this line years ago

"But dont beat your self up over this..cus then i'd be out of a job"
^That was my line tho..

Met/Platune-had some aiight lines but for the most part i wasnt feelin ya shit at all

V-Dough, granted he had wack cliche punches that were played he still came with some aiight lines to make up for it where as Platune just didnt catch my attention reading his verse.

vote dont count..we got beef, i got posts to prove we have problems, he was beggin me to join FC and i clowned him

[Dough Jordan]

lol...

[Sur*5*ILL]

Lmao!!!

"We Got Net Beef"

[Meticulous]

Originally Posted by Dough Jordan

lol...

no..it counts 2-1..i thought he was killa mac..good drop dough

[The Royal Penis]

i read through initially and thought dough had it, and i came back today, maybe with a fresh viewpoint ya know, and not much has changed, cept somebody really criticizing doughs lines... lol


know race to me's nothing but a timed distance run/
I know ur record's fake, that knowledge I'll drop some/
win vs u's a jacob watch, almost every rapper's got one/
surprise fam, I'm great and can't stop the reign/
u wuz the key to success but the lock'sve changed/

feeling this little section... some cool punches in here for sure, closer was also nice

i was really only liking the last 4 from platune, verse was ok, but i felt dough came with a little bit nicer verse here, punch wise, and just more effective...


vote-Dough