Vectorman
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Originally Posted by Vectoreman
we've got all these land aliases, i feel like a tourist
but outta all the islands.. trinidad gotta be the poorest
Trinidad is an island? Blah
& now you got oz on ya side; you on the crossover list?
shit, we aint seen a nice crossover since hardaway, bitch
A punch with a refrence to me, & I still dont understand
see, i'm not the type to diss cats for tryna make it on tracks
but you just makin it .. hard for me to sound wack
S'ight
i'mma real track maker; lemme get a point acrossed, right
a trip to wal-mart, purchasin a mic does not make you nice
This line isnt nice either
why even diss you.. let the mag do the talkin & more
i'll shut up now; but didnt you get the wackest line award?
lol did he? I dont remember, still not a solid punch or personal
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Trinidy the bitch from the Matrix
First of all, shorten your lines, shits be mad long. The longest a line should be, without stretching and becoming boring or losing flow, is about 15 syllables.
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Duke .. Be Happy The Rbl Mag Put You In ... Cuz I Wouldnt' After Peeping You,
I Got A Bigger Ego Than You .. & Im an Alias .. Thats Registered A Year After You
Not Feeling
You Overated As Hell .. Duke .. And .. Do You Belong In The Top 30 ? Nah
But You'd Fit Into Bootcamp Like •••ish People Round' Nazi's Wearing Stars,
Bit of a stretch, too descriptive ya know?
Im Handing Your Defense Lines Enough Casualities To Call A Bad War Bitch,
I Should Print Out Your Verse .. & Properly Recyle This Shit In The Garbage,
No Sir
10 Is Good ? I Plead gangsta When I Say I'll TEar You Apart With Nine,
You Might Fit Into All Stereo Types ... But Wackness Is One Of A Kind,
S'ight
Im Knocking Out Your Scenses Duke .. The Way You Must've Lost Your Touch, Whore
Fuck Using Name Plays .. But I Aint Playing When I Say Im Leaving Vec tore
S'ight
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Hmmm tough one to call. It would easily appear that Vectore won, because his lines are shorter and his verse flows better, so it makes it look well written. In actuality he only had 1 decent line tho, the other were just blah type shit. Trin had alot of blah type shit too, and the worse flow, but in the end had 2 aight lines. this one could really go either way. Yall both need to step up your creativity....
Ima go with Trin tho, even tho his lines werent all good, at least he made sense...Vec had 2 punches i didnt get, and 1 was about me...so I dont know how anyone else is quoting it as nice when I dont get it. Shrugs.
Vote Trinidaddy