23. Deadly Weapon 3-0 vs. 24. mnice 3-0

[Hating Mantis]

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[Deadly Weapon]

12-16,will be postin early.

[mnice]

You crazy my nicca I aint writing 12-16 for you..I posted first so match my 10

RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..
Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..
Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..
Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..

[Deadly Weapon]

D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles
dukes always spittin fake, an anyone could rip this gay
peeps started callin u Nostradamus, cuz they dont believe shit you say
now lets do some nameplay, drop the 'N' from this rookie
then change his name to 'mice' because he always runs from pussy
so believe what i write, an what i speak thru the mic
the RBL's like a thugs actions ...cuz no ones seeing'eM Nice

[ADubXJ03]

mnice

RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..

boo.

The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..

...

Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..

no.

Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..

nooooooooooo.

Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..

ahh, bad closer.

dw

D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed

prob already won with just that punch.

i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles

ahaha basic but funny.

dukes always spittin fake, an anyone could rip this gay
peeps started callin u Nostradamus, cuz they dont believe shit you say

ehh...nostradamus wasn't renowned for that...

now lets do some nameplay, drop the 'N' from this rookie
then change his name to 'mice' because he always runs from pussy

bleh...

so believe what i write, an what i speak thru the mic
the RBL's like a thugs actions ...cuz no ones seeing'eM Nice

wasn't feeling.

mnice came bleh overall. the punches in his drop weren't well thought out or very creative...and every single one started with "cause"...deadly weapon had two punches i thought were decent/funny, and some misses, but overall obviously the better verse.

vote- dw

[mnice]

ADUBs vote don't count he not in the league this week

[Residual]

whoa short ass match up guys.

Mnice,

The plastic knife line was pretty good for an opener, ain't know if they been used on Weapon much but cool,

The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..

no, didn't feel that. Thought you had too many punches that were just generic an' didn't hit real hard man.

Ghost boxer line too, wording wasn't too good an' unseen punches? I know what you's tryin' to say but a ghost boxer? I haven't seen those.

You a bitch to defeat? Hoe to victory? Naw man, that line was just bleh.
But the closing area 51 line was pretty cool.
Overall, some bleh lines, some ok lines, need to work on that consistency an' some of them concepts are frickin' weird.


Deadly,
opening line was flipped alright, not a bad start,
ouch@record of his internet battles, that's as straight forward as it gets, grimey yo,
eh Nost line wasn't that dope...actually you're wrong, people believe Nostra's shit...that's why his books sell so highly,
the name changing line was ok, kind of far fetched for a punch but aight, only works in text really,
closer was decent though.

Overall, you were consistent here, nothing really dope, only a couple lines I thought were pretty good.

Deadly took this though IMO, pretty soundly as well.

VOte=DW

[J Dot C]

mnice -
RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
ehh...ok opener...werdplay wuzn't that great tho...
The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..
nah...
Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..
no...
Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..
ehh...
Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..
weak closer...



Deadly Weapon -
D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
coo opener...
i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles
haha...basic but funny...
dukes always spittin fake, an anyone could rip this gay
peeps started callin u Nostradamus, cuz they dont believe shit you say
nah...peeps actually did believe nostradamus...
now lets do some nameplay, drop the 'N' from this rookie
then change his name to 'mice' because he always runs from pussy
ehh...kinda a stretch...
so believe what i write, an what i speak thru the mic
the RBL's like a thugs actions ...cuz no ones seeing'eM Nice
nah...



overall -
I got dw winnin this rather easily...his 1st 2 punches were more than enough to beat mnice's whole verse...soo...


vote=deadly weapon

1Ne

[FYIFB]

RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..
ehhh, way to use his stats aginst him an all but, it jus aint had that wow effect, atleast you was being direct tho
Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..
nah, already your half a verse down & nothin really stands out, maybe you shoulda spent alil more time on this?
Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..
heh hoe ta vic was pretty coo
Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..
word, iono, mixed feelings on this last line, alil basic, maybe coulda been worded alil better, over all you jus wasnt doing ti for me, punchs was thurr they jus wasnt right, iono what to say i jus wasnt feelin it
__________________


D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
heh, *giggles*
i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles
loool, he was askin for that 1 tho...
dukes always spittin fake, an anyone could rip this gay
peeps started callin u Nostradamus, cuz they dont believe shit you say
direct, way to get on hoim, line was ok
now lets do some nameplay, drop the 'N' from this rookie
then change his name to 'mice' because he always runs from pussy
lmaoooooo, witty, creative, nice
so believe what i write, an what i speak thru the mic
the RBL's like a thugs actions ...cuz no ones seeing'eM Nice
heh, yea over all you had the funnier verse, better more direct connects, the pussy line pretty much did it for you...yea

vote = DW

[Imperial]

mnice:
RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
----ehh
The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..
----blah
Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..
----not amazing, but theres some wit in there
Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..
----ehh
Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..
----nah

Deadly Weapon:
D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
----ok
i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles
----heh aight
dukes always spittin fake, an anyone could rip this gay
peeps started callin u Nostradamus, cuz they dont believe shit you say
----ehh
now lets do some nameplay, drop the 'N' from this rookie
then change his name to 'mice' because he always runs from pussy
----coo personal
so believe what i write, an what i speak thru the mic
the RBL's like a thugs actions ...cuz no ones seeing'eM Nice
----nah

DW's flow was better, and had more punches i was feelin. His verse was more witty.

Vote: Deadly Weapon

[ST_UC]

RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
-- if u wouldve somehow steered my attention to a plastic knife in the setup... it would be decent, but u didnt, so it was wack

The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..
-- again, if u wouldve used a metaphor that had something to do with a noose or something... it would be decent... the point u are getting to with the line isnt good... what u spit to him will give him a hangover? your using your setups all wrong

Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..
-- IMO "like" ruins a punch because it takes no effort to write it... your real setup was in the second line... and it wasnt a good punch anyway... i didnt like it

Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..
-- i dont get this one... no multis at all... you rhymed 'e' with 'e', this is garbage

Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..
-- since when does gone and one rhyme... and area 51 was aliens wasnt it? maybe ti wasnt... but even if it was it would still be bad

how did u make it to the top 30?

D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
-- already used more rhymes than mnice did in his entire verse... and a better punch

i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles
-- aight.. nice multi... almost made me laugh

dukes always spittin fake, an anyone could rip this gay
peeps started callin u Nostradamus, cuz they dont believe shit you say
--nice multis again... aight personal

now lets do some nameplay, drop the 'N' from this rookie
then change his name to 'mice' because he always runs from pussy
-- youve already won the battle... another personal nameplay line that hurt

so believe what i write, an what i speak thru the mic
the RBL's like a thugs actions ...cuz no ones seeing'eM Nice
-- you won


Vote = D.W.

[...Sherlock...]

Vote = DW in a landslide

based on consistency, even though you had a small attempt to play off his verse, which wasnt necessary, you outclass him in every category

mnice was not bad but lack hard hit punches, which is the main purpose of a battle, but keep at it

qoutes i like

D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed


i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles

[Deadly Weapon]

my votes

45. Mr. Skull 1-0 vs. 46. Narkosis 1-0

[Verse4tile]

dayum....DW took this one without a doubt...mnice u need to elevate alot if u wanna move up in ranking....ur punches were weak and some didnt make sense to me....overall DW killed u wit his punches and wordplay...need i say more...and if u try to not count this one on account that im not in tha league...wait i am.."verbalweapons"....so everyone knoes...

Vote=Deadly Weapon

[EYE-Z]

fair play dw got the wackest name ive seen in 50 billion years

but he got this

good verse toa degree

vote DW

[Yuno Alwin]

vote-deadly weapon....


D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
i spit deep verses, while this nerds a beginner n shallow
an im NOT losing to a geek that keeps records of his internet battles


for some reason i found that funny....^

and...

RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..


u kinda lost credibility wit this^

[Vulgar]

i really wasnt feelin' mnice too much...that hoe line was coo but his verse was kind of borin' me...D.W shit was coo...that pussy line had me rollin'...this battle is mad lopsided..

vote=D.W.

[ENVY]

RBLs gotten soft..are emcees watching seven heaven?..
Cause since when is a plastic knife a deadly weapon..
ok.

The drunk..HA..compared to me you is plain sober..
Cause what I spit to ya..will give you a hang over..
nah.

Last battles..if they was real..oponents would be clean..
Cause you like a ghost boxer..your punches is unseen..
nah.

Your battle outcomes..make you look like a slut to me..
Cause you a bitch to defeat as I'm a hoe to victory..
no.

Don't even belong in these ranks..next week you gone..
Cause Deadly weapon should be kept in area 51..
nah.



D.Wep rocks the planet, top knotch, settin its standard
while mnice fell in the wack category, n broke his neck when he landed
nice. You won with just the opener.

V. Deadly Weapon

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[Dough Jordan]

vote=DW

his wordplay was crazy, I really got alotta respect for you man, I feel ur on a level and ready to take next prolly.....ur concepts are tough and I'm feeling ur style

mnice was pretty good, he had some dope name flips but I feel DW took this one