NUMBER ONE CONTENDERSHIP: 3. Dough Jordan 9-0 vs. 4. I. Deal 17-3

[Hating Mantis]

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[Dough Jordan]

20 sound like a go?...

[I.deal]

perfect.


RBL CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: 1. Doc Richards 9-0 vs. 2. Island 18-2
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5. Oz 8-1 vs. 6. Lares Viales 8-3
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...80#post8669580

[eyedeal]

don't edit my post again.

[I.deal]

Lets go, old man....


Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.
It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.
& talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.
Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.
Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.
& while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.
See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.
Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.
Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
& start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.



Ohhhhhhh.

I.D.

[Dough Jordan]

http://www. urbanprowlers .net/tourney/pba2/tangible.jpg

We all know what this clown looks like but if u need a reminder, just put the addy above together...

pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/
ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/
I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/
we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/
edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/
now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/
look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/
I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the •••eler/
thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/

someone call this guy a cab...

[X sample]

Holy fuck..

[-Oz-]

omg smh ^^^ lmfao

Shits just a text battle son

Ill do the honors, and set it off, cuz I dont give a fuck bout none of ya.

Ideal

Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.

This was pretty nice.

It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.

This was ILLLLLLLL

& talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
I asked him
"why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.

This was aight

Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.

Not feeling

Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.

Not Feeling

& while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.

Not Feeling

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

lol nice

Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.

coo

Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.

Kinda like the opener, dont like

Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
& start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.

coo

Iunno, maybe I was expecting more. Decent verse, first 4 lines were dope, fell in the middle, picked up a little at the end. A few of them punches, I would consider played, but you would consider me a newbie....so fuck it, i just aint feeling em.

Dough Jordan

pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/

Played

ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/

Not feeling

I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/

Coo lol

we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

haha nice

edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/

aight

now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/

YUCK

look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/

aight lol

I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the •••eler/

no punch

thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/

coo

understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/

dope

other than the closer dough didnt have any dope lines. still he had a consistently better verse. I predicted Ideal, Guess i was wrong :/

v/dough

[ST_UC]

Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.
-- multis are top notch, punch is great... great opener

It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.
-- ooooohhh, that w as sweet... nice transition with multis

& talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.
-- haha .. this was funny... but the punch wasnt all that great... still good tho

Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.
-- again good multis.. fuckin face, was as great... some cats just dont see them.. the punch was lacking tho

Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.
-- this was another aight one... when i say 'aight'... its still better than most of the rbl heads punches i call 'aight'

& while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.
-- c'mon now, this verse wouldve been better without this stanza

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.
-- lol.. damn with was nice... made me laugh anyway

Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.
-- ahh.. i dont like this one

Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
-- a dough... baker line... i wont consider how many have been used when i say.. this was another 'aight' line

Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
& start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.

- nice closer, decent but not near as hot as your opener


pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/
-- aight opener, anyone that knows how to write punches will get it, but.. it doesnt compare to tangs

ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/
-- this made me laugh a little

I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/
-- aha another one that made me laugh.. ive saw better from dough than this tho

we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/
-- funny lines, ok 3 skinny punches... they were funny, now im ready for something else... flow sounded nice with the first multi in line 1

edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/
-- ahaha i liked this one... something im used to seeing from JD.. something witty that makes me laugh

now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/
-- c'mon now... dont go back to the pic... it was a good line, but not great

look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/
-- youve made me laugh a bucnh of times... this one was good

I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the •••eler/
-- nice one, i havent saw anything like this before... OZ is an idiot for saying no punch... its as plain as day

thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
-- another hot one i havent seen before

understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/

nice closer, better than tangs

VOTE = I.deal

i dont think this was that close... Tang multis were better... and he had more lines that made me say oh shit. I thought dough couldve done better without the pic and the 3 skinny punches. both verses were better than most of the shit thats been floating around the rbl lately

Oz's vote shouldnt even count... peep the feedback he left... if he wasnt feeling this shit... id hate to knwo what he is feeling

[Sur*5*ILL]

he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

ROTFLMFAO!

[X sample]

word to ST_UC..

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin

rofl..

[theme]

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

One of the tightest lines i ever read online.

[I.deal]

This is gonna be close. 1-1.



Love is love fam, your a beast at this shit.

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Lets go, old man....


Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.

Alright opener, nothing great though.

It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.

Nice line, real nice.

& talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.

Alright personal, if its true. An alright line in all.

Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.

Haha, I enjoyed this one.

Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.

Cool line, good flip.

& while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.

Good thought, but you didnt seem to execute it right.

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

Average.

Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.

Nice.

Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.

Nicely using his name, alright punch.

Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
& start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.

Im liking this closer, using his name again.



Ohhhhhhh.

I.D.
___________________________________ _____________





http://www. urbanprowlers .net/tourney/pba2/tangible.jpg

We all know what this clown looks like but if u need a reminder, just put the addy above together...

pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/

Haha, nice opener.

ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/

LoL, I love when people get on the other person's looks.

I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/

Alright line.

we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

Another alright line.

edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/

Cool line.

now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/

Haha, liking this.

look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/

Nice personal.

I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the •••eler/

Good thought, not sure you executed it right though.

thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/

Lmao, really liking these last 4 lines, nice closer.




Both came nice, Deal though didnt seem like he brought everything he has. Both had lines that were like ehhh, but Dough much more consistent in my eyes, close battle, but Dough pulled the win off.

Vote - Dough

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

Tang:

Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.

& talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

rest were all decent...these stood out to me tho...

Dough:

pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/

we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/

thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/

just like Tang, the rest were decent...but these were dope...

the proof line was iffy for me to like, cuz i didnt find the slacks line that appealing, and the way you used the 2 of the concepts have similarity's...but you executed the proof line much better....

basically it was 2 dope verses, with dough having a slightly more appealing edge...more direct...seemed much more raw...

Tang you know the deal tho....get at me when this match is over...

Vote - Dough

[-Reason-]

tang..is that fucking boy

& while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.

dough is that fucking boy

thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/

lines would be serious on beat...

[Charles]

I.deal stomped dough

[Muti]

I DEAL

Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.

not bad opener

It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.

okay

& talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.

LOL humor good one

Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.

LOL ouch

Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.

eh

& while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.

eh..garbage like the one above

See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

okay..nice concept

Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.

OUCH...nice refence of last week

Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.

eh...to aight

Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
& start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.

Good ending

Overall nice.. had some nice concepts and was pretty cosistant.. had a few i didnt like.. Like the gun line and the art teacher line.. but overall this is better then the champs match I read.. props

Dough

pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/

good start

ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/

LOL..ewwww

I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/

okay..but redundent

we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

eh

edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/

aight

now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/

aight

look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/

lol

I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the •••eler/

okay good concept

thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/

oh really.. not bad

understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/

Not bad ender...

A lot of boosting yourself and the weight lines were boring to me. after the first one then the 2nd and the 3rd,. U get the picture.. Well you do obviously. I dont know whats up with the pics..I never liked them unless this is a diss your pic leauge.,. but anyway..Some lines were cool.. U started off nice but then fell off and then picked up..not to cosistant

To me Dough didnt come with what he needed to win this week and I would have to go with the castaway LOL

My vote I. Deal