7. Elliott Best vs. 8. John Dough 9-1

[Hating Mantis]

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[Dough Jordan]

lets make it 16 ock

[ENVY]

I'm down.

[ENVY]

12-16 Dough...
i'll be postin tomorrow afternoon ..'round 6 or 7 ish.

i'll edit this with my verse.

[Dough Jordan]

I edited before he edited his in for the critics...

Ur a disgrace, get sliced from ur vitals to your head/
ya records so bad it was left out the title of the thread/
they say victory's suite so this clown should know well/
that Dough takes up the top floor of every hotel/
I'm the net's ben wallace when I stop the next fan/
cuz all I do's pull misses and block the next man/
so ur from harlem? who cares what u pushin me for/
not sure whats more pink, cam or that pussy of yours/
we'll truly see, shells leave u wit a gooey tee/
its funny, all ur verses sound the same like lumidee's/
how u battle so much and lack that many quotes/
this kid lives in NYC and has that many posts/
leave ur crib, when I rhyme every dude respect it/
or I'll give em a cut quicker than cube or cedric/
so save ur clown lines, we know ur past weak/
& if u bring up ideal, u voted for me last week/

it's a rizzy...

[ENVY]

YO.....
Top 5 on some list. To me your still the same bitch
Tang handed you your ass. Ima beat you with the same switch
Dough stays on the grind. But with rhymes i stay on mine
And I wont even bring up ya chin. Tangible broke the crane last time
Muhfucka. i rock shit with fresh rhymes so witness
Honestly. i'm usin you to scare Demik for the contendership
Ya tender kid. bash ya face in with my jordans bitch
Fly like mike. straight to the retirement home you was born in
Poundin Dough's face in. hittin with heavyweight force
RBL want a hot line. It'll be chalked out around Doughs corpse
Gave ya the vote last week. just to see you smile, B
humble but typin reckless bullshit about guns you don't see?
Obvisouly. ya dick riders already predict. the outcome on me
"Best will lose", money for puttin John into surgery

no!, no!, no!

[Sur*5*ILL]

no one cares

[theme]

vote or dont post at all

[ENVY]

Originally Posted by Sur*5*ILL

Fire?

flames.

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[Iye WunDeR]

Ur a disgrace, get sliced from ur vitals to your head/
ya records so bad it was left out the title of the thread/
lol! nice personal
they say victory's suite so this clown should know well/
that Dough takes up the top floor of every hotel/
filler.
I'm the net's ben wallace when I stop the next fan/
cuz all I do's pull misses and block the next man/
filler
so ur from harlem? who cares what u pushin me for/
not sure whats more pink, cam or that pussy of yours/
lol!
we'll truly see, shells leave u wit a gooey tee/
its funny, all ur verses sound the same like lumidee's/
ehh, coo line here
how u battle so much and lack that many quotes/
this kid lives in NYC and has that many posts/
LOL!
leave ur crib, when I rhyme every dude respect it/
or I'll give em a cut quicker than cube or cedric/
filler, nope didnt like it
so save ur clown lines, we know ur past weak/
& if u bring up ideal, u voted for me last week/
[/b]cool closer, guess its a personal.[/b]

overall a pretty cool verse, a few nice couplets in there.
flow was pretty slick, kept me reading.


Top 5 on some list. To me your still the same bitch
Tang handed you your ass. Ima beat you with the same switch
ok opener, filler really
Dough stays on the grind. But with rhymes i stay on mine
And I wont even bring up ya chin. Tangible broke the crane last time
lol, im guessing this was a personal
Muhfucka. i rock shit with fresh rhymes so witness
Honestly. i'm usin you to scare Demik for the contendership
ehh, nope
Ya tender kid. bash ya face in with my jordans bitch
Fly like mike. straight to the retirement home you was born in
no.
Poundin Dough's face in. hittin with heavyweight force
RBL want a hot line. It'll be chalked out around Doughs corpse
ehh, not really
Gave ya the vote last week. just to see you smile, B
humble but typin reckless bullshit about guns you don't see?
nope, filler-esque
Obvisouly. ya dick riders already predict. the outcome on me
"Best will lose", money for puttin John into surgery
ehh, ok closer

your verse was really a lack luster, not too many eye poppers.. but you did have several personals.. it got kinda gay to me making all the references to other members,
iono, got kinda tired really. & the flow, well.. it really wasnt there for me, maybe i read it wrong outloud. couldnt catch the scheme.

i got Dough taking this one though, hands down.. overall better verse to me. punches, flow, only thing Best got him in was the personals area.. but Dough had the nicest personal of the battle to me.. & that was the opener.

vote- Dough.

[Quriosity]

honestly,


dough is a beast

i didnt see best having a chance, EVERY one of dough's lines were funny, the suite line was dope, the cam and lumidee was hilarious, everything was on point

best was decent, not even in tha same ballpark tho



vote - DOUGH

[Label 4got Pass]

Originally Posted by Dough Jordan

I'm the net's ben wallace when I stop the next fan/
cuz all I do's pull misses and block the next man/

Aaaahahahhahahahahhaqaaaaa.. The fo rizzy was real Malibu of you though

[Dough Jordan]

Originally Posted by Label 4got Pass

Aaaahahahhahahahahhaqaaaaa.. The fo rizzy was real Malibu of you though

never seen the movie if thats the reference you're making.........saying something's a rizzy means it's a wrap over in harlem.....just a sublime only people from ny would pick up since he's from there......

[ENVY]

^ yeah .. its a NY thing

[Malik-Sky]

I thought dough took this one pretty easy.. I mean his verse was superior in allmost every way.

flow-dough
punches-dough
personals-tie
overall delivery-dough

vote=dough

elliot, you could have come iller... But hey sometimes you jus get got...

no beef

[Henry Flatfish]

best lines:

Ur a disgrace, get sliced from ur vitals to your head/
ya records so bad it was left out the title of the thread/
they say victory's suite so this clown should know well/
that Dough takes up the top floor of every hotel/
so ur from harlem? who cares what u pushin me for/
not sure whats more pink, cam or that pussy of yours/
how u battle so much and lack that many quotes/
this kid lives in NYC and has that many posts/
so save ur clown lines, we know ur past weak/
& if u bring up ideal, u voted for me last week/


Dough stays on the grind. But with rhymes i stay on mine
And I wont even bring up ya chin. Tangible broke the crane last time
Poundin Dough's face in. hittin with heavyweight force
RBL want a hot line. It'll be chalked out around Doughs corpse


lol...it seemed to me that elliot is jocking Tang style

but anyway


vote - Dough

[/\/\oonshyne]

Best- opening bar was grizzly.. the rest was consistent.. couple quotables
overall good verse except for the closing

Dough- line for line lava'.. the hotel/suite line and the ben wallace shit was crazy
quotables everywhere

both had good flow

v- Dough for the better verse

[ST_UC]

Ur a disgrace, get sliced from ur vitals to your head/
ya records so bad it was left out the title of the thread/
-- i battled creaticle one time and they had his record as (???) and i wrote a good punch for it... your lucky to have something like this happen... i liked the opener

they say victory's suite so this clown should know well/
that Dough takes up the top floor of every hotel/
-- every battle i read of yours (cept for the last one) u have dope lines like this... how do u come up with this shit?

I'm the net's ben wallace when I stop the next fan/
cuz all I do's pull misses and block the next man/
-- again... dope line

so ur from harlem? who cares what u pushin me for/
not sure whats more pink, cam or that pussy of yours/
-- ehhh, dont like this

we'll truly see, shells leave u wit a gooey tee/
its funny, all ur verses sound the same like lumidee's/
-- aight... with small lines u can use 3 multis and make the flow ill... nicely wrote, i just didnt like the punch

how u battle so much and lack that many quotes/
this kid lives in NYC and has that many posts/
-- LOL, straight to the point and killed him

leave ur crib, when I rhyme every dude respect it/
or I'll give em a cut quicker than cube or cedric/
-- aight... didnt appeal to me

so save ur clown lines, we know ur past weak/
& if u bring up ideal, u voted for me last week/
-- stopped him from using an ideal line... nice tactic... great wordplay... i liked how u didnt even diss him in the last bar... didnt have too

YO.....
Top 5 on some list. To me your still the same bitch
Tang handed you your ass. Ima beat you with the same switch
-- i dont like this opener

Dough stays on the grind. But with rhymes i stay on mine
And I wont even bring up ya chin. Tangible broke the crane last time
-- ahaha this was ill... and funny

Muhfucka. i rock shit with fresh rhymes so witness
Honestly. i'm usin you to scare Demik for the contendership
- witness and condership dont rhyme that well... plsu this line wasnt that good

Ya tender kid. bash ya face in with my jordans bitch
Fly like mike. straight to the retirement home you was born in
-- i hate when people use multis that dont have the same rhyme pattern... i also dont like the line
Poundin Dough's face in. hittin with heavyweight force
RBL want a hot line. It'll be chalked out around Doughs corpse
-- aight line... simple force corpse rhyme tho

Gave ya the vote last week. just to see you smile, B
humble but typin reckless bullshit about guns you don't see?
-- this was another aight line... if everyone saw that last week... still the rhyme sucked... B and see... that is bullshit

Obvisouly. ya dick riders already predict. the outcome on me
"Best will lose", money for puttin John into surgery

-- aight closer

i havent peeped to many of your battles EB... but i dont see how you couldve come this far without multis... some people dont care about multis... but i do, and youll never get my vote without them... uve gotta be good to be ranked at 7... did u choke or have no time or something?

vote = dough

won this easily

[Serge dot T]

dough easy

the opener woulda been enough, lol