17. Raphaeill 13-5 v. 18. the synthesis 6-1

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Old 03-01-2004, 06:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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17. Raphaeill 13-5 v. 18. the synthesis 6-1

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Old 03-01-2004, 06:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Rhymeageddon takes it up the butt!
i'm amazed & it seems bleek, the recycling -just drop it....
cuz You use the same cliches everyweek, & still can't word, for SHIT!!
i'll bring flames, but he's got nothing for me
when it's a dawg eat dawg world, & well, syn's my fucking homay
i persuaded him to wear a life jacket, but i found him shoutin..
cuz rhyme's throwin enough rapid's, for this fucking clown to drown in
syn talks alot of bullshit, & some strike you all....
so here's another 15 stories, just one for every flight you'll fall
when i was plausable, yea u beat me but listen, hold on
peeps were only saying syns verse was plausable, if it was written in 01'
nah really yo^.. they think ur dope, but i'm never heard...
& i'll only say that possibly he is..... the fucking worst i've ever read.
i'm known to chop my victims, & got a name for stoppin hoes..
i'll even have the voters shout more Bones!! like it's another game of dominoes
this was written in maybe 10 minutes yo, & it's shit that ya dread
see, if i can name this battle after any movie, it'd have to be, "Quick & the Dead"


done and dusted
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Old 03-01-2004, 07:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Personals? lol..

Rapheill, Rhyme, Rhymageddon..whatever..


i spray tech's, i break necks, bitch! a geek wit balls?..
naw son, this is pointless, since i already beat u, Plause.
Raphi, come on, never mention ur fame around son..
ur not an artist, just cause ur names soundin like one.
your confident, im happy that u think ur ill, its groovy.
but who comes up wit names offa' Bruce Willis movies?
Rhyme, ur over rated, Syn's here 'n showin its true..
shit man, u got a name for something u dont even do.
.
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enough name punches, its bullets - this herbs gay..
u got quotes, but dey come wit that bullshit wordplay.
first fuzzy peaches, then you lost to Resin and Idol..
did ranks..
then battlin Syn again? how long you been suicidal?
this match is mine, your girls here gettin cock, yup..
so if UR pullin it out, its so ur moms dont get knocked up.
im loc'n, ya toasted, wit no effort ima bitch this geek..
i wonder how many ^'s gonna go in ur shit this week.
i seen your pic, i'll just say that im happy your not me..
u'll be on TV one day, in Germany marchin with Nazi's!


goodluck homie
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Old 03-01-2004, 07:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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v=rhyme
i felt this was a pretty much even battle....lol at both droppin so early haha...i liked rhymes opener and the rapids line while syn had some good ones as well but i thought rhyme stayed more consistant throughout the verse as i thout syn was very inconsistant with a good line here and shitty one there
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Old 03-02-2004, 08:52 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 03-02-2004, 01:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Rhymeageddon -

i'm amazed & it seems bleek, the recycling -just drop it....
cuz You use the same cliches everyweek, & still can't word, for SHIT!!
ok opener...nuthin special...
i'll bring flames, but he's got nothing for me
when it's a dawg eat dawg world, & well, syn's my fucking homay
coo...coulda been werded better tho...
i persuaded him to wear a life jacket, but i found him shoutin..
cuz rhyme's throwin enough rapid's, for this fucking clown to drown in
ehh...
syn talks alot of bullshit, & some strike you all....
so here's another 15 stories, just one for every flight you'll fall
ok...
when i was plausable, yea u beat me but listen, hold on
peeps were only saying syns verse was plausable, if it was written in 01'
ehh...
nah really yo^.. they think ur dope, but i'm never heard...
& i'll only say that possibly he is..... the fucking worst i've ever read.
I dunno but I can't rhyme heard and read...
i'm known to chop my victims, & got a name for stoppin hoes..
i'll even have the voters shout more Bones!! like it's another game of dominoes
good concept but needs rewerdin...
this was written in maybe 10 minutes yo, & it's shit that ya dread
see, if i can name this battle after any movie, it'd have to be, "Quick & the Dead"
ok closer...



Synthesis -

i spray tech's, i break necks, bitch! a geek wit balls?..
naw son, this is pointless, since i already beat u, Plause.
weak opener...
Raphi, come on, never mention ur fame around son..
ur not an artist, just cause ur names soundin like one.
haha...coo...
your confident, im happy that u think ur ill, its groovy.
but who comes up wit names offa' Bruce Willis movies?
nah...
Rhyme, ur over rated, Syn's here 'n showin its true..
shit man, u got a name for something u dont even do.
nah...
enough name punches, its bullets - this herbs gay..
u got quotes, but dey come wit that bullshit wordplay.
ok...
first fuzzy peaches, then you lost to Resin and Idol..
did ranks..
then battlin Syn again? how long you been suicidal?
ehh...
this match is mine, your girls here gettin cock, yup..
so if UR pullin it out, its so ur moms dont get knocked up.
nah...
im loc'n, ya toasted, wit no effort ima bitch this geek..
i wonder how many ^'s gonna go in ur shit this week.
no...
i seen your pic, i'll just say that im happy your not me..
u'll be on TV one day, in Germany marchin with Nazi's!
nah...



overall -

I liked syn's 2nd punch...tha artist line...rest wuz blah...if he kept goin like he did at tha beginnin he coulda won...but he didn't...rhyme had more ok lines than syn...sum had tha potential to be cool but tha werdin wuz a lil off...still it wuz enough for him to get tha win...

vote=rhyme

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Old 03-02-2004, 04:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I gotta give this one to Syn. His lines appealed to me more. 'geddon's shit was good, but jus wasnt up to what I usually see him bringin. You quickly lost points with the dog eat dog line. Jus when I thought cats stopped usin that concept, you brought it back. Waay too basic and played for this battle. The dominoes line was ehh, but overall a decent verse. Syn had some pretty good name plays in his verse and some decent punches after that. The carat line was a pretty interesting spy. Overall, nothing spectacular, but still pretty nice.

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Old 03-02-2004, 08:59 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 03-03-2004, 10:20 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Vote - Syn

Lots of played out concepts. Both of your openers blew actually, I think Rhyme's only tight punch was the Rapid fire one because that was like the only thing I've seen original in his verse, all of those concepts have been used and they are boring to read, nameplay and wordplay like that just kind of blows nahmean, take a new approach. Synthesis came a bit tighter, I was feeling some of his verse but he did come a lot like Rhyme.. Rhyme was a bit weaker.
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Old 03-03-2004, 10:40 PM   #10 (permalink)
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i persuaded him to wear a life jacket, but i found him shoutin..
cuz rhyme's throwin enough rapid's, for this fucking clown to drown in

nice

when i was plausable, yea u beat me but listen, hold on
peeps were only saying syns verse was plausable, if it was written in 01'

this was written in maybe 10 minutes yo, & it's shit that ya dread
see, if i can name this battle after any movie, it'd have to be, "Quick & the Dead"

Those were the only lines I was feeling from Rhymes verse..everything else was too bland and the concepts on them were blah..decent evrse from Rhyme


ur not an artist, just cause ur names soundin like one.
your confident, im happy that u think ur ill, its groovy.
but who comes up wit names offa' Bruce Willis movies?
Rhyme, ur over rated, Syn's here 'n showin its true..
shit man, u got a name for something u dont even do.

Niceness..

i seen your pic, i'll just say that im happy your not me..
u'll be on TV one day, in Germany marchin with Nazi's!

lol

Syn had some nice shit..and then some blah shit in his verse..it was a decent verse..and he got it with it..I thought Syn was nicer on the personal tip, like clowning his pic..and he had nicer shit than Rhyme..close battle though

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Old 03-06-2004, 01:54 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Old 03-06-2004, 10:57 AM   #12 (permalink)
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up over shows, that got upped opver no-shows.

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this battle was pretty lackluster here. I felt that syn could've came harder, because homie that verse wasn't all that great and I think you knew that. Rhyme came ok just his ideas are forced as fuck. You gotta problem with that yo, but I saw what you were trying to get at anyways. Pretty decent verses from both, but I though rhyme came harder than Syn, and didn't come as basic as he did even though syn had WAYYY better flow than rhyme, but rhyme won came harder.

Pretty much sums it up

V- rhyme.
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Old 03-06-2004, 08:25 PM   #14 (permalink)
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An alright battle. Lares said it well, it was pretty lack-luster, both could have come with a little more than what they wrote. Rhyme had some nice lines, good personals, but everything was kinda wordy. Syn also came with some nice lines, a few good personals. Syn to me came a little more consistent with his punches. Throwing personals in here and there as well. A nice battle but both could come better.

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Old 03-06-2004, 08:59 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Old 03-07-2004, 12:48 AM   #16 (permalink)
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both didnt bring much this week.. i would have to say i was feelin syns alittle more.. the artist line was probably the best of the match

vote syn.
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Old 03-07-2004, 03:52 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Vote - Syn

Neither really tried, his verse wasnt even all that great but i dont feel rhyme came too hard either - though a lot of you gassed syn up waaaaaaay too much, a lot of that shit wasnt that good. = /
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i expected better from both.. esp syn

Rhyme
i'll bring flames, but he's got nothing for me
when it's a dawg eat dawg world, & well, syn's my fucking homay

this was written in maybe 10 minutes yo, & it's shit that ya dread
see, if i can name this battle after any movie, it'd have to be, "Quick & the Dead

i also liked this eye rhyme

nah really yo^.. they think ur dope, but i'm never heard...
& i'll only say that possibly he is..... the fucking worst i've ever read.


Syn

enough name punches, its bullets - this herbs gay..
u got quotes, but dey come wit that bullshit wordplay.

im loc'n, ya toasted, wit no effort ima bitch this geek..
i wonder how many ^'s gonna go in ur shit this week.

-- shouldve been worded to say "how much wit" but i still liked it

both emcees had aight punches ... enough multis... but syns flow was much better ... my vote goes to

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