27. Oliver Twist 4-1 28. Kronik 3-0

[headless verseman]

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[Oliver Twist]

18 yo
41. ibeechu farensquare 2-0 vs. 42. RICO 5-4
43. ghetto smurf 4-3 vs. 44. ZhangLiao 2-1
39. Cryogen 2-0 vs. 40. No shit sherlock 2-0
RBL Contendership: 3. thasynthesis 9-1 4. doc richards 7-0

[KroniK]

done

[KroniK]

depict ya wack two cents, prophets will slay ya best bet/
cause wit ya mic skills it's obvious you'll stay text head/
u got it twisted if ya think u'll win..ya thesis is borin, dude/
plus im like dominatrix shops...I got a beatin in store for u/
i'm smashin this nerd witta bat just for birthin his raps/
not even brits atta dentist office need mo work on their caps/
ya one liner's are make up..ya blood doesn't flow man/
cuz basically twist a queer...like homosexual slow jams/
you've been nameless for two years..git rocked n such/
the only mixtape appearence u made was wit scotch n duct/
tarnish my record? ha!-ya punches are bland, cuz/
just consider me for an O like the delahoya fan club/
I turn mics on n flip, this biter turn mics on n flips/
ur verse is the reason the thumbs down icon exists/
yer spewin's repetitive..it's death by fluent sentences/
cos like canine ultra sounds the bitch in u is evident/
nothin real about u..ya fake as fuck an i'll be specific/
could put shady in a preztel hold n still not leave em twisted/

[Oliver Twist]

Ayyo


There'll be no mournin for u, look I'm warnin ya dude
I dont slang but I'll put kronik in a bag like coroners do
Don't get ya hopes too high or I'ma be a proud hero
If u floatin on clound 9 ull get sunk to the ground, zero
Ima break all ya limbs when I'm bendin em together
Ull need emergency fourcasts like inclimate weather
Ya fate is just a notorious mural of how ya wit stinks
Cuz the writing on the wallace saying u missed big
Boned ya wife & ate her out, doggy she got the best style
So my taste in women is my tongue ticklin ya step child
U owe money for usin my flows, dummy
I should have a book signing for all the novel ideas u stole from me
I wont dispute yall hardly- cuz u rhyme unpolished n slow
The only time kronic'll blow is at a snoop dogg party
Im flowin renoun skill- ima prove ya rank is not worthy
Cuz u can't even top 30 in ya mobile home goin down hill


holla

[Hating Mantis]

over no shows

[J Dot C]

Originally Posted by KroniK

u got it twisted if ya think u'll win..ya thesis is borin, dude/
plus im like dominatrix shops...I got a beatin in store for u/

Originally Posted by Oliver Twist

There'll be no mournin for u, look I'm warnin ya dude
I dont slang but I'll put kronik in a bag like coroners do
U owe money for usin my flows, dummy
I should have a book signing for all the novel ideas u stole from me

overall -
I got oliver winnin this...his verse had sum wittier concepts in it...kronik had tha beatin in store line which wuz pretty coo but tha rest wuz kinda blah...


vote=oliver

1Ne

[...Sherlock...]

There'll be no mournin for u, look I'm warnin ya dude
I dont slang but I'll put kronik in a bag like coroners do

** good idea, could have been worded better**

Don't get ya hopes too high or I'ma be a proud hero
If u floatin on clound 9 ull get sunk to the ground, zero
*** i heard this line before, in like a mag or something**

Ima break all ya limbs when I'm bendin em together
Ull need emergency fourcasts like inclimate weather

***aight **

Ya fate is just a notorious mural of how ya wit stinks
Cuz the writing on the wallace saying u missed big
**wordplay is so forced**

Boned ya wife & ate her out, doggy she got the best style
So my taste in women is my tongue ticklin ya step child
*** some ill shit***

U owe money for usin my flows, dummy
I should have a book signing for all the novel ideas u stole from me

**coo**
I wont dispute yall hardly- cuz u rhyme unpolished n slow
The only time kronic'll blow is at a snoop dogg party

**Snoop dont smoke no more, good punch**

Im flowin renoun skill- ima prove ya rank is not worthy
Cuz u can't even top 30 in ya mobile home goin down hill


**aight **

Overall decent verse, 7/10


depict ya wack two cents, prophets will slay ya best bet/
cause wit ya mic skills it's obvious you'll stay text head/

*** good opener***
u got it twisted if ya think u'll win..ya thesis is borin, dude/
plus im like dominatrix shops...I got a beatin in store for u/
** this my first time, seeing this punch, coo***

i'm smashin this nerd witta bat just for birthin his raps/
not even brits atta dentist office need mo work on their caps/
** who the the fuck is brits atta, **

ya one liner's are make up..ya blood doesn't flow man/
cuz basically twist a queer...like homosexual slow jams/

**lol, its aight**

you've been nameless for two years..git rocked n such/
the only mixtape appearence u made was wit scotch n duct/

**coo, i dig personals**

tarnish my record? ha!-ya punches are bland, cuz/
just consider me for an O like the delahoya fan club/

***nah***
I turn mics on n flip, this biter turn mics on n flips/
ur verse is the reason the thumbs down icon exists/
**some ill shit here***

yer spewin's repetitive..it's death by fluent sentences/
cos like canine ultra sounds the bitch in u is evident/
nothin real about u..ya fake as fuck an i'll be specific/
could put shady in a preztel hold n still not leave em twisted/

***first line aight, umm closer was coo**

7.5/10

vote - Kronik in a close one, i was feelin his lines a lil bit better, i still say i saw that cloud 9 line somewhere, but overall good battle

Vote - On Cyrogen vs . Sherlock

[X sample]

vote = oliver

you got it here man, just had more developed lines..what was the go wit the last 4 lines not rhyming though?? anyway...
opener was tight, inclemite weather was nice...

kronik..just a bit too simplistic..your verse was better last week im pretty sure..
it was an ok verse but it didnt really hit hard enough for my liking...
decent, but keep elevating..

vote = oliver twist