7. poeticSCRIPT 6-0 v. 8. Tri Optix 11-5

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Old 03-01-2004, 06:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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7. poeticSCRIPT 6-0 v. 8. Tri Optix 11-5

(RBL Rules and Regulations Guidelines)

Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
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Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

-BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT EASTERN! (meaning if you post at 12:01am, you are late)
-VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN (late votes will not count)

-Each battler is allowed to up their threads TWICE in a match.
before the battler(s) is penalized -1 vote for each up after the
entitled amount. Upping: (vote count,discussing votes,or just
replying period)

-You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links
in your "check in" posts
. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

-Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over
** In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets
** In a 4-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 10 Lines/5 Couplets


-NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.

-Late verses will result in an AUTOMATIC disqualification, don't
even care if it's 5 minutes late. Even if s mod late with closing
the no shows, the deadline will still be enforced.

--Closed battles are finalized. Unless the mod made a mistake in
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has been closed..you will have to deal with it. But../If the mod
just messed up something, then it's cool for it to be changed.
IF YOU BREAK A RULE, IT'S YOUR FAULT AND YOURS ALONE!!

-If you BITCH or it is DEEMED you are SWAYING VOTES. You will be deducted -10 Votes. End Of Story.

- In a 3-WAY Battle. If Both Your Opponents Show And You Beat Them Then You Get 2 WINS. If ONE opponent shows and you win then you get 1 WIN only!!.

- In a VERY rare occasion that there is a 4-WAY Battle. The Same Rules Apply. 3 Opponents Show and You Beat Em'. Thats 3 WINS. 2 Show and You Beat Them. Thats 2 Wins. 1 Shows You Get 1 WIN

- No Biting Rhymes EVER. If its found out that you bit aka plagarized someone elses work. Then you are Terminated From the RBL for good or until a mod sees fit to let you return.


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***If your opponent has been granted an extension, you too can use this extended period of time***

All extensions will be 24 hours AT MOST.

-NO 1 Sentence Voting
ALL VOTES MUST BE ATLEAST 5 LINES LONG.
Explaining Who You Thought Won Or It WONT COUNT.
My Motto Is If You Cant Vote Right Why Should You Deserve Someone Voting On Your Battle
And IF the person who voted DIDNT explain his vote like he's suppose to then he'll LOSE A VOTE on his battle.
Yes. Quoting A Battler Counts As A Line But You MUST Quote Atleast Something From Each Battler. And THERE MUST Be A Explanation Behind Them.
Breakdowns By Couplets Are Still Allowed.


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Old 03-01-2004, 07:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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poeticSCRIPT takes it up the butt!
10, bet

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Old 03-01-2004, 10:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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changed my mind for the 3rd time

im in. 16's good.

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Old 03-02-2004, 03:41 AM   #4 (permalink)
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poeticSCRIPT takes it up the butt!
I changed my mind too. I only have time for 10 lines, match it.

Count this as up #1.
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Old 03-05-2004, 05:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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rushed..so blizahhh..

Im observing the PBA..waiting for the other shoe to drop..
While youre standing under powerlines in Phili..waiting for the other shoe to drop..
Last week was so close you almost had to cast straws..so,
How the fuck you gonna take my Emerald City, when you barely made it past Oz?
Hoe...You dont stand a damn chance against the Optix
Fuck Poetic..you dont even flip the scripts..just its concepts
6-0, against 6 mediocre emcees..bragging rights? hardly
Quick to end your streak like Campus Security at college parties
Man, your whole styles garbage..and we should be grateful and help him?
The RBL doesnt even say thank you no more..you've "worn out your welcome"..

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Old 03-06-2004, 12:33 AM   #6 (permalink)
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poeticSCRIPT takes it up the butt!
goddamn, you've been here 4 years and youre still gahbage, haha, oh and by the way - I ko'd Oz ;) lets gooooo

tri's worthy of daps now? naw i'll dead this rumor
...he only made it to number 2 cause user had a sense of humour
he gave him a chance, this dude let em' follow along
...and thats the REAL reason why username's no longer a Mod
what's this fag yellin about when he's openly gay
...and i've seen shorter lines in amusement parks on opening day
shits looooong as shit N i'll still fuckin hand em' his ass
...tri's lines started here N ended up in the fuckin champions match
N I dont care if its repetitive cause all of us know
...that voters'll need overnight kits just to fuckin' follow your flow
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Old 03-06-2004, 12:57 AM   #7 (permalink)
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PencILL takes it up the butt!
easily script wins this.......tri needs to pages to fit his lines in.......i didnt like tri's punches and i liked poetics more...better rhyme structure and funner/easier to read...vote=poetic
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Old 03-06-2004, 11:50 AM   #8 (permalink)
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TRi...
I've read better material from u in the past...the shoe bid couldve been done better, OZ line failed cuz he won last week by KO, concepts line has been done but it fit ok as a personal, streak line is ok, ender has been killed to death

Poetic...
didnt really like intro, follow up was ok, fair/ long line was ok, champions match got a bit repetitive but ok, ender i liked

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Old 03-06-2004, 02:06 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Yeah i got poetic too.
Overall pretty good verse to be rushed.
Tri you need to shorten your lines.
i liked the shoe line. Just hard to follow your shit sometimes.

vote Poetic.
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Old 03-06-2004, 09:19 PM   #10 (permalink)
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poetic
what's this fag yellin about when he's openly gay
...and i've seen shorter lines in amusement parks on opening day
shits looooong as shit N i'll still fuckin hand em' his ass
...tri's lines started here N ended up in the fuckin champions match

ahaha ... killed him ... i like these

Tri


6-0, against 6 mediocre emcees..bragging rights? hardly
Quick to end your streak like Campus Security at college parties

Last week was so close you almost had to cast straws..so,
How the fuck you gonna take my Emerald City, when you barely made it past Oz?
/Hoe


i liked the 1st one.. second was aight


I think poetic won this ... flow was better, multis were better

Tri ... why do u still use huge lines when everyone hits u with hard disses about it ... youve got to be able to write short ones... are u just too lazy to take the time to word it into a shorter line?

anyway vote = poetic
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Im observing the PBA..waiting for the other shoe to drop..
While youre standing under powerlines in Phili..waiting for the other shoe to drop..
WTF?...trash
Last week was so close you almost had to cast straws..so,
How the fuck you gonna take my Emerald City, when you barely made it past Oz?
....
Hoe...You dont stand a damn chance against the Optix
Fuck Poetic..you dont even flip the scripts..just its concepts
ok
6-0, against 6 mediocre emcees..bragging rights? hardly
Quick to end your streak like Campus Security at college parties
cool
Man, your whole styles garbage..and we should be grateful and help him?
The RBL doesnt even say thank you no more..you've "worn out your welcome"..
your best line. Good closer



tri's worthy of daps now? naw i'll dead this rumor
...he only made it to number 2 cause user had a sense of humour
lol
he gave him a chance, this dude let em' follow along
...and thats the REAL reason why username's no longer a Mod
nice follow-up
what's this fag yellin about when he's openly gay
...and i've seen shorter lines in amusement parks on opening day
emmm...
shits looooong as shit N i'll still fuckin hand em' his ass
...tri's lines started here N ended up in the fuckin champions match
not hard enough
N I dont care if its repetitive cause all of us know
...that voters'll need overnight kits just to fuckin' follow your flow
cool closer


This was a weak top ten matchup. Tri was a lil' difficult to follow in places, and too many of his punches didn't connect. I was actually disappointed. Script was descent, had alot of consistency and flow. Thought he slacked off a bit at the end.

But, no question...

vote=PoeticScript
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Old 03-07-2004, 06:12 PM   #12 (permalink)
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like I said, Rushed. I wasnt even supposed to be here this week..

but obviously people dont pay attention.

be easy.
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Old 03-07-2004, 07:25 PM   #13 (permalink)
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vote = script

i didnt likke the "shits shitty" in your verse, for some reason it made me angry at the flow..but that made no difference, lol, loved the championship match line, verse was iight...eh

tri, coulda got tighter, i was feelin ur concepts, but ur shit shoulda been harder, and re-worded...sorry duke
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Tri Optix-
Oz line coo. Nothing really standout.

po-
shits looooong as shit N i'll still fuckin hand em' his ass
...tri's lines started here N ended up in the fuckin champions match
N I dont care if its repetitive cause all of us know
...that voters'll need overnight kits just to fuckin' follow your flow
--ha

Tri was average, expected more. Po did enough to get the win, flow was water.

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