11. ST_UC 9-4 vs. 12. Manic D 11-2

[Hating Mantis]

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[Serge dot T]

i just got linked to this. i forgot i signed up, so sign me out after this battle, my last in rbl.


shit happens when clips clappin, serge still rippin shit
but you known to leave a fake impression like my birth certificate
stick to jackin off, you just a chump to me
you dont handle business cause dicks ya one company
yous a pencil dick bitch, kid im honest
i peeped ya girls pussy wall n saw scribbles on it
noone knows you...its a slaughter beatin for cattle
such a fuckin netzero, the roadrunner beeps in his battles
youre deaths judged here, no chance for retrial
shit, even his blood cells got 911 on speed dial
i noticed his ego trip from wich noone is stoppin him
shit, hes been feelin cocky since he started pick pocketin
by the way youre reputed, i could only deduce that...
...you're a son of a bitch...than didnt swallow when she should have
he sucks dick like crazy yet he thinks his skills flawless
but i saw generations go down the drain when he spit in the faucet
you gettin shot up and i dont mean heroin fam
cause the kids high on life and i pissed on his last gram
a sick fuckin verse, disgusting like no other
the 2nd nastiest thing I've been in...the 1st was your mother
swear he pro black but im known to expose fake kíkes
cause st_uc's sea of hope is infested with great whites


...ouch

[ST_UC]

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...98#post8702898
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...85#post8703585
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...99#post8703699
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...81#post8704181
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...60#post8711060

[ST_UC]

STUC 2883: can i get an extension until like 9PM tomm
UserNeezy: yes

[Sur*5*ILL]

fuck it

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[ST_UC]

ayo, serge isnt ill. I'll show you somethin thats fuckin sick...
look, five of his punches reffered to touchin or suckin dick
this schmuck'll get crushed when hit, i got nines and matics
I can blast'an leave this dick stiffer than a viagra addicts
he aint makin a lot, i went to KFC an saw his ass in the kitchen
if they saw how easy i battered this chicken, id be takin his job
im always iced out... you aint known for new chains or sneakers
but...
well see this Man I C when hes stuffed in my basement freezer
your bitch is so fat... but that aint stop me from gettin up in her
when she queefed, i coulda swore she had some kickers up in her
believe it shes that huge, she reminds me of the fat dude in 8 mile
i was shoppin for a tow strap, an saw her gettin a belt in the same isle
i guess ey'body cant get a fine bitch, but once one went out with you
she tried to go down on you, but came up like... "i cant even find it"
you cant even rhyme bitch, you tried "deduce that", and "could have"
you should have deduced that line from your verse when u could have
i could smack the shit outta him, im easily leavin these foes embarrassed
if i smacked the shit outta him, there'd be nothin left but the clothes hes wearin
it hurts to say goobye, serge'll cry, shit, hell prolly say "OWW!"
CUZ RM'S DOOR IS GONNA HIT'EM IN THE ASS ON THE WAY OUT

[Iye WunDeR]

Manic D.

shit happens when clips clappin, serge still rippin shit
but you known to leave a fake impression like my birth certificate
ehh opener
stick to jackin off, you just a chump to me
you dont handle business cause dicks ya one company
ok wordplay, old concept
yous a pencil dick bitch, kid im honest
i peeped ya girls pussy wall n saw scribbles on it
ROFL!
noone knows you...its a slaughter beatin for cattle
such a fuckin netzero, the roadrunner beeps in his battles
lol
youre deaths judged here, no chance for retrial
shit, even his blood cells got 911 on speed dial
ehh
i noticed his ego trip from wich noone is stoppin him
shit, hes been feelin cocky since he started pick pocketin
LOL! DOPE WORDPLAY
by the way youre reputed, i could only deduce that...
...you're a son of a bitch...than didnt swallow when she should have
lol!
he sucks dick like crazy yet he thinks his skills flawless
but i saw generations go down the drain when he spit in the faucet
BoOoOoOoOo, cum line
you gettin shot up and i dont mean heroin fam
cause the kids high on life and i pissed on his last gram
ok line
a sick fuckin verse, disgusting like no other
the 2nd nastiest thing I've been in...the 1st was your mother
ok line
swear he pro black but im known to expose fake kíkes
cause st_uc's sea of hope is infested with great whites
coo closer

overall a pretty nice verse,
cept for the fact that the mother Jokes became rather repetitive..
..but all in all most of em got a few chuckles out of me.
your only REAL downside was the use of a cumline..
..but other than that, u had some nice wordplay, & some hot lines.



ayo, serge isnt ill. I'll show you somethin thats fuckin sick...
look, five of his punches reffered to touchin or suckin dick
LOL! ouch, nice play off his verse
this schmuck'll get crushed when hit, i got nines and matics
I can blast'an leave this dick stiffer than a viagra addicts
ehh, ok line
he aint makin a lot, i went to KFC an saw his ass in the kitchen
if they saw how easy i battered this chicken, id be takin his job
lol
im always iced out... you aint known for new chains or sneakers
but...
well see this Man I C when hes stuffed in my basement freezer
cool line, ok wordplay
your bitch is so fat... but that aint stop me from gettin up in her
when she queefed, i coulda swore she had some kickers up in her
lol
believe it shes that huge, she reminds me of the fat dude in 8 mile
i was shoppin for a tow strap, an saw her gettin a belt in the same isle
lol!
i guess ey'body cant get a fine bitch, but once one went out with you
she tried to go down on you, but came up like... "i cant even find it"
ouch, coo line
you cant even rhyme bitch, you tried "deduce that", and "could have"
you should have deduced that line from your verse when u could have
ok play on his verse
i could smack the shit outta him, im easily leavin these foes embarrassed
if i smacked the shit outta him, there'd be nothin left but the clothes hes wearin
LOL!
it hurts to say goobye, serge'll cry, shit, hell prolly say "OWW!"
CUZ RM'S DOOR IS GONNA HIT'EM IN THE ASS ON THE WAY OUT
ok closer

also a nice verse, few original concepts in there.. some arent.
the flow was nice, & different on a few lines.. using the internal rhyme scheme.
overall a pretty slick verse.

but..
..vote- ST_UC

only really because he had less filler in his verse, which was really none cause Manic had only like 1 or 2 filler lines.. but Manic did dissapoint me with the use of a cum line.
BoOoOoOoOoO.. otherwise, he'dve gotten my vote cause that one line about 'feeling cocky' just took the fuckin cake.

[Henry Flatfish]

best lines:

shit happens when clips clappin, serge still rippin shit
but you known to leave a fake impression like my birth certificate
stick to jackin off, you just a chump to me
you dont handle business cause dicks ya one company
yous a pencil dick bitch, kid im honest
i peeped ya girls pussy wall n saw scribbles on it
i noticed his ego trip from wich noone is stoppin him
shit, hes been feelin cocky since he started pick pocketin
he sucks dick like crazy yet he thinks his skills flawless
but i saw generations go down the drain when he spit in the faucet
a sick fuckin verse, disgusting like no other
the 2nd nastiest thing I've been in...the 1st was your mother


ayo, serge isnt ill. I'll show you somethin thats fuckin sick...
look, five of his punches reffered to touchin or suckin dick
he aint makin a lot, i went to KFC an saw his ass in the kitchen
if they saw how easy i battered this chicken, id be takin his job
i guess ey'body cant get a fine bitch, but once one went out with you
she tried to go down on you, but came up like... "i cant even find it"
you cant even rhyme bitch, you tried "deduce that", and "could have"
you should have deduced that line from your verse when u could have


both had fire, serge came with more heat tho


vote - serge

[Serge dot T]

i dint make no checkin post so the eminence that is me will post links here

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...60#post8703760
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...75#post8703775
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...82#post8703782
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...89#post8703789
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...00#post8703800
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...09#post8703809

Originally Posted by Iye WunDeR

but Manic did dissapoint me with the use of a cum line.

you sir, are a fucking moron, lol. christ, i thought they stopped makin idiots like you.

[ST_UC]

-NO 1 Sentence Voting
ALL VOTES MUST BE ATLEAST 5 LINES LONG.
Explaining Who You Thought Won Or It WONT COUNT.
My Motto Is If You Cant Vote Right Why Should You Deserve Someone Voting On Your Battle
And IF the person who voted DIDNT explain his vote like he's suppose to then he'll LOSE A VOTE on his battle.


that makes it
STUC 1
Manic - 5

and u were complaining about dudes vote above? hah

[ADubXJ03]

md

shit happens when clips clappin, serge still rippin shit
but you known to leave a fake impression like my birth certificate

cool.

stick to jackin off, you just a chump to me
you dont handle business cause dicks ya one company

havent' seen before but seems kinda played.

yous a pencil dick bitch, kid im honest
i peeped ya girls pussy wall n saw scribbles on it

seen this almost word for word before, dunno if it was from you.

noone knows you...its a slaughter beatin for cattle
such a fuckin netzero, the roadrunner beeps in his battles

seen this almost word for word before, dunno if it was from you.

youre deaths judged here, no chance for retrial
shit, even his blood cells got 911 on speed dial

seen this almost word for word before, dunno if it was from you.

i noticed his ego trip from wich noone is stoppin him
shit, hes been feelin cocky since he started pick pocketin

heh cool.

by the way youre reputed, i could only deduce that...
...you're a son of a bitch...than didnt swallow when she should have

aight.

he sucks dick like crazy yet he thinks his skills flawless
but i saw generations go down the drain when he spit in the faucet

i didn't care this was a cum line...it was creative, so cool.

you gettin shot up and i dont mean heroin fam
cause the kids high on life and i pissed on his last gram

nice.

a sick fuckin verse, disgusting like no other
the 2nd nastiest thing I've been in...the 1st was your mother

haha.

swear he pro black but im known to expose fake kíkes
cause st_uc's sea of hope is infested with great whites

nah.

stuc

ayo, serge isnt ill. I'll show you somethin thats fuckin sick...
look, five of his punches reffered to touchin or suckin dick

ha, word.

this schmuck'll get crushed when hit, i got nines and matics
I can blast'an leave this dick stiffer than a viagra addicts

ehh, aight i guess.

he aint makin a lot, i went to KFC an saw his ass in the kitchen
if they saw how easy i battered this chicken, id be takin his job

haha creative.

im always iced out... you aint known for new chains or sneakers
but...
well see this Man I C when hes stuffed in my basement freezer

kinda stretched.

your bitch is so fat... but that aint stop me from gettin up in her
when she queefed, i coulda swore she had some kickers up in her

heh cool.

believe it shes that huge, she reminds me of the fat dude in 8 mile
i was shoppin for a tow strap, an saw her gettin a belt in the same isle

ahaha dope.

i guess ey'body cant get a fine bitch, but once one went out with you
she tried to go down on you, but came up like... "i cant even find it"

not too original, but ok.

you cant even rhyme bitch, you tried "deduce that", and "could have"
you should have deduced that line from your verse when u could have

ha, nice.

i could smack the shit outta him, im easily leavin these foes embarrassed
if i smacked the shit outta him, there'd be nothin left but the clothes hes wearin

haha.

it hurts to say goobye, serge'll cry, shit, hell prolly say "OWW!"
CUZ RM'S DOOR IS GONNA HIT'EM IN THE ASS ON THE WAY OUT

kewl closer.

dope battle, if i wouldnt have seen all the lines manicd used before, i think he wouldve edged this. stuc's drop was funny, and relatively consistent with only a few misses. i was feelin the tow strap punch. so...

vote- stuc

[Serge dot T]

Originally Posted by ST_UC

-NO 1 Sentence Voting
ALL VOTES MUST BE ATLEAST 5 LINES LONG.
Explaining Who You Thought Won Or It WONT COUNT.
My Motto Is If You Cant Vote Right Why Should You Deserve Someone Voting On Your Battle
And IF the person who voted DIDNT explain his vote like he's suppose to then he'll LOSE A VOTE on his battle.


that makes it
STUC 1
Manic - 5

and u were complaining about dudes vote above? hah

serge dot T: you think i should lose votes? cause my oponent lookin pretty desperate ahaha, wanna beat me real bad
serge dot T: 11. ST_UC 9-4 vs. 12. Manic D 11-2
UserNeezy: lmao, no
serge dot T: so it continues normally?
UserNeezy: i should dock HIS ass, ahaha

thankyou, this is my up in what should be a rape. aim does shit

[teleKILLnetic]

wtf is going on in this league


this is just like my battle last week


serge recycled a few, but he RAPED your ass man. waaaaaaay harder, waaaaaay more creative. stuc had a few nice lines, but a lot of them are just not executed right.. most of the punches you know before you even get to the punch. battering chicken was gay, basement freezer was kinda stupid, viagra addicts is even worse, i cant find the dick line was old when i first posted in 99, BUT, the shit out of you line was dope. could have been line could have been nice if worded nice, but the set up was so odd and out of place that it didn't hit, really. serge, wtf is up with all them dick jokes. i never seen that scribble line before, lmfao. i mean, i can go on and on but in the end, serge's verse beat you in every category. besides the punches, he uses the setup lines much more effectively, which makes the entire package just that much more appealing. by the standards of the league, stuc's verse ain't that bad at all, but i dont understand why all these played lines are getting praises, like it happened to me.


v/ serge


[sQ]

[Mr. Inkwell]

v - Serge

You guys are some fucking idiots.

A cum line is when people use homonyms for cum/come. That line Serge used was ill.

[ST_UC]

up #2

im not desperate... i hate garbage voters(like the one above). Whats the sense in having rules if nobody follows them?

word about the cum line... he didnt even say the word cum in the line... haha, maybe he just dont like the image he gets in his head when he reads lines about swallowing cum ... i dunno... maybe it brings back memories or something

but, u know how rules work... sorry serge

[Drugs]

vote- manic d

Both had some pretty good lines, but Serge's actually hit stuc harder.

shit happens when clips clappin, serge still rippin shit
but you known to leave a fake impression like my birth certificate

a sick fuckin verse, disgusting like no other
the 2nd nastiest thing I've been in...the 1st was your mother

Those were my favs from his verse, and with all of them put together Stuc got slaughtered. I liked this from Stuc:

believe it shes that huge, she reminds me of the fat dude in 8 mile
i was shoppin for a tow strap, an saw her gettin a belt in the same isle

But I think that's all that really registered as a hit. The smack the shit line you used is played, but a lot of your concepts weren't that bad. Just gotta get more personal in your verse.


noone knows you...its a slaughter beatin for cattle
such a fuckin netzero, the roadrunner beeps in his battles

i noticed his ego trip from wich noone is stoppin him
shit, hes been feelin cocky since he started pick pocketin