29. Oliver Twist 5-2 vs. 30. thasynthesis 9-4

[Hating Mantis]

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[Synthesis]

you a femcee, scraight up, im callin ur bitch..
i'll fuckin body this slam ho bag, by 'Oliver' tits.
i shoot through dudes, your the exception..
cant fuck,
shit..u'd be a lightening rod with an erection.
this shits not even lookin good for u fagot..
sorry dunny, it just doesnt find you attractive.

[Oliver Twist]

My vocab is raw, ima punch n jab ya jaw
N watch u get socked in the chest like padded bras
Slippin in the rankings ho, so just call it quits
Skillwise u stay w/ the 40s like alcoholic crips
Theyll spray ya name up high on the wall
It mite not find me attractive but they wont find u at all

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[Muti]

short battle..

Synthesis

you a femcee, scraight up, im callin ur bitch..
i'll fuckin body this slam ho bag, by 'Oliver' tits.

not feeling

i shoot through dudes, your the exception..
cant fuck,
shit..u'd be a lightening rod with an erection.

eh

this shits not even lookin good for u fagot..
sorry dunny, it just doesnt find you attractive.

ending blah...

Not feeling any of this.. any of the other ish is butt... 6 lines.. whats this coming to..BLAH

Oliver

My vocab is raw, ima punch n jab ya jaw
N watch u get socked in the chest like padded bras

cool

Slippin in the rankings ho, so just call it quits
Skillwise u stay w/ the 40s like alcoholic crips

nah

Theyll spray ya name up high on the wall
It mite not find me attractive but they wont find u at all

blah closer

your opener was cool and that got you a win...

My vote Oliver



Longer battle next time might show some skill

[ST_UC]

Syn

you a femcee, scraight up, im callin ur bitch..
i'll fuckin body this slam ho bag, by 'Oliver' tits.
-- i dont really like this opener ... not bad, but not good either
i shoot through dudes, your the exception..
cant fuck,
shit..u'd be a lightening rod with an erection.
-- again... i dont really like this
this shits not even lookin good for u fagot..
sorry dunny, it just doesnt find you attractive.
-- damn syn, why didnt you try? no time or soemthing? i think your ill, and this disappointed me... shouldve been me vs you this week, were both 9-4

Oliver

My vocab is raw, ima punch n jab ya jaw
N watch u get socked in the chest like padded bras
-- nice opener... i liked this stanza

Slippin in the rankings ho, so just call it quits
Skillwise u stay w/ the 40s like alcoholic crips
-- this was good. nothing great tho
Theyll spray ya name up high on the wall
It mite not find me attractive but they wont find u at all
-- nice play off his verse for a closer... that sealed the victory

Vote - Oliver Twist

whats up with the 6 bar battle?

[Serge dot T]

oliver wins with the padded breast line

wtf is with the shortness from yall though

[teleKILLnetic]

i kinda like that closer more than the padded bra line, tho im sure i've seen it somewhere. that's about it really.

v/ oliver


[sQ]

[Methodine]

vote - oliver

this was real dissapointing for top 30, but yeah olivers punches were coo' and enough to win this, syn came weak compared to what he can do, nuthin special but oliver came good enough to win, but i expect better from both, pz

[NoShit Sherlock]

vote= Oliver

its obvious Syn aint puttin no effort no wat so ever, but i like Oliver whole verse shit was flames, hotness my nig, Syn sign out ya killing ya record

[Still Nameless]

Oliver took dis easily .. no reason to break down much, syn was expectin to lose dis battle ..

My vocab is raw, ima punch n jab ya jaw
N watch u get socked in the chest like padded bras

V - OT

[vectoreman]

i'm with manic on this one .. nothing special here, both werent great .. one line got it

vote = oliver's tits