23. theFRANCHISE 5-2 Vs. 24. OleBuzzard 3-1

U S E R · 12-09-2003, 04:35 PM

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oleBuzzard · 12-11-2003, 09:09 PM

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theFRANCHISE · 12-11-2003, 09:36 PM

i need to default unless i can get a one day extension ..

you can even minus a few votes for this...

if not, oh well.... i thought i signed out..

oleBuzzard · 12-11-2003, 10:14 PM

Franchise aka PROOF aka 30 old rapper
you falling off bro.

yo son/
im so far ahead of my time...
before we battled, cats been saying you aint been the same since O-1//
sounding like storm-g in all the rhymes you drop/
you trace nigg'as perfect, oB goes outside the box//
could bring out the guns, but imma keep it music/
can't push back your wig, cuz old age beat me to it//
past your prime, and imma tell it blunt/
you no different from any other Great White that goes belly up////
the old heads can argue, that vet's raps dont suck/
but aint it a shame when Proof can't back that up?//
we can do this live, you'll be the next man to fall/
deaf kids in the crowd even notice you have no chants at all//
and after the battle, doubt that Proof will cry/
i know was you fitting to lose, so the outcome'll suit you fine//
so ill go as far maybe as to force some rap lines/
but Fran, i wont use weak punches just so we can match lines!//

U S E R · 12-12-2003, 01:32 AM

ext. granted

U S E R · 12-12-2003, 01:35 AM

uppin over no shows

theFRANCHISE · 12-12-2003, 08:35 PM

you in trouble dawg........

weather it's a storm, g or textcee I've beatin' all ask Gots
oleBuzzard you're just a Pirate... one of Seton Hall's mascots
typed your verse in a leotard but keep your fairy glitz barreled
bet you wouldn't catch my flow if you were Larry Fitzgerald
i don't mean to very rude but you dress real scary dude
it'll take a wizard to beat me.. and you ain't Larry Hughes
plus you need to pen multi's and join a men's cult, why?
cuz faggits like you are the reason proofie insults guys
oleBuzzard you bastard bet you're fearin' this hip toss
closest thing to a Mac is when he's smearin' his lip gloss
i work at G4 play Halo plus my flow is heavenly too
dumb f*uck i'll even beat you with a verse i wrote in seventy two

stay out of the RBL until you master flow and punchlines with multi's......

peace!

eyedeal · 12-12-2003, 09:03 PM

vote=Olebuzzard

nothing was really great in fanchises verse IMO
none of his punches hit hard
his flow was good, that was about it
olebuzzard had the proof can't back it up line
and the suit u fine line and match lines line
he was just more clever and thought out

decent battle tho, holla!!

Charles · 12-13-2003, 07:56 PM

vote - ole buzz

he had some nice punches,wasnt feelin alotta franchises,but he was straight.buzz had the wig line n chants line..they were niceness..felt he came harder,nice battle..

vectoreman · 12-14-2003, 12:15 AM

vote = ole buzzard. better lines, IMO.
both were nice, franchise wasnt effective on the lines. very weak, non hard hitting lines.

Tri Optix · 12-14-2003, 03:09 PM

ech

i dont know

this battle lacked too many componets to even list

buzzard had a few punches that connected

franchise did not

vote=olebuzzard

namix · 12-14-2003, 08:02 PM

theFranchise

oleBuzzard you bastard bet you're fearin' this hip toss
closest thing to a Mac is when he's smearin' his lip gloss
---hah, that was pretty funny i thought.. but to be real this isnt the normal caliber i seen you spit at, you are just comming off sounding a little rushed though.. i feel you, trust me, happens to me alot lol.. but still, at this point this is the only line im reaally feeling.. the wizard line was a cool flip, but i have seen a grip full of wiz lines in the last few months..

i work at G4 play Halo plus my flow is heavenly too
dumb f*uck i'll even beat you with a verse i wrote in seventy two
---hahhaha, i thought that was hilarious since he did reference that your like a old ass rapper, so it was a nice rebuttle for sure.. but i wouldnt even of dug it if i didnt read off his verse first so i dunno... still not the heat you normally bring partna..

oleBuzzard

could bring out the guns, but imma keep it music/
can't push back your wig, cuz old age beat me to it//
---haha, it was a nice flip man.. good wording with it.. i have seen similar 'ish before, but you had a nice touch to it.

past your prime, and imma tell it blunt/
you no different from any other Great White that goes belly up////
----reaal fresh concept, its just not good wording at all right here playa.. i think with a lil more work on the wording with this bar you coulda made it pretty dope, but it was aiight

we can do this live, you'll be the next man to fall/
deaf kids in the crowd even notice you have no chants at all//
----to make this work a lil better i think you would have needed to be more clear with your chance/chants wordplay that i think you were going for, but i wasnt feeling it that much just because i have used it before, i just wanted to point out that i could see kids overlookin the line cuz of your wording.. like i said 'kids scream 'dynamix, dynamix' when im packin stands // while ur shows are more like winning this, cuz u have no chants'... it just brings both concepts into the line a little better feel me dog? aint no thang tho, maybe you didnt even really intend for the wordplay lol.. but good thought.

and after the battle, doubt that Proof will cry/
i know was you fitting to lose, so the outcome'll suit you fine//
.....an older concept, but you flipped it with pretty cool wording..

overall: i dug your verse man, i think your getting hated on more than i would have thought.. I do want to say that i think franch slept on you a little tho, or was rushed or something, because he definately coulda brought fire to match yours pretty easy.. but i did think you had a nice showing kid, dont sweat the hate lol.. good stuff

vote: Buzzard

why? His lines just had better wording, and his concepts were delivered a little better, while not always completely fresh, he definately had nice flips to them.. i still am convinced Tfran slept on this match, but maybe thats me.. good shit tho guys. pc

lil hot sauce · 12-14-2003, 08:06 PM

vote- buzzard

ive seen franchise do better than that....but, ole buzzard hit harder..so.....he gets the vote

Calefaction · 12-14-2003, 11:47 PM

I felt this was a pretty one sided battle

ob - the wig line was nice, chants ant suit line was good too.. pretty consistant verse, me likes

fran - yeah you know you half ass..but this verse was just really lack luster..

vote = BUZZZZ

Scientz · 12-15-2003, 12:03 AM

Vote-Buzzard

came kinda nice...the belly up line was tight...and the old age joint was funny as hell...franchise didnt really have nothin that caught my eye...flow was there but the punches didnt connect...so i got buzz takin it

castro'DAMUS · 12-15-2003, 02:01 AM

OldeBuzzard def. theFRANCHISE

12-11-2003, 09:09 PM	#2 (permalink)
oleBuzzard tap dancing on your set Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Eastside G Posts: 530	checkin in 41. Dotsmith 3-1 Vs. 42. Shadowplay 2-0 67. Itzconsistant 1-4 Vs. 68. Dustin Urize 0-1 65. Break It 2-3 Vs. 66. Dust-1 1-0 27. Mac Detroit 3-0 Vs. 28. Super Dooper 4-1 19. Kollision 7-4 Vs. 20. Out-Write 3-0 11. Craven Moorehead 6-2 Vs. 12. Vyris 9-5 __________________ Baby I am what I am, I'm gon' be who I be Everything from chasing a cat to pissing on a tree Let me see what I gotta to see Do what I gotta to do Dog for life but keep it true-DMX Last edited by oleBuzzard; 12-14-2003 at 05:25 PM.

12-11-2003, 09:36 PM	#3 (permalink)
theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend.... Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 1,521	i need to default unless i can get a one day extension .. you can even minus a few votes for this... if not, oh well.... i thought i signed out.. __________________ "the most electrifying man in internet text/audio history" truth is, I am bigger than Ben Wallace's afro fully picked.... S.D. knee-uhs whut.............

12-11-2003, 10:14 PM	#4 (permalink)
oleBuzzard tap dancing on your set Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Eastside G Posts: 530	Franchise aka PROOF aka 30 old rapper you falling off bro. yo son/ im so far ahead of my time... before we battled, cats been saying you aint been the same since O-1// sounding like storm-g in all the rhymes you drop/ you trace nigg'as perfect, oB goes outside the box// could bring out the guns, but imma keep it music/ can't push back your wig, cuz old age beat me to it// past your prime, and imma tell it blunt/ you no different from any other Great White that goes belly up//// the old heads can argue, that vet's raps dont suck/ but aint it a shame when Proof can't back that up?// we can do this live, you'll be the next man to fall/ deaf kids in the crowd even notice you have no chants at all// and after the battle, doubt that Proof will cry/ i know was you fitting to lose, so the outcome'll suit you fine// so ill go as far maybe as to force some rap lines/ but Fran, i wont use weak punches just so we can match lines!// __________________ Baby I am what I am, I'm gon' be who I be Everything from chasing a cat to pissing on a tree Let me see what I gotta to see Do what I gotta to do Dog for life but keep it true-DMX

12-12-2003, 08:35 PM	#7 (permalink)
theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend.... Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 1,521	you in trouble dawg........ weather it's a storm, g or textcee I've beatin' all ask Gots oleBuzzard you're just a Pirate... one of Seton Hall's mascots typed your verse in a leotard but keep your fairy glitz barreled bet you wouldn't catch my flow if you were Larry Fitzgerald i don't mean to very rude but you dress real scary dude it'll take a wizard to beat me.. and you ain't Larry Hughes plus you need to pen multi's and join a men's cult, why? cuz faggits like you are the reason proofie insults guys oleBuzzard you bastard bet you're fearin' this hip toss closest thing to a Mac is when he's smearin' his lip gloss i work at G4 play Halo plus my flow is heavenly too dumb f*uck i'll even beat you with a verse i wrote in seventy two stay out of the RBL until you master flow and punchlines with multi's...... peace! __________________ "the most electrifying man in internet text/audio history" truth is, I am bigger than Ben Wallace's afro fully picked.... S.D. knee-uhs whut.............

12-13-2003, 07:56 PM	#9 (permalink)
Charles Kwelity Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,032	vote - ole buzz he had some nice punches,wasnt feelin alotta franchises,but he was straight.buzz had the wig line n chants line..they were niceness..felt he came harder,nice battle.. __________________ My boo guna work the avenue...my Nat'll fuck you up if i ask her to.

12-12-2003, 09:03 PM	#8 (permalink)
eyedeal The Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: GA Posts: 20,306	vote=Olebuzzard nothing was really great in fanchises verse IMO none of his punches hit hard his flow was good, that was about it olebuzzard had the proof can't back it up line and the suit u fine line and match lines line he was just more clever and thought out decent battle tho, holla!!

12-14-2003, 12:15 AM	#10 (permalink)
vectoreman i fit in all stereotypes. Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: bentonville Posts: 6,742	vote = ole buzzard. better lines, IMO. both were nice, franchise wasnt effective on the lines. very weak, non hard hitting lines. __________________ "I'd sell my soul, My self-esteem a dollar at a time" - Maynard.

12-14-2003, 08:02 PM	#12 (permalink)
namix u flip shit, i refine it Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1,185	theFranchise oleBuzzard you bastard bet you're fearin' this hip toss closest thing to a Mac is when he's smearin' his lip gloss ---hah, that was pretty funny i thought.. but to be real this isnt the normal caliber i seen you spit at, you are just comming off sounding a little rushed though.. i feel you, trust me, happens to me alot lol.. but still, at this point this is the only line im reaally feeling.. the wizard line was a cool flip, but i have seen a grip full of wiz lines in the last few months.. i work at G4 play Halo plus my flow is heavenly too dumb f*uck i'll even beat you with a verse i wrote in seventy two ---hahhaha, i thought that was hilarious since he did reference that your like a old ass rapper, so it was a nice rebuttle for sure.. but i wouldnt even of dug it if i didnt read off his verse first so i dunno... still not the heat you normally bring partna.. oleBuzzard could bring out the guns, but imma keep it music/ can't push back your wig, cuz old age beat me to it// ---haha, it was a nice flip man.. good wording with it.. i have seen similar 'ish before, but you had a nice touch to it. past your prime, and imma tell it blunt/ you no different from any other Great White that goes belly up//// ----reaal fresh concept, its just not good wording at all right here playa.. i think with a lil more work on the wording with this bar you coulda made it pretty dope, but it was aiight we can do this live, you'll be the next man to fall/ deaf kids in the crowd even notice you have no chants at all// ----to make this work a lil better i think you would have needed to be more clear with your chance/chants wordplay that i think you were going for, but i wasnt feeling it that much just because i have used it before, i just wanted to point out that i could see kids overlookin the line cuz of your wording.. like i said 'kids scream 'dynamix, dynamix' when im packin stands // while ur shows are more like winning this, cuz u have no chants'... it just brings both concepts into the line a little better feel me dog? aint no thang tho, maybe you didnt even really intend for the wordplay lol.. but good thought. and after the battle, doubt that Proof will cry/ i know was you fitting to lose, so the outcome'll suit you fine// .....an older concept, but you flipped it with pretty cool wording.. overall: i dug your verse man, i think your getting hated on more than i would have thought.. I do want to say that i think franch slept on you a little tho, or was rushed or something, because he definately coulda brought fire to match yours pretty easy.. but i did think you had a nice showing kid, dont sweat the hate lol.. good stuff vote: Buzzard why? His lines just had better wording, and his concepts were delivered a little better, while not always completely fresh, he definately had nice flips to them.. i still am convinced Tfran slept on this match, but maybe thats me.. good shit tho guys. pc __________________ Wonderflow my dick is so-long.. yours is more like hello

12-14-2003, 08:06 PM	#13 (permalink)
lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: texas Posts: 12,159	vote- buzzard ive seen franchise do better than that....but, ole buzzard hit harder..so.....he gets the vote

12-14-2003, 11:47 PM	#14 (permalink)
Calefaction Legendary Textcee Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: M-town, NY Posts: 7,453	I felt this was a pretty one sided battle ob - the wig line was nice, chants ant suit line was good too.. pretty consistant verse, me likes fran - yeah you know you half ass..but this verse was just really lack luster.. vote = BUZZZZ __________________ Text Masters Of The Universe

12-15-2003, 12:03 AM	#15 (permalink)
Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch! Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 908	Vote-Buzzard came kinda nice...the belly up line was tight...and the old age joint was funny as hell...franchise didnt really have nothin that caught my eye...flow was there but the punches didnt connect...so i got buzz takin it __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=320121 A-Status all day everyday...Stil'A Hustle Records...shoutouts to 71Sick and A-Stack Management "If i aint tossin chrome mags, I'll A.K.A. nigga...n i aint talkin also known as" -Good Writtens a.k.a. Scientz

12-15-2003, 02:01 AM	#16 (permalink)
castro'DAMUS Still So Fly. Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Toronto. Posts: 12,292	OldeBuzzard def. theFRANCHISE __________________ "The sun don't come out for many, Like Annie.. Half orphan, Momma never had an abortion, Papa sort've did... Still I managed to live" - Hov

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