CONTENDERSHIP!: 3. Scientz 11-3 Vs. 4. OneDuh 8-1

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Old 12-15-2003, 09:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-16-2003, 12:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-16-2003, 06:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 12-17-2003, 05:47 AM   #4 (permalink)
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This niccuh loves my style...

u were never ill...time to be exposed clown!!

lets make final bids, im the one to take the title kids
n i'll be damn if i go down to a buster, like tyson did
the crowd'll never cheer for him, we dont need this guy
so they wont give "one love", we'd rather say peace, or bye
when ask'd who's losin, if u mention muah, ur mistaking
they'll be quick to say "a duh", like blond conversations
u made WonderFlow garbage, how'd i ride wit a joke??
before i row in crews wit u, i'll go off the side of the boat
after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew
ur the laugh of RM, in attempts to raise this cats fame
he bettered his EGO, by creating an alias wit that name
im just 'stating the obvious, cuz its a fact ya losin
winning was ur maine goal,
n u were lost somewhere in massachusetts
givin ya ass a brusing, u'll be right on the ground
lookin up n seeing stars,
like a romantic night on the town
how r u 2 in power rankings?, oneduh's a frail, bitch
u need a few more mussels,
n any other fucking shellfish
its isn't much to see, u were advised not to fuck wit me
now ur shyner's so bad,
they released the rapper, n took ur eye into custody
i keep track of shots, n i know this guy is shook
im sending some atom,
just to add another page to scientz books
get bruisings n welts, wont have a chance to shoot for the belt
cuz u cant make one's nice
wit nelly and the lunatics help
u got the looks of a gremlin, so ur supposed to die
i'd let the gun wet cha, but u'd just fucking multiply
transvestite, u got ya penis chopped for a hotter, look
so we know oneduh, woman...in and outta the comic books
when we fight, i bet u'll lose in an awful, manner
i'll give u sidewalk slams, till all ya concrete thoughts r shattered

will u create another alias after losing this match MR. EGO???

stop pulling bitch moves n signing out ya names after defeat
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Old 12-19-2003, 11:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I was never ill? damn, you're gettin bolder with those words
I guess the swaying rules don't apply when you post it with your verse?
Sci's obviously overrated, < that fact has been known
You're named after a subject & STILL aint in a class of your own
Just lookit ya sad scripts, I'm tired of you thinkin ya bad bitch
You needa learn the drill...hammer, screwdriver, and everything else im beatin your ass with
Cuz your content is garbage, one thing I certainly know
Is that the only things you're decent at is wording & flow
I'm hurtin you though, kid's just too lame to be the best
Sc won't ever be #1, & this time they can't blame the BCS
You dickrode Serge in your verse, don't say it's a mis-quote
Besides, I'm sure he'll come return the favor in his vote
He needs a fuckin saddle, the level I'm on is much higher...
So I guess for you that makes this an uphill battle
But I aint into suspense, this lesson is for ya
When I have you on pins & needles it's a method of torture
It's sur5ill of the fittest & there's no time for denial
^Don't think that means you gonna win just cuz you bitin his style
Why you fakin the rawness? this country nig's aight,
But I'm over-Raw.. like the fuckin shit that hangs in his closet
That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines
Don't pretend to be ballin, you're bankrupt so save it
Nig got a new lease on life.. but can't afford the monthly payment
If I bust the stainless, this fake'll get merked
I'll have his blood rushin so much you think it's late for work
Startin to hate this twirp, I'd like nothin more than to say this:
Ya verse is nothin to write home about like boring vacations
Star qualities? even with acting school you still might lack it
Plus the only Scientz guy on tv is that Bill Nye faggot

Yea, it's like that.
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Old 12-20-2003, 03:06 PM   #7 (permalink)
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rhyme. takes it up the butt!
feeling this battle alot, sci was mad funny thrughout most, few real nice line's...... the shyner was dope.. the serge lines were coo... was feeling ya verse tho alot..... fell off maybe once or twice which isnt bad..... oneduh again dope verse..... sur5ill, over-raw and ur opener i was feeling alot... stayed consistant, matched sci in everyaspect flow was nice.... i jus re-read both cuz it's mad close.... and i can only see 1 couplet from oneduh i aint like and 1 from sci, but 1 was also below par from sci..... i guess imma have to edge oneduh here.....

but mad props, feeling this battle alot.
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Wont have much about each bar cause its a long battle..each bar out of ten..most at end wins..i'll read carefully and vote impartially..

I was never ill? damn, you're gettin bolder with those words
I guess the swaying rules don't apply when you post it with your verse?
ok..5
Sci's obviously overrated, < that fact has been known
You're named after a subject & STILL aint in a class of your own
Ok flip,scientz n school bit played out..5
Just lookit ya sad scripts, I'm tired of you thinkin ya bad bitch
You needa learn the drill...hammer, screwdriver, and everything else im beatin your ass with
generic rm punch..feelin a bit,but too generic n common type of punch..5
Cuz your content is garbage, one thing I certainly know
Is that the only things you're decent at is wording & flow
nice,flowed nicely...6
I'm hurtin you though, kid's just too lame to be the best
Sc won't ever be #1, & this time they can't blame the BCS
no-one calls him sc..so ehh..3
You dickrode Serge in your verse, don't say it's a mis-quote
Besides, I'm sure he'll come return the favor in his vote
basic..4
He needs a fuckin saddle, the level I'm on is much higher...
So I guess for you that makes this an uphill battle
didnt rhyme..2
But I aint into suspense, this lesson is for ya
When I have you on pins & needles it's a method of torture
ok..5
It's sur5ill of the fittest & there's no time for denial
^Don't think that means you gonna win just cuz you bitin his style
niiiice...8
Why you fakin the rawness? this country nig's aight,
But I'm over-Raw.. like the fuckin shit that hangs in his closet
wordplay came a bit stretched..and didnt rhyme,again..3
That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines
nice concept..5
Don't pretend to be ballin, you're bankrupt so save it
Nig got a new lease on life.. but can't afford the monthly payment
ok..5
If I bust the stainless, this fake'll get merked
I'll have his blood rushin so much you think it's late for work
ok...4
Startin to hate this twirp, I'd like nothin more than to say this:
Ya verse is nothin to write home about like boring vacations
ok similie,but punch is ehh...4
Star qualities? even with acting school you still might lack it
Plus the only Scientz guy on tv is that Bill Nye faggot
ehh..4

68/150

verse was nice..these breakdowns arnt holding back,cause ur both ill..so no favors..but in perspective..verse was average..

lets make final bids, im the one to take the title kids
n i'll be damn if i go down to a buster, like tyson did
Nice open..6
the crowd'll never cheer for him, we dont need this guy
so they wont give "one love", we'd rather say peace, or bye
not feelin much,but ok..4
when ask'd who's losin, if u mention muah, ur mistaking
they'll be quick to say "a duh", like blond conversations
Nice bar as a whole..concept kinda stretched..6
u made WonderFlow garbage, how'd i ride wit a joke??
before i row in crews wit u, i'll go off the side of the boat
Nice simple wordplay flipped nicely..7
after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew
sweet personal..8
ur the laugh of RM, in attempts to raise this cats fame
he bettered his EGO, by creating an alias wit that name
simple,but hits..6
im just 'stating the obvious, cuz its a fact ya losin
winning was ur maine goal,
n u were lost somewhere in massachusetts
Fuckin ill...9.5
givin ya ass a brusing, u'll be right on the ground
lookin up n seeing stars,
like a romantic night on the town
Niiice...feelin alot..9
how r u 2 in power rankings?, oneduh's a frail, bitch
u need a few more mussels,
n any other fucking shellfish
ok..coulda been flipped better..5
its isn't much to see, u were advised not to fuck wit me
now ur shyner's so bad,
they released the rapper, n took ur eye into custody
Lol....funny and hit..7
i keep track of shots, n i know this guy is shook
im sending some atom,
just to add another page to scientz books
Ok..6
get bruisings n welts, wont have a chance to shoot for the belt
cuz u cant make one's nice
wit nelly and the lunatics help
Not feelin...but ok..5
u got the looks of a gremlin, so ur supposed to die
i'd let the gun wet cha, but u'd just fucking multiply
nice,6
transvestite, u got ya penis chopped for a hotter, look
so we know oneduh, woman...in and outta the comic books
Niiiiiice.......flipped very well....sick...9
when we fight, i bet u'll lose in an awful, manner
i'll give u sidewalk slams, till all ya concrete thoughts r shattered
nice finish..7


100.5/150

Scientz got this easy...oneduh only had one or two killer punches,but scientz had like 7..and scientz got the consistancy tip as well...great battle guys..

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Old 12-20-2003, 05:52 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 12-21-2003, 04:11 AM   #10 (permalink)
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after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew

I was feelin that from Scientz alot, but lemme start wit Oneduh

Just lookit ya sad scripts, I'm tired of you thinkin ya bad bitch
You needa learn the drill...hammer, screwdriver, and everything else im beatin your ass with

I mean, cmon, this is just gay as fuck, im sick of you given sets of faggots doin these types of punches, its an old style, just bury it already, meaning the style where you just name a bunch of things in common and shit like that
"I wont just beef wit you...I'll pork chop, steak, and cattle too", dont know how to explain but i think you get me
Sur5ill shit,lol, wasnt ill since i already thot of it about a month ago, i was gonna use it in my verse if i ever faced him, jus saw his name and immediately came up with it, so u dont get any credit from me with that........seems like you just focused alot of your lines on mediocre concepts/fillers and flow.....then some tho, you didnt even rhyme, idk, wasnt really feelin ya verse

Scientz had a much higher degree of punches

how r u 2 in power rankings?, oneduh's a frail, bitch
u need a few more mussels,
n any other fucking shellfish

That was ok, Scientz just had more punches that stood out, and more consistency.

V/scientz, oneduh's was jus kinda boring really to me
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Old 12-21-2003, 01:24 PM   #11 (permalink)
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i'ma go wit one on this his punches just conected more to me scientz couldn't keep me interested though he had a few personals in there it wasn't enough to take oneduh on this one

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Old 12-21-2003, 03:11 PM   #12 (permalink)
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^^charles u idiot, just because shit dont rhyme at the end of the bar dont mean it dosen't rhyme at all

wow. dope battle

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It's sur5ill of the fittest & there's no time for denial
^Don't think that means you gonna win just cuz you bitin his style

nice


That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines

haha

Sci

after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew

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transvestite, u got ya penis chopped for a hotter, look
so we know oneduh, woman...in and outta the comic books

haha yup

nice battle

it was close boys

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Old 12-21-2003, 04:12 PM   #13 (permalink)
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dope battle

One came straight...some good linese here and there, pretty good flow, all around good verse & sci, once again.....WOW.....very dope verse, flow was on point, dope punches, u were consistant, wording was good, just and overall dope verse, so......

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Old 12-21-2003, 06:49 PM   #14 (permalink)
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I'm not as geekin over the shyner line cuz we all know that the rappers name is shyne, not shyner

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vote = Oneduh

more consistancy, scientz you dropped some hotness and your verses have been great the last few weeks, but the wordplay shit will get you, some shit was just a lil too forced for my liking and oneduh came with one of the doper verses I've ever peeped from him
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vote-Scientz

....... because he didnt use the "you know the drill,....hammer and screwdriver line"
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v - Oneduh

More consistent overall.

Scientz had the Maine line, which was pretty good, but not much more standout type shit.

"That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines"

That line was good, nice flip on a predictible punchline week.

Cool nameplays by both, but both could've been wittier & worded better.

Pretty cool for a #1 Contendership.
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Anthraxspits [7:07 PM]: a 1 line vote.. discredited my whole verse because of 1 line.. & didn't even mention my opponent
Joseph Q Castro [7:09 PM]: yeah that dont count

That makes it even at fours.
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