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So Necessary
Join Date: Dec 2003
Posts: 263
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What a waste, Residuals banned for gayness, its truth no lie,
But if thats the case, You should be hated, and then crucified,
Nice opener..
Before I lose I'll die, So I'm killin you, Or better yet fag,
I'll Have Jeff Ban ya Username, Like ya posted the confederate flag,
Ehh, not bad, but not direct.
This whore stinks, and ya know ya got to be lame,
When we gotta post more links, that ya got in your chain,
Nice, lol.
Not stoppin me mayne, the shit you speak is played,
So your Death is Certain, Like the CD Royce dropped today
Alright.
& the rest
Call yaself a Poet, But you cant Write Scripts for the Street,
Not even if ya walked around, with Chalk Gripped to ya Feet,
Good concept but not executed right.
Admit ya defeat, Why ya bothering with rap, just let it go,
Ill make POE look like a joke, like simpsons halloween episodes,
Nice...
Your gonna die today, leave ya floatin in the ocean bitch,
Cause you get Served on Fri-day's, even more than Fish,
Ehhh, not working.
You'll never be rich, infact we shun your raps,
Your future's so BLEEK, Jay-Z is considerin coming back,
Again good concept, but could have been worded a little better.
Lets talk rap, I heard Cam'rons "get the yayo", its lame but its true...
Cuz even Cam'ron, will get to Cane before you,
I likes it.
No more for you, Ya wack wit ya spits, we aint seeing ya shit,
Cause not even an Actor would be caught, Reading From Script
Haha, nice closer.
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only thing I gotta say about' ya verse, it isnt winning
when all I read was wack, wack, wack
,......'& the rest'....was well,... worse than the begining
Lmao. Nice opener.
lets do it..
I got PBA to write for, its hood when I wreck you
PBA,..you know.....that same league that wouldnt accept you
Haha, nice personal.
rbl's at its worse, its blatently said but, see..
im a bad guy, cus now this kid wont be happy he made it to 17
Ehh, not feeling it.
Res got banned for bein' gay, silly...alright pause
cause really Res was the only cat on RM who really liked Oz
LoL.
im bringing tight bars, N this hoe'll get handled
you look like more of a bitch than the dude who posted this battle
Nice, nice.
tried to diss me N failed, so i'll punch when I hurt' em
cause your beating around that bush a little too much for a virgin
Again nice, nice.
list your flaws, ok pause....the people are knowin' em
had to make it Oz aka Oz just so the people would notice' em
Good personal, but ehhh.
this fag wouldnt show it, but he's a fag N he knows it
I wont make it to cane? fine, but your ass wont even make it to orbit
Good line, but not liking how you played off him.
your basic, stop- my lines are leaving faces dropped
with no flow, this guys the textcee equivelant to aesop rock
Not bad, not bad.
your fame's a flop, and this dude isnt patient
so poe'll get atleast 10 votes, like the new stipulations
OK, closer.
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In the end this battle was pretty close. Both came nicely, impressed me. Oz had some nice punches, few quotables, and an alright flow. Nothing personal, but managed to come nicley at Poetic. Poetic was funny as hell, some real direct personal lines. Some lines were ehh, but Poetic came funny and more consistent. So...
Vote - Poetic
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We buy our way out of jail, but we can't buy freedom
We'll buy a lot of clothes when we don't really need em
Things we buy to cover up what's inside
Cause they make us hate ourself and love they wealth - Kanye West
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