15.Oliver Twist 6-2 vs. 16.Sativa 5-1

[headless verseman]

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[Sativa.]

yea
24 to make it good

[Oliver Twist]

okay

[Sativa.]

key'd coz i'm in a rush..

My fast pace will leave you in the last place...
My shit is nascar.. this 's jus a drag race
I 'ma injure you like ninjas do...
Cut a whole in ya torso & really get into you
I can picture dude, found bound in dreds...
Even when birth'd you didn't come out ahead
Your finishers aren't funny plots...
But when I finish her.. it's more like a money shot
Something's not registering right...
Too bad it wasn't your current alias on this site
I 'ma father this kid...
Bother me again & you'll literly get caught up in this win
Caught in the spin & gonna beat s face in...
Your imagery.. more like cheap animation
Oliver twist get brought to the mix...
Mother dropp'd you as a kid.. even she drops hot shit
You ain't rugged & raw, somethin is wrong...
Blood on ya rug red carpet treatment when punches connect w/ ur jaw
You cant fuck w/ lines..wonder why?...
Coz I dont undermine ya skill, it's already under mine
I'll creep through...
When I say "check out twist" I'm not advising them to peep you

pz & g'l.

[Oliver Twist]

do 24 if u want


I'ma crunch this newbie, straight up fuck this mooley
U got a missdemeanor that could get u 6 months in juve
Ya text is flimsy so ain't no need to guess whos winning
Cuz this battle of wits is goin to OT like extra innings
I'm the king that'll bruise this child, the stee u spew is foul
Cuz if royalty checks it'll find u paid me to use my style
Can tell ur scared around girls but u dont see no problem
U got reservations so big Indians are building casinos on em
Got ya honey lovin my throwback so w/ 1 swirl of my dick
..I'll pull out my magic johnson & turn ya girl to a trick
When I flash the knife dawg ull need bandage & care
I'll put the knicks to ya cheek like face paint at Madison Square
Aint no stressin to toil this cuz u aint testin the royalest
Leave ya body stiff, left Sat on ice like eskimo toilets
I can tell ur seduced but dont hate the playa hate the game
Cuz my charm is so heavy its about to break my chain
Ya future is bleek friend, so ima let it sink in
I just posted on Sat but u the one who posted on the weak end


twist

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[Muti]

SATIVA

My fast pace will leave you in the last place...
My shit is nascar.. this 's jus a drag race

not a good opener..sounds like sumthin Eminem said in 8 mile..yea they call me rabbit this a turtle race...u flipped it and it still onyl good in a movie..

I 'ma injure you like ninjas do...
Cut a whole in ya torso & really get into you

NOPE

I can picture dude, found bound in dreds..
Even when birth'd you didn't come out ahead

okay

Your finishers aren't funny plots...
But when I finish her.. it's more like a money shot

okay u hit girls off right...this a battle plz

Something's not registering right...
Too bad it wasn't your current alias on this site

eh

I 'ma father this kid...
Bother me again & you'll literly get caught up in this win
Caught in the spin & gonna beat s face in...

nope..not good

Your imagery.. more like cheap animation
Oliver twist get brought to the mix...
Mother dropp'd you as a kid.. even she drops hot shit

good one..moms dropped hot shit lol HA HA...

You ain't rugged & raw, somethin is wrong...
Blood on ya rug red carpet treatment when punches connect w/ ur jaw

BOOOO...no

You cant fuck w/ lines..wonder why?...
Coz I dont undermine ya skill, it's already under mine

WOW why did I just here this line in another battle I will be back to see where I saw it and I woner who used it first...

I'll creep through...
When I say "check out twist" I'm not advising them to peep you

okay ender...not great...
this verse is keyed...cuz it wasnt top 30 like but hey u didn t have much time...I suppose..

OLIVER TWIST

I'ma crunch this newbie, straight up fuck this mooley
U got a missdemeanor that could get u 6 months in juve

not a great opener..almost a props for him..he almost thug lol

Ya text is flimsy so ain't no need to guess whos winning
Cuz this battle of wits is goin to OT like extra innings

Good shit..nice concept..

I'm the king that'll bruise this child, the stee u spew is foul
Cuz if royalty checks it'll find u paid me to use my style

eh

Can tell ur scared around girls but u dont see no problem
U got reservations so big Indians are building casinos on em

concept is okay but not much of a punch/diss

Got ya honey lovin my throwback so w/ 1 swirl of my dick
..I'll pull out my magic johnson & turn ya girl to a trick

naw

When I flash the knife dawg ull need bandage & care
I'll put the knicks to ya cheek like face paint at Madison Square

sounds good..

Aint no stressin to toil this cuz u aint testin the royalest
Leave ya body stiff, left Sat on ice like eskimo toilets

LOL funny shit

I can tell ur seduced but dont hate the playa hate the game
Cuz my charm is so heavy its about to break my chain

not feeling that one.. props to you though

Ya future is bleek friend, so ima let it sink in
I just posted on Sat but u the one who posted on the weak end

eh..okay closer but u didn t post on saturday did you?? if you did you would have been late..


either way I look at it..OLIVER verse had more punches and more consistency.. Sativa defintley rushed and keyed..

my vote OLIVER....



and lets see where that line I saw this week was...

[Muti]

SATIVA line

You cant fuck w/ lines..wonder why?...
Coz I dont undermine ya skill, it's already under mine


Link I found it at
5. Super Dooper 15-7 vs. 6. Imperial 6-0


Imperial I believe..his line
Ill straight tell you how much you suck, while others lie
Its easy to undermine ya skills.. since theyre under mine


I dunno about this one....but thats not cool

[Malik-Sky]

this was a decent battle...

I thought that sat had a good verse.. You could tell it was rushed but he managed to flip it and kill it at the end... To me his ending was better....
But, twist was prepared and came with more consistency and almost every line was nice.. I think that OT took this one pretty clearly... This battle could have gone either way if sat had spent a little more time on it....

vote=OT

props to both

[Quriosity]

muti didnt understand twist's opener, a MISS DEMEANOR

nevertheless,

sativa was wack and hard to read, no props to him whatsoever for that piece of shit he posted, his verse, messiah's, and my opponents were the wackest of all time, dont mean to hate but where were you during the text evolution? im not sure what time you're stuck in cos i cant remember a time when it was cool to be as wack as you are now, not even in 99, but whatevers clever, keep up the good work?

twist won, opener was dope, rest was good too


so vote - OLIVER TWIST

[Doc Richards]

sativa seemed to just drop some half assed trash this week...iono

oliver came fresh, opener was illness, rest of the verse was all good too

Oliver just took it rather seriously

Vote= Oliver Twist

[Imperial]

This battle was decent. Sativa didnt really have much i was feelin. A couple lines were aight, but a lot was played or jus weak. And either you REALLY stupidly bit my under-mine line from my battle this week, that i posted like 1 1/2 hours before you.. or it was a coinsidence. Either way, ya verse wasnt enough for OT's. He had some pretty nice lines, his verse was consistent. A few lines were played, like the closer, but he had plenty of better lines. He got this fairly easily.

Vote: OT

[Storm Bringa]

OT took this battle with better punches and more consistancy throughout his verse. Sat's verse was aight, but the lines were kinda dry.

VOTE = Oliver Twist