15. Cryogen 9-4 Vs. 16. Retulen Reactus 7-4

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Old 12-09-2003, 04:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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15. Cryogen 9-4 Vs. 16. Retulen Reactus 7-4
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-11-2003, 08:29 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Jesus....don't worry, you didn't sign in to late, I guess I'll post...pz.
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Old 12-11-2003, 09:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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didnt have much time

ever head of a mismatch, im a lyrical cannibal
Found the bitch in him, with the rest of noah's animals
Cryo who? still repping the crew that I dropped dude
I'll bitch 5 times about votes, and still wind up beating you
So quit battling, your a fiend to the pen
This'll be your 5th loss so go ahead and cry...ogen
I hate writing for nerds,- but you down with it
cause that chip on your shoulder, is actually jimminy cricket
you wern't in last week, but your not touchin my steez
Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck
Cause The closest you’ll get to VICTORY', is at the strip club!
I'll grab ya spine and proceed to twist it dude
until your neck is all blue like a finished rubix cube
Spit? you can hardly drool, fuck whoever think this hoes better
Cause I'll Put more clips into your frame, then movie projectors!
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Old 12-12-2003, 12:08 AM   #6 (permalink)
 
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Cryogen takes it up the butt!
Ranked 16 'n movin', Damn this faggots truely..
In the lap of luxury..
He'd rather be in the lap of Zuchie..
You'll wish you was parentless, it's apparent ya scared of this..
I'm fixin' ta drop you more times than your parents did..
And it's apparent kid, I got daringess ta do it..
..Hell, just look, I used two bars to call you stupid..
The heads here hate you, and all of ur bars bit....
So many people puttin' you down, I thought you were carpet..
Plus this bar is funky, but it's the ode to hick in me..
I'll beat the tar out of you..and pave a road ta victory..
My punches are pop, but they leave the shifty shook..
So You'll hear my chin music all day, like a fifty hook..
I got my razor blade 'n knife, 'n slicin's what I'm good at..
I'm fixin' ta cut you, like the expansion team should have..
'n no one'll want this free agent when I damage this clown..
With skills as bad as yours, you got chance wit the browns..
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Old 12-12-2003, 05:37 PM   #8 (permalink)
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iight good battle, not great...

Retulen- you had a good opener, some good wordplay and 1 or 2 nice punches but u had 3 or 4 lines that were played n that kinda disappointed me a lil. Overall, not bad but where's the originality man..like cubix line, movie projector, strip club were all played and a few lines were ehh...just not feelin ur verse man.

Cryogen- iight not bad, i've seen much better from u..but this was enough to win it..the road to victory is always played..but u had some nice originality in ur punches which overfactored the other dude's verse. so, overall nice shit..but not ur best..pz

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Old 12-12-2003, 06:09 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2003, 09:31 PM   #10 (permalink)
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RR had some aiight shit. Seen part of them verse before, so, not as great as appeal. Couple of those flips I ain't feelin' too much though. Cryogen came aiight as well. Had a couple stand-out lines including the 50 Cent line. Flow was nice - I'll have to go w/ C on this one.


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Old 12-13-2003, 09:20 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Ret came ok/..wasnt feelin the cry-ogen or the bitch about votes n still win bars..
cryogens opener was niiice..and he had some straight bars to follow it up..retulin kinda fell off,n his flow wavered a bit here and there,whereas cry's was nice the whole way,so in all aspects i think cryogen got it..

ok battle..

nice verse cry..

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Old 12-13-2003, 10:20 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Vote cryone

Im feeling that line from retulen.. go and ahead and cry..ogen

but cryogen had the lap of luxary line along with a few others..

vote cryogen..

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Old 12-13-2003, 03:19 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Old 12-14-2003, 12:17 AM   #14 (permalink)
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lol @ cry's opener.. nice line.
retulen got outshined in this with only decent bars. better in all aspects, but it's closer than i say it is.


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Cryo who? still repping the crew that I dropped dude
I'll bitch 5 times about votes, and still wind up beating you
So quit battling, your a fiend to the pen
This'll be your 5th loss so go ahead and cry...ogen

ha, didnt flow good, but i jus found first 2 laughable, and next 2 coo, ya verse seemed fresh, until......

Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
prolly was you, already used that against some1, or used that against you

Cause I'll Put more clips into your frame, then movie projectors!
I already used that a month ago against Eyedill as a filler in my verse, that shit is played, rubix cube wasnt special, BOO

Cryo:
I'll beat the tar out of you..and pave a road ta victory..
only nice line i saw in his verse, carpet has Been used before
opener was pretty good, but after that he said apparent twice jus to try and make it rhyme good, it had no content, battle sucked ass IMO

v/Cryo, ret shouldve got this, but he reused that tour ret line and shit, idk, i jus cant vote for that
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Old 12-14-2003, 12:20 PM   #16 (permalink)
 
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Cryogen takes it up the butt!
it's coo.....considering I had 2 minutes to write this...didn't expect it to be blazing.....pz.

and yuh...I said apparent twice to make it flow better....but tru......
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Old 12-14-2003, 01:51 PM   #17 (permalink)
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To be completely honest...i was disappointed with this battle, as i have seen much better from both contenders..But what happened this week fellas?

Moving along...

Vote=CRYOGEN

As he came harder than ret...with like 2 lines that caught my attention...
I basically wasn't feelin no lyrics, so i judged by how the flow went.

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pretty close

im gonna have to go wit cryo tho...lines seemed to hit harder to me...more standouts also...ret didnt have a bad verse at all...just felt cryo hit a lil harder...the zuchie line was ill...and i also felt the carpet joint...props boys

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Old 12-14-2003, 08:04 PM   #19 (permalink)
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ive seen retulen do better, neither came that great, but....it just seemed cryogen hit harder

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Ranked 16 'n movin', Damn this faggots truely..
In the lap of luxury..
He'd rather be in the lap of Zuchie..
---BAM hahhah..

You'll wish you was parentless, it's apparent ya scared of this..
I'm fixin' ta drop you more times than your parents did..
-----haha, it didnt sound good in the light that you cant drop him more than once really, but it was still funny

overall: these were your best, i only point out things that either suck or are cool normally depending on the battle, you came pretty decent, definately can come harder, but that first line is hilarious, i liked the drop line too.. most of React's shit was recycled from a verse he had against me i just noticed anyway, so thats minus like five thousand points in my book lol

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ever head of a mismatch, im a lyrical cannibal
Found the bitch in him, with the rest of noah's animals
---lol, pretty funny stuff

So quit battling, your a fiend to the pen
This'll be your 5th loss so go ahead and cry...ogen
----reeaaaal played

you wern't in last week, but your not touchin my steez
Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
---hahha, where have i seen this before man? Dude recycling, especially this close together, really loses big points to me

Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck
Cause The closest you’ll get to VICTORY', is at the strip club!
---ok, your recycling alot now.. this was all used against me.. booo man :(

Spit? you can hardly drool, fuck whoever think this hoes better
Cause I'll Put more clips into your frame, then movie projectors!
-----uh huh.. lol.. so are you a big time recycler or what man? i just think its a sign of unoriginality partna.. i mean maybe this is a one time thing or something, cuz i dug ur style before.. but it loses major points partna


vote- cryogen, not even close to me since Ret recycled like 6 lines from a verse he had against me like 3 weeks ago.. but whatever, still some good stuff from him in the begining. pc
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