15.STUC (7-3) vs.16. Creatical (???)

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[ST_UC]

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...18#post8522818

[Creatical]

Check - I spit heat, you'll be the next to feel
While you always settle for less and still couldn't get a deal
For real though, I can understand why you shook, b,
But I pity ya rap more than college dudes still chasing highschool pussy
I bag dimes easy, with no emotions, always kickin' it rough
You're battling inside - cos you got burned by the last bitch you fucked
No more tough talk, enough dawg, get over ya' luck
When it comes to making up new concepts, we know that you're stuc
I manage to hate on you with awfully nice words
Young, you couldn't get a punch-in with a Copywrite verse
Battling Gawd? Not even a true man can
I leave more blue and purple rings on ya eyes than Tucan Sam

[ST_UC]

Im the whos who of the RBL... your a nobody faggot
i cant even diss your record, because nobody has it
your flow is weak, trash, its worthless, tasteless an'
u couldnt sell a single if it came with a payment plan
face it man, ill waste your ass, this aint a match dun
im blazin AKs and mags.. while u play with cap guns
On the comp for so long... hes a hermit
Hes gotta dangle cheese infronta his mouse to keep it workin
no ass gettin virgin he uses game in the worst ways
with a hit single, he still couldnt make it to first base
votes'll resemble these clocks hands when its done V
so when the time comes...
Hating Mantis: "Stuc Wins 10 to 1"

[ST_UC]

vote motherfuckers

[Synthesis]

vote = STUC..

by a hair...cre man, i expected MUCH better from you, guess u mad rusty....and stuc, u used some old concepts that kinda made me dislike ur verse....

lmao@cre's burned line..shit almost won it for him....

iight battle..

[ADubXJ03]

cre

Check - I spit heat, you'll be the next to feel
While you always settle for less and still couldn't get a deal

aight opener.

For real though, I can understand why you shook, b,
But I pity ya rap more than college dudes still chasing highschool pussy

heh ain't nothin wrong with that...but funny.

I bag dimes easy, with no emotions, always kickin' it rough
You're battling inside - cos you got burned by the last bitch you fucked

ehh ok, coulda been harder-hitting.

No more tough talk, enough dawg, get over ya' luck
When it comes to making up new concepts, we know that you're stuc

aight, but im sure stuc gets stuff like this all the time.

I manage to hate on you with awfully nice words
Young, you couldn't get a punch-in with a Copywrite verse

ehh, ok i guess.

Battling Gawd???? Not even a true man can
I leave more blue and purple rings on ya eyes than Tucan Sam

ok, but wasn't feelin as a closer.

stuc

Im the whos who of the RBL... your a nobody faggot
i cant even diss your record, because nobody has it

decent opener.

your flow is weak, trash, its worthless, tasteless an'
u couldnt sell a single if it came with a payment plan

heh aight.

face it man, ill waste your ass, this aint a match dun
im blazin AKs and mags.. while u play with cap guns

boo.

On the comp for so long... hes a hermit
Hes gotta dangle cheese infronta his mouse to keep it workin

this didn't appeal. the mouse wordplay is just so played, even a flip like this seems bleh.

no ass gettin virgin he uses game in the worst ways
with a hit single, he still couldnt make it to first base

heh i like it.

votes'll resemble these clocks hands when its done V
so when the time comes...
Hating Mantis: "Stuc Wins 10 to 1"

coo closer.

i've seen stuc come better, and i've heard of cre...but it seemed like this was half-assed by both. very hit and miss with the punches, a few played concepts, some ok stuff...i think stuc edged this. both had a lot of lines i tried to like, but stuc had a few that i thought were cool right off...like his closer, pretty original shit.

vote- stuc

[Yuno Alwin]

Stuc was tight... I dont know what happend to creatical....i thought you was better than that, guess you been gone too long or something...but whateva

vote-Stuc <-- wha da hell does that stand for anyway??

[Ol' Shady]

shit,

I had to read both verses a couple times just to figure it out..
it was close.. in my mind

had cre come with a little more creativity i might have given him the vote..
but, ST UC came with more heat, more originality.. i was feelin a lot of the lines

both wrote solid verses.. but ST UC took it with a bit more creativity..


vote= ST UC

[Deadly Weapon]

Check - I spit heat, you'll be the next to feel
While you always settle for less and still couldn't get a deal
didnt like

For real though, I can understand why you shook, b,
But I pity ya rap more than college dudes still chasing highschool pussy
ehhh...was 'aight' ..

I bag dimes easy, with no emotions, always kickin' it rough
You're battling inside - cos you got burned by the last bitch you fucked
wasnt feeling this one either

No more tough talk, enough dawg, get over ya' luck
When it comes to making up new concepts, we know that you're stuc
i see the nameplay, didnt seem effective though

I manage to hate on you with awfully nice words
Young, you couldn't get a punch-in with a Copywrite verse
blah..

Battling Gawd???? Not even a true man can
I leave more blue and purple rings on ya eyes than Tucan Sam
nice closer




Im the whos who of the RBL... your a nobody faggot
i cant even diss your record, because nobody has it
nice, straight to the point..

your flow is weak, trash, its worthless, tasteless an'
u couldnt sell a single if it came with a payment plan
'aight'..

face it man, ill waste your ass, this aint a match dun
im blazin AKs and mags.. while u play with cap guns
ehhh...seems played..

On the comp for so long... hes a hermit
Hes gotta dangle cheese infronta his mouse to keep it workin
hahahahaha....this would never work on stage but it was funny

no ass gettin virgin he uses game in the worst ways
with a hit single, he still couldnt make it to first base
my favorite line of the battle

votes'll resemble these clocks hands when its done V
so when the time comes...
Hating Mantis: "Stuc Wins 10 to 1"
didnt like the closer

over all i think stuc got this easy, more hard hittin lines an some of them were pretty clever,
creatical had an 'aight' verse, but i wouldn't quote anything in it.

[Creatical]

wack wack wack

[J Dot C]

cre -

I bag dimes easy, with no emotions, always kickin' it rough
You're battling inside - cos you got burned by the last bitch you fucked
No more tough talk, enough dawg, get over ya' luck
When it comes to making up new concepts, we know that you're stuc
Battling Gawd???? Not even a true man can
I leave more blue and purple rings on ya eyes than Tucan Sam



stuc -

Im the whos who of the RBL... your a nobody faggot
i cant even diss your record, because nobody has it
your flow is weak, trash, its worthless, tasteless an'
u couldnt sell a single if it came with a payment plan
On the comp for so long... hes a hermit
Hes gotta dangle cheese infronta his mouse to keep it workin
no ass gettin virgin he uses game in the worst ways
with a hit single, he still couldnt make it to first base



overall -

I got stuc winnin this battle...his verse contained a lot more witty lines than cre's did...his opener wuz also a very nice way to start and got me to laugh...nice verse...

vote=stuc

1Ne

[Dominic Bones]

ir eally wasnt feelin creatical verse i excpected more stuc got this one easy his lines were alot better i especially liked

no ass gettin virgin he uses game in the worst ways
with a hit single, he still couldnt make it to first base

i really liked that line so wit the better lines i give him the battle

vote = Stuc

[UG MC]

im blazin AKs and mags.. while u play with cap guns
On the comp for so long... hes a hermit
Hes gotta dangle cheese infronta his mouse to keep it workin
no ass gettin virgin he uses game in the worst ways
with a hit single, he still couldnt make it to first base
^^
this portion of the verse was dopeness

overall I wasn't feeling many of creatical's verse, I think he's beena rond for a while, but took a break, N is still brushing the rust off.. on the toehr hand st uc had some nice punches complex word play

[oatmeal lungs]

what is stuc talking about dropping singles, still dissin peoples records in the RBL, dissing a dude who been on the net so long yet he been here for years.

how is stuc winning any battles, proves competition kinda tight round here. roflz


his closer was more stretched the the rolls on users stomach and sur. lines

[ST_UC]

^^^ im sayin hes on the net for such long periods of time(hence "hes a hermit")... not how long ago he registered... you fucking idiot. get out of my thread if you arent going to vote

[oatmeal lungs]

you registered before him

[ST_UC]

Originally Posted by oatmeal lungs

you registered before him

notice...

i said " not how long ago he registered... you fucking idiot. get out of my thread if you arent going to vote"

NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT

[Henry Flatfish]

lol cre got himself creaticalled...battling inside was the only line i was really feeling, the rest was bland and predictable...but then again....stuc had NO lines i liked..

so yeah...sucky battle..but cre wins... his blahness was better than stuc's blahness as well..


vote - cre

[Hating Mantis]

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