23. Doc Richards 4-0 v. 24. Trapt Wit 8-5

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Old 03-01-2004, 06:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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23. Doc Richards 4-0 v. 24. Trapt Wit 8-5

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Old 03-01-2004, 07:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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10-12...busy week


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Old 03-01-2004, 09:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 03-01-2004, 09:43 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Drunk with power, thinks he's ill, truth ya just complacent
Leave Doc more buzzed than crack whores playin operation
Dick's hated, I bet you've never moved a crowd champ
Hell I doubt you even get wavs when playing in winamp
Kids trash, wait I forgot... You're supposed to be gutter right?
Well go ahead and blast the screen... to literally waste your life.
So lose and leave the site... And create another alias dude
And fuck 10-12.. I'm going around 22...
...after all we know your verse will help me more than it will you
Already excuses in ya check-in? Man, you just shoulda ducked
I mean isnt getting busy another way to say that you're fucked?
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Old 03-01-2004, 10:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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pssst....dude, ive been in the league 5 weeks, and operation lines are ALREADY played, but nice verse




A provin fag, it doesnt take a will and grace viewer to get these messeges
In his dreams he gets closer to 50 like his next week's win percentage
While were talking about your record, you're worked, tribute to personal fitness
Crewless because the only people in this world lookin for someone 8'5 is guiness
Not up on ebonics, so I have no comprehension for anything the tek say
And 24 this battle? next week youll be lingering around the high 30s like tek's age
Your wishin and hopin, but no way, give it up, youre just wishin the win
Cuz his wit's trapt with his flow, punches and concepts in the box hes been thinkin in
This fragile kid's on thin ice, my verse is the end, makin it worse
In the limelight? HA! silly, thats fluorescent, just green from readin your verse
So when I leave him ripped, torn, worthless and covered in tears
At least in the finale, i showed use this Wit's end without running out of ideas


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Old 03-01-2004, 10:45 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 03-01-2004, 10:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 03-01-2004, 11:16 PM   #8 (permalink)
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trapt..

not to be mean or anything but I wasnt feeling your verse at all..

that operation line was a bad way to start, yo..

the only line that had potential was that winamp line, but it could have been worded a lot better

doc had a tight opner..and that guiness line was dope..

i got doc takin this pretty easily..

just how I see it

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Old 03-02-2004, 01:57 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Drunk with power, thinks he's ill, truth ya just complacent
Leave Doc more buzzed than crack whores playin operation
nah...seen too many times already...
Dick's hated, I bet you've never moved a crowd champ
Hell I doubt you even get wavs when playing in winamp
coo...
Kids trash, wait I forgot... You're supposed to be gutter right?
Well go ahead and blast the screen... to literally waste your life.
no...
So lose and leave the site... And create another alias dude
And fuck 10-12.. I'm going around 22...
...after all we know your verse will help me more than it will you
ehh...
Already excuses in ya check-in? Man, you just shoulda ducked
I mean isnt getting busy another way to say that you're fucked?
ok closer...



Doc Richards -

A provin fag, it doesnt take a will and grace viewer to get these messeges
In his dreams he gets closer to 50 like his next week's win percentage
ok...
While were talking about your record, you're worked, tribute to personal fitness
Crewless because the only people in this world lookin for someone 8'5 is guiness
ok...
Not up on ebonics, so I have no comprehension for anything the tek say
And 24 this battle? next week youll be lingering around the high 30s like tek's age
nah...
Your wishin and hopin, but no way, give it up, youre just wishin the win
Cuz his wit's trapt with his flow, punches and concepts in the box hes been thinkin in
ehh...
This fragile kid's on thin ice, my verse is the end, makin it worse
In the limelight? HA! silly, thats fluorescent, just green from readin your verse
ok...
So when I leave him ripped, torn, worthless and covered in tears
At least in the finale, i showed use this Wit's end without running out of ideas
ok closer...



overall -

ummm...I think trapt had tha best line in this battle...but...tha rest of his verse wuz blah...doc had a few more ok lines so he gets tha win in my opinion...

vote=doc

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Old 03-02-2004, 08:43 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Trapt had lots of played lines. Ive seen every concept before except the closer. Coulda been worded better, but it was a decent closer. Wav line and 22 line one were OK flips.

Doc was more original. Opener was weak, but he made up for it in the rest of the verse. His personals were nice. I liked the 8'5 line and the tek's age line. Closer was coo too.

Overall, Doc had a couple more lines that i liked. He was more consistent and original.

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Old 03-02-2004, 04:54 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I got Doc takin this easily, very easily. Trapt's verse didnt even seem that good from 2001's eyes. It was just weak overall in any sense. That winamp line should have never entered your mind and you should be upset with yourself for letting it leave your fingertips. Doc's verse had some decent lines in it. I was feelin the Guiness one and the thinkin inside the box line was a pretty accurate call.

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trapt had aight wording with really bad concepts. operation, waste you life, basically all of it has been said before, and flipped, bitten, recycled, then re flipped, lol


doc was aight, no REAL quotables, but it just read better cuz his shit wasnt played, ...i dunno, kinda lack luster here


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Old 03-02-2004, 10:56 PM   #14 (permalink)
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trapt had aight wording with really bad concepts. operation, waste you life, basically all of it has been said before, and flipped, bitten, recycled, then re flipped, lol


doc was aight, no REAL quotables, but it just read better cuz his shit wasnt played, ...i dunno, kinda lack luster here


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Old 03-03-2004, 12:26 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Okay battle, not too strong. I liked Trapt's ending, it was probably his best part of his whole verse. It was kind of blah, not too strong. Doc Richards was more consistant I thought, and had the flow going along with the puns and multis. Nice job.

Vote: Doc Richards for being more consistant.
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Old 03-03-2004, 12:30 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Doc won...

Trapt needs to expand on his concepts...little more originality woulda got you the battle here...i enjoyed your flow a lot more than docs stretchy-type lines...but in general...doc had the better verse...

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Vote - Richards..

Trapt is to simple, all of his punches weren't that creative at all, but this was a closer battler for the fact that Doc Richards came so stretched it ruiened his tired ass flow and it took away from his punches, iight battle, keep it up boys. 1.
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Old 03-03-2004, 05:04 PM   #18 (permalink)
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lol@trapt wit thinking he's all witty when he used played lines. Good job that verse wasn't so great pretty inconsistant and that 22 line WAS LONG AS FUCK. You did a resin style on that shit which lacks creativity, and makes your flow WAY OFF. Doc came pretty good he got long lines SHORTEN THEM LINES FOO.. don't be like Tri hopdix..
Anyways prett one-sided match Doc just came with punchlines that basically overpowered Trapt which gives the W to DOC.

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vote = doc

basically the exact same reason that lares said .. the 'witty' lines werent witty.
.. doc had some nice lines but good lawd they are long. just copy what lares said into my vote, i feel the same way.
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weak battle imo but i see doc takin this.....trap didnt really have anything at all...alot of his lines seemed played to me.....doc was better but no quotables....doc just had better punches and seemed to be more consistant with them sooo vote=doc
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