RBL #1 CONTENDERSHIP MATCH: Doc Richards 10-1 vs. John Dough 10-1

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[Dough Jordan]

lets go 16

[Hating Mantis]

no problem bro


lets make it a good one dough boy

[Dough Jordan]

doc rich gotta battle cuz he got no hands or skills/
he put his best foot forward and kept standin still/
u can't really win, I'll show u how ta properly kill/
times money, an hour of yours is six monopoly bills/
doc ur pussy, the WF squad could hardly tell/
ur resime reads loser and mod of the rbl/
everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/
yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/
brought it a soundcard, no flowers, ur number's drawn/
bullets are like re-runs, u'll catch em all summer long/
made my moves, ur a rookie while I paid my dues/
this verse came with glowsticks cuz it got rave reviews/
with punches that weak look at ur tense ass.../
fuck verses, ur posts look like a women's self defense class/

yea...

[Hating Mantis]

AkA DeMiK 416:
http://www.urbanprowlers .net/tourney/pba/dough2.jpg


Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week
Wanted the prime for the makes,last week was a test of'nything you got left
For christ's sake, last week i gave you ELLIOTT BEST
John's buildin a cell in the bit, for sif gettin bent & shit
Big enough for his #1 rider to serve his next sentence in
& we was always thinkin sifgod was hype, how he had ya back dude
But now he got grammar check and we see he was sayin you wack too
That chin of yours could be an industry, try upsizing
& puttin pepsi down the side, they payin erythin else for advertising
Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me
Thankin all his riders with a bitchslap, while his mouth in em
Abusin ya power so much, ur utilities got battered spouse syndrome
Gun lines are original? NO, every line...i heard it
Writin like Jay Cee mixed with every dude on the mixtape circuit


a guy with a pen: show em why u mad, son


im disappointed dough

[-Oz-]

Originally Posted by Dough Jordan

everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/

Well, this was the only quotable I was really feeling from Dough. The rest the shit is average type shit, good, not bad, but not really dope. Im guessing he underestimated the ol Hating Mantis.

Originally Posted by Hating Mantis

Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week

Dope

Originally Posted by Hating Mantis

Wanted the prime for the makes,last week was a test of'nything you got left
For christ's sake, last week i gave you ELLIOTT BEST

Nice Personal

Originally Posted by Hating Mantis

John's buildin a cell in the bit, for sif gettin bent & shit
Big enough for his #1 rider to serve his next sentence in

This was cool too.

In the end, I think that Dough came well. Not compared to previous weeks, but good none the less. But a verse of generic punches, without a lot of dope ones, dont really stand up to a verse with some good personals and still good creativity. I think Demik had the worst line of the battle, and still didnt have the best line...but all in all, his shit had more lines I was feeling. Dough even had a punchless punchline.

Ehh

Vote Demik

[Opshins]

vote= richards doctor.....i read dough's verse and it was decent from the standpoint of it bein dough...then i read doc's...and shit...i think he killed it...i liked his opener and most of doc's verse....it was an original verse...props demik

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[The Royal Penis]

doc rich gotta battle cuz he got no hands or skills/
he put his best foot forward and kept standin still/
u can't really win, I'll show u how ta properly kill/
times money, an hour of yours is six monopoly bills/
doc ur pussy, the WF squad could hardly tell/
ur resime reads loser and mod of the rbl/
everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/

this is just how you start a verse... fire.... closer was dope too.. rest was coo i suppose.. definitly a nice verse...


Doc, feeling the start, some good personals...

Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me

haha, PP for sure homie, but that was the only real high point, and the rest just isn't standing up to dough... he brought the fire


vote-JD

[DaRk NeBuLa]

I was feelin JD's verse.... but there only one personal in it and yall in da same crew right?

thought that was odd....

While Demik came wit hella personals... almost his whole verse was a bunch of personals...

but just from a pure battle stand point.. JD's punches hit a lil bit harder..... he said u broght a laptop to your prom dawg... and u didn't even clown his azz back too hard.....

The personals were good tho Demik... just not enough.... needed something else to get over.. feel me

ne way... just bein real wit it...

Gotta give it to JD

[Super.]

everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/
yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/


that section was fire from dough, everything else was all right just not up to par with that shit. flow was nice but i felt he verse lacked solid personals. cool verse though.


Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week
Wanted the prime for the makes,last week was a test of'nything you got left
For christ's sake, last week i gave you ELLIOTT BEST
John's buildin a cell in the bit, for sif gettin bent & shit
Big enough for his #1 rider to serve his next sentence in

nice from doc, everything else was straight. the lines were a bit stretched, need to work on shortening the bars :/


i got doc in this, dough didnt come like he has the last couple of weeks, with the fire. he had 2 of those lines and the rest was decent, demik was more consistant and more personal

[KoText]

some of u nikkas is idiots...

doc u seemed like you was reaching too much on your punches...

Thankin all his riders with a bitchslap, while his mouth in em
Abusin ya power so much, ur utilities got battered spouse syndrome
That chin of yours could be an industry, try upsizing
& puttin pepsi down the side, they payin erythin else for advertising
Gun lines are original? NO, every line...i heard it
Writin like Jay Cee mixed with every dude on the mixtape circuit


I know u tried to go the personal route but it just wasnt witty enough in my opinion or like u tried too hard to be personal/witty instead of lettin it flow

dough
yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/

thats^ the only one i really didnt like from him...the rest was decent or hot

vote= John dizzle

[J.Christ]

& we was always thinkin sifgod was hype, how he had ya back dude
But now he got grammar check and we see he was sayin you wack too
That chin of yours could be an industry, try upsizing
& puttin pepsi down the side, they payin erythin else for advertising
Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me

Bam. Dope section.

yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/

LMAO

But .. That & Dough's gassed line were the only ones I was really feeling.

I think Dough underestimated Doc this time around. Good battle.

[Ghost]

Dough's quatables

I don't know what's better, gettin laid or gettin paid
I just know I'ma gettin one, the other's gettin away
nice.

made my moves, ur a rookie while I paid my dues/
this verse came with glowsticks cuz it got rave reviews/
dope concept.

Good verse, i just think that you could of came at Doc's neck more. I peeped your past battle's and you dismantled your opponents, but this week i wasn't feeling your verse as much.

Doc

Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week
Wanted the prime for the makes,last week was a test of'nything you got left
For christ's sake, last week i gave you ELLIOTT BEST
lmfao...oh my...

Overall good verse, some of your punches were iffy but to be honest your first 4 lines took it. I also liked the jail/sif line (honorable mention).

Good battle fella's but i thought Doc took this one with harder hitting personals. This was a close match, and i'm glad to see both battler's showed and came strong

vote- Doc

[stOOpid]

quotables

doc rich gotta battle cuz he got no hands or skills/
he put his best foot forward and kept standin still/
u can't really win, I'll show u how ta properly kill/
times money, an hour of yours is six monopoly bills/

those two lines are dope from dough


Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week
& we was always thinkin sifgod was hype, how he had ya back dude
But now he got grammar check and we see he was sayin you wack too
Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me

i liked those from demik

Dough def didnt come as nice as he did in the last few weeks. prolly cuz he was coming with so much fire.. but those lines from doc had me lauf tho.. a little long but still effective and hard punches from doc..
vote doc

[Muti]

breakdown LINE BY LINE OF WHAT i FEEL IS GOOD..I cant feel personals if I dont get em..simple

DOUGH...



doc rich gotta battle cuz he got no hands or skills/
he put his best foot forward and kept standin still/

not a great opener but it gets the point across

u can't really win, I'll show u how ta properly kill/
times money, an hour of yours is six monopoly bills/

Monopoly LOL well then..simple concept

doc ur pussy, the WF squad could hardly tell/
ur resime reads loser and mod of the rbl/

bad resime but not to complex

everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/

cool concept..heard it before but cool

yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/

okay so hes a nerd...

brought it a soundcard, no flowers, ur number's drawn/
bullets are like re-runs, u'll catch em all summer long/

okay getting gully

made my moves, ur a rookie while I paid my dues/
this verse came with glowsticks cuz it got rave reviews/

props to yourself..no punch

with punches that weak look at ur tense ass.../
fuck verses, ur posts look like a women's self defense class/

not a great closer either..could have been better...


After I seen all them quoteables in the MAg i felt you would blaze this to get to the championship but its not what I though.. U had a couple good concepts and some aight punches..but some are simple as well..I dunno..

DOC RICHARDS

Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week

and OZ needed an extension...could been a better opener

Wanted the prime for the makes,last week was a test of'nything you got left
For christ's sake, last week i gave you ELLIOTT BEST

eh..nothing standing out there..so what he battled him last week..not feeling

John's buildin a cell in the bit, for sif gettin bent & shit
Big enough for his #1 rider to serve his next sentence in

not getting that....big cell..and shit..not feeling

& we was always thinkin sifgod was hype, how he had ya back dude
But now he got grammar check and we see he was sayin you wack too

okay..better..but enough about sif...

That chin of yours could be an industry, try upsizing
& puttin pepsi down the side, they payin erythin else for advertising

eh..

Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me

What Micheal Jackson...?

Thankin all his riders with a bitchslap, while his mouth in em
Abusin ya power so much, ur utilities got battered spouse syndrome

best line thus far...complexity and witty a lil bit..

Gun lines are original? NO, every line...i heard it
Writin like Jay Cee mixed with every dude on the mixtape circuit

the ending was eh..but taking someones style has never been a crime..but cool verse..


I dunno you were dissappinted as well as I at dough but I am with you as well..Its like you saw his and said shit I dont have to try either..I dunno.. Not enough witty concepts in this battle..

My vote DOC...because Dough just didnt bring it

[blaquest]

everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/
yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/
brought it a soundcard, no flowers, ur number's drawn/
bullets are like re-runs, u'll catch em all summer long/
made my moves, ur a rookie while I paid my dues/
this verse came with glowsticks cuz it got rave reviews/
with punches that weak look at ur tense ass.../
fuck verses, ur posts look like a women's self defense class/

Dough straight ripped it with them lines right their pretty much why he gets my vote, it was just better in the end right thier

Mantis came good but Dough just took it with them lines

good battle

vote-Dough

[Malik-Sky]

this was prolly the best battle this week.

HM

Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week

ehhh
Wanted the prime for the makes,last week was a test of'nything you got left
For christ's sake, last week i gave you ELLIOTT BEST

ehhh
John's buildin a cell in the bit, for sif gettin bent & shit
Big enough for his #1 rider to serve his next sentence in

hehe
& we was always thinkin sifgod was hype, how he had ya back dude
But now he got grammar check and we see he was sayin you wack too

hehe
That chin of yours could be an industry, try upsizing
& puttin pepsi down the side, they payin erythin else for advertising

aight I guess
Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me

flipd it cool..hehe
Thankin all his riders with a bitchslap, while his mouth in em
Abusin ya power so much, ur utilities got battered spouse syndrome

nah
Gun lines are original? NO, every line...i heard it
Writin like Jay Cee mixed with every dude on the mixtape circuit


closer was kinda weak

doughness

doc rich gotta battle cuz he got no hands or skills/
he put his best foot forward and kept standin still/

nice opener
u can't really win, I'll show u how ta properly kill/
times money, an hour of yours is six monopoly bills/

aight
doc ur pussy, the WF squad could hardly tell/
ur resime reads loser and mod of the rbl/

nah
everyone stand back when I say stop speakin clown/
he's so gassed I cut his throat, it made a leakin sound/

lol....
yea the records match but ur talents not john's rate/
checked doc's yearbook, he had a laptop as his prom date/

ehh it was aight
brought it a soundcard, no flowers, ur number's drawn/
bullets are like re-runs, u'll catch em all summer long/

lol
made my moves, ur a rookie while I paid my dues/
this verse came with glowsticks cuz it got rave reviews/

best line
with punches that weak look at ur tense ass.../
fuck verses, ur posts look like a women's self defense class/

closer was ok...



I think this battle was decent.... one of the better ones....
I got to give this one to dough though... I'm sayin... he had a better all around verse... punches connected better and I felt his shit the most right here..
HM had a good verse though.. no doubt...

vote=dough

[Quriosity]

dough didnt impress me at all, huge dissapointment, the whole prom date shit was corny, same good flow but the concepts were lame in my opinion an i jus wasnt feelin his verse, alot of corny concepts goin on in this verse, opener was the best line and i wasnt really even feelin that

doc wasnt DOPE but he was better than dough, you had 3 lines i liked but the lines i didnt like were wack, it was good or wack, no in between, that being said.. these lines were dope

Im coachin you b, so soak it in, see-
Ya verse & OZ in the champ match, are equally the biggest jokes of the week

& we was always thinkin sifgod was hype, how he had ya back dude
But now he got grammar check and we see he was sayin you wack too

Ya shit is immature, rockin a juvenile mind see
I took a walk in ya shoes and the shits lit up behind me

fresh concepts in these lines as well, last shit was dope, the whole sif thing was hilarious and the opener was solid, you did your job i suppose



vote - DOC RICHARDS

[Doc Richards]

8-5